Mon Angelo (mon_angelo79) — 付けたレビュー

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This is considered to be an achievement of either or possibly both of the 2 factors stated in P3, "improving the quality of post contents" and "increasing action rate of high users".

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This is considered to be an achievement of either or possibly of both 2 factors stated in P3, "improving the quality of post contents" and "increasing action rate of high users".

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A story of Mr. A, who slipped into the filming business.
He's started everything. He's come to meet Mr. B, then tells about it to Mr. C. He creates films wonderfully.
I cannot stand the way of thinking, that it is more important to be happy myself rather than making everybody around happy in their own way.
I just can't stand it, for some reason. I do not know why. What would you think about it?
Well, I get excited.

Although its just a one and half a minute short film, there were many livery scenes. Which raises expectations for the longer version.
I see many English comments here. Is there any plan to show this movie abroad?

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A story of Mr. A, who slipped into the filming business.
He's started everything. He has come to meet Mr. B, then tells about it to Mr. C. He creates films wonderfully.
I cannot accept that way of thinking, in which it is more important to be happy by myself rather than making everyone happy in their own way.
I just can't stand it, for some reason. I do not know why. What would you think about it?
Well, I get excited.

Although its just a one and half a minute short film, there were many lively scenes. Which raises expectations for the longer version.
I see many English comments here. Is there any plan to show this movie abroad?

元の翻訳
UK

I received your complaints, but I received a cancelling request after we dispatched the item.
I can not give you a refund at this moment as the item has not come back to us.
I will give you the refund following the B policy. Thank you for your understanding.
Do you have any questions or problems?

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UK

I received your complaints, but I received a cancelling request after we sent the item.
I cannot give you a refund at this moment as the item has not come back to us.
I will give you the refund following the B policy. Thank you for your understanding.
Is there any problems?

元の翻訳
It was when what is called ice age for job hunting.

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It was the so called "ice age for job hunting".

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Nice to meet you
My name is go and I'm the one that purchase a <LOWRANCE MARK 5X DSI> on October 22.
Thank you very much for give me a discount.
Also, I realy happy that the delivered time was short.
I'm a import agent, and I'm thinking in keeping buying with you.

So I sent a mail to the address in Paypal, Pease check!
Thank you!

I hope to work more with you

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Nice to meet you
My name is go and I purchased a <LOWRANCE MARK 5X DSI> on October 22.
Thank you very much for the discount.
Also, I'm really happy that the delivery time was short.
I'm an import agent, and I'm thinking of continuing to purchase your product.

I will send you e-mails on the Paypal address so please confirm it.
Thank you!

I wish well for your business.

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It arrived in about 10 days after I make the order.
There was a greater amount of sweets compared to other sellers.
I also think that the price was better.
I'm really satisfied.
Thank you.

I'm was really envy when I'm tell a friend who lives in Europe.
Could you increase the amount of candy in specific product?
Thank you.

Thank you for the great service!
I tried to choose the assortment different this time because it is my second purchase!
Thank you also for the polite letter.
I will order again!
Thank you.

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It arrived in about 10 days after I made the order.
There was a greater amount of sweets compared to other sellers.
I also think that the price was better.
I'm really satisfied.
Thank you.

I'm always envious whenever I talk to my friends who lives in Europe..
Could you increase the amount of sweets in specific product?
Thank you.

Thank you for the great service!
I tried to choose the assortment differently this time for my second purchase!
Thank you also for the polite letter.
I will order again!
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I am considering making a purchase.
I would like to know the percentage breakdown of each of the product materials.
Is it also warm enough to wear in winter?
Though I know how musy you must be, thank you for your support.

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I am considering making a purchase.
I would like to know the percentage breakdown of each of the product materials.
Is it also warm enough to wear in winter?
Though I know how busy you must be, thank you for your support.

元の翻訳
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

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The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. This camera let's you preserve pieces of special memories in a beautiful gallery.

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Cancel Request

I'm really sorry.
I placed an order on the wrong item.

Is it possible to cancel the below item, which is order No.
I made the payment by credit card.

If possible, I would like to cancel it as soon as possible.

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Cancel Request

I'm really sorry.
I placed an order on the wrong item.

Is it possible to cancel the item below, the order No.
I made the payment by credit card.

If possible, please cancel it as soon as possible.