翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → ネイティブ 英語 )

備考: 写真投稿サイト（http://r-d1.com）の説明文です。googleでヒットしたときなどに表示されます。

日本語

世界で最初のデジタルレンジファインダーカメラ、R-D1。その特別なカメラできりとったあなたの特別な日々を、美しいギャラリーに残しましょう。

英語

The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

レビュー ( 4 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/24 17:48:34

元の翻訳
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

修正後
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories be left in beautiful gallery with this camera.

The wording was a bit awkward but yeah, good translation!

[mlinah_91]

Thank you for the review! Yeah I admit it was awkward since I was in a hurry and still a starter in translating but I'm trying my best! :)

newbie_translatorはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/24 23:09:08

元の翻訳
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

修正後
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of your special memories remain in a beautiful gallery with this camera.

[psychonyaku]

"Let your pieces of your special memories" is not proper English.

psychonyakuはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2013/10/25 10:47:23

"to be remained" is not proper English.

[mlinah_91]

Noted and thank you for the comments. I'll try to avoid the same mistake next time. :)

mon_angelo79はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/26 21:25:27

元の翻訳
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

修正後
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. This camera let's you preserve pieces of special memories in a beautiful gallery.