Mon Angelo (mon_angelo79) — もらったレビュー

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I could wait no longer so I am asking a refund. Please contact me once your done with the refund.

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I can't wait any longer so I am asking for a refund. Please contact me once you're done with the refund.

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I could wait no longer so I am asking a refund. Please contact me once your done with the refund.

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I could wait no longer so I am asking for a refund. Please contact me once you're done with the refund.

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An old house remodeled into a shop.

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It is an old house remodeled into a shop.

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Knitted Quilt Cape
Medium cotton quilt with a gentle warmth.
A soft feel and warm Knitted Quilt Cape. It can be folded instantly so its convenient for temperature regulation. Arms can easily go through by simply fixing the snap.

Front: Fully open with fixed snap, left and right pockets
Cuffs: Fasten by snap

Boa Poncho
Quick weave for that warm and fluffy feeling.
A warm poncho made from soft boa materials. By fixing the cuffs with a snap button, you can pass the hands through to wear. The entire lining is smooth and soft- feeling to the skin, even the tummy part is cute.

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Knitted Quilt Cape
Medium cotton quilt with a gentle warmth.
A soft and warm Knitted Quilt Cape. You can put it on instantly so it's convenient for adjusting to hot and cold temperatures. Arms can easily go through by simply fixing the snap.

Front: Fully open with fixed snap, left and right pockets
Cuffs: Fasten by snap

Boa Poncho
Put on instantly for that warm and fluffy feeling.
A warm poncho made from soft boa materials. By fixing the cuffs with a snap button, you can pass the hands through to wear. The entire lining is smooth and feels soft on the skin, even the tummy part is cute.

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Not fixed with the numbers but allow me to set it depending on the price.
Please tell if there is any case where the price becomes cheaper, just like before, in cases like 5 and 10 units.

Also,it's not part of the free accessories but I need about 30 pieces ,of 6ft HDMI Cable. how much would these cost?

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The number of quantities are not fixed but allow me to set it depending on the price.
Just like before, please tell me if there are any cases where the price is cheaper like quantities in 5 or 10.

Also, it's not part of the free accessories but how much would 30 pieces of 6ft HDMI Cable cost?

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As for the contribution contents, basically contributing to the reader's interest and what they need id very important.
Just like Facebook's specialty, how the picture's quality affect the article becomes a crucial point.

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As for the contributed content, basically contributing to the reader's interest and what they need is very important.
Just like Facebook's specialty, how the picture's quality will affect the article becomes a crucial point.

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I think potential customers,who belongs to a wide- range of classes, have an interest in Japanese culture but is unaware of [A], should be an object of target and not just existing customers.

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I think we should broaden our target market to not just existing customers but also potential customers who have an interest in Japanese culture but are unaware of [A].

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I'm grateful. Thank you.
I'm suppose to receive your reply regarding the order confirmation.
If it's decided, I will send the order forms to you on Friday.
As for the remaining merchandise, the deadline is still far to please conduct a full inspection.
Thanks for looking it up.

I'm sorry for the late reply.
It's about the translation of the video into Japanese.
Dubbing takes a lot of time so it might take up to December to finish.
I will notify you as soon as it's finish.

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I'm grateful. Thank you.
I'm supposed to receive your reply regarding the order confirmation.
If it's decided, I will send the order forms to you on Friday.
As for the remaining merchandise, there is no need to rush delivery so please conduct a full inspection.
Thanks for looking it up.

I'm sorry for the late reply.
It's about the translation of the video into Japanese.
Dubbing takes a lot of time so it might take up to December to finish.
I will notify you as soon as it's finished.