翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

スタジオに忍び込んだ、Aさんの物語/あの人が何かをはじめたんですよ。あの人がBを見出し、Cに何かを伝えるとかね。彼は上手に映画を作りますよね/一人一人が幸せになることが目的だっていうよりも、自分が幸せになることが目的だっていう、人生。そういうのに、俺はどうも納得できないんですよ。なんで納得できないんだろう。それについて、どう思う?/ドキドキするね/僅か1分半の短編でも臨場感溢れる場面が多く、楽しみです/英語のコメントが多いのですが、海外でこの作品はやるのでしょうか?/因果応報

英語

A story of Mr. A, who slipped into the filming business.
He's started everything. He's come to meet Mr. B, then tells about it to Mr. C. He creates films wonderfully.
I cannot stand the way of thinking, that it is more important to be happy myself rather than making everybody around happy in their own way.
I just can't stand it, for some reason. I do not know why. What would you think about it?
Well, I get excited.

Although its just a one and half a minute short film, there were many livery scenes. Which raises expectations for the longer version.
I see many English comments here. Is there any plan to show this movie abroad?

レビュー ( 1 )

mon_angelo79はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/16 18:00:52

元の翻訳
A story of Mr. A, who slipped into the filming business.
He's started everything. He's come to meet Mr. B, then tells about it to Mr. C. He creates films wonderfully.
I cannot stand the way of thinking, that it is more important to be happy myself rather than making everybody around happy in their own way.
I just can't stand it, for some reason. I do not know why. What would you think about it?
Well, I get excited.

Although its just a one and half a minute short film, there were many livery scenes. Which raises expectations for the longer version.
I see many English comments here. Is there any plan to show this movie abroad?

修正後
A story of Mr. A, who slipped into the filming business.
He's started everything. He has come to meet Mr. B, then tells about it to Mr. C. He creates films wonderfully.
I cannot accept that way of thinking, in which it is more important to be happy by myself rather than making everyone happy in their own way.
I just can't stand it, for some reason. I do not know why. What would you think about it?
Well, I get excited.

Although its just a one and half a minute short film, there were many lively scenes. Which raises expectations for the longer version.
I see many English comments here. Is there any plan to show this movie abroad?