Agnes Metanomski (meissa) — もらったレビュー

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Travelling through Europe together, both of us, should be good! It looks like fun!
If we, who don't understand each other, ravelled together, how would it be? lol But since we understand each other in spirit, no matter what happens, it should be fun lol
Just imagining it has been fun :)

Regarding work, the Christmas and New Year's holidays being the most busy period I only had 1 day of holidays... what bad luck ( crying.. )

Do not hesitate! I'll send you japanese stuff as well as the things I get from TC Racing any time :)

Christmas has already passed but ... Merry Christmas!
Let's make 2014 too a wonderful year for both of us!

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Travelling through Europe together, both of us, should be good! It looks like fun!
If we, who don't understand each other, travelled together, how would it be? lol But since we understand each other in spirit, no matter what happens, it should be fun lol
Just imagining it has been fun :)

Regarding work (the Christmas and New Year's holidays being the most busy period), I only had 1 day of holidays... what bad luck *cry*

Do not hesitate! I'll send you Japanese stuff as well as the things I get from TC Racing any time :)

Christmas has already passed but ... Merry Christmas!
Let's make 2014 too a wonderful year for the both of us!

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Since I have approximately 20 inner sleaves, this time I will offer a present.
For now it is only the picture attached bellow.
If you are interested please let me know.
As you are a fan of Murakami Haruki, and I also like this author a lot, I'll take a look at his works.
I'm looking forward to his new work.

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Since I have approximately 20 inner sleeves, this time I will offer you a present.
For now it is only the picture attached bellow.
If you are interested please let me know.
So you are a fan of Murakami Haruki. As I also like this author a lot, I have read most of his works.
I'm looking forward to his new work.

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The return merchandise has not yet reached my home. I will contact you once the parcel arrives. Should the parcel of return articles have to be sent a second time, would you please pay the shipping costs?

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The returned merchandise has not yet reached my home. I will contact you once the parcel arrives. Should the parcel of return articles have to be sent a second time, would you please pay the shipping costs?

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I tested the following URL's submissions.
The javascript for the display of old submissions doesn't work.
There is no management screen.
The following URL mentions the existence of a management screen.
There nearly no translation to english.
There are also a lot of small bugs.

The question is: did AAA test the functionality accurately before marketing?

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I tested the following URL's submissions.
The JavaScript for the display of older submissions doesn't work.
There is no management screen.
The following URL mentions the existence of a management screen.
There is nearly no translation to English.
There are also a lot of small bugs.

The question is: did AAA test the functionality accurately before marketing?

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When comparing data from a healthy group with no risk of arteriosclerosis to laboratory data, the etiology suggests that laboratory values for young people being low, and rising as people age is not the only possible occurrence. That is to say, I think that among comparatively young people, the outbreak of diseases like arteriosclerosis, hyperlipidaemia, and hypertension is related to something else besides acquired risk factors. There exist also theories with different frameworks, raised by different studies. Certainly, I think that the differences in the rate of diseases between Asia and the Occident could be due to anatomical differences.

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When comparing data from a healthy group with no risk of arteriosclerosis to laboratory data, the etiology suggesting that laboratory values for young people is low and rises as people age is not the only possible occurrence. That is to say, I think that among comparatively young people, the outbreak of diseases like arteriosclerosis, hyperlipidaemia, and hypertension is related to something else besides acquired risk factors. There exist also theories with different frameworks, raised by different studies. Certainly, I think that the differences in the rate of diseases between Asia and the Occident could be due to anatomical differences.

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English

Thank you for contacting me.
I do not know the cause, but the articles are in the process of being returned due to the expiration of the safekeeping period.
Once the articles are back, should I send them to you again?
I would pay for a special shipping.
Have a nice day!

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English

Thank you for contacting me.
I do not know the cause, but the items are in the process of being returned due to the expiration of the safekeeping period.
Once the items are back, should I send them to you again?
I will pay for the shipping on this occasion.
Have a nice day!

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Mrs Melinda

sorry for the inconvenience.

These articles if you contact amazon.com, instead of me, you can arrange something regarding a return of the goods, refund or exchange.

I shipped new and carefully packaged articles to amazon.com. I clearly shipped sealed new articles.

It is only my conjecture, but I think amazon.com might have shipped those articles to another customer, and having placed the returned ones together with still unopened articles, delivered them to you.

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Mrs Melinda

Sorry for the inconvenience.

If you contact amazon.com instead of me about these articles, you can arrange something regarding returns, refund or exchange.

I shipped new and carefully packaged articles from Japan to amazon.com. I clearly shipped sealed new articles.

I am just guessing, but I think amazon.com may once have shipped those articles to another customer, and, while judging the returned ones unopened still, delivered them to you.

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Un bon nombre de personnes obtiennent une euphorie de contact en suivant les exploits d'entrepreneurs, financiers, banquiers, chefs d'entreprise etc.., et quand ces hommes (ce sont presque toujours des hommes) sont pris en flagrant délit de friser les limites de ou rompre les lois, ils les appuient comme s'ils étaient des héros populaires de mauvaise réputation, des gangsters armés de stylos à plume au lieu de revolvers — des gars qui, malgré leur égoïsme et cruauté, sont au dessus des règles mesquines qui nous limitent.

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Un bon nombre de personnes obtient une euphorie de contact en suivant les exploits d'entrepreneurs, financiers, banquiers, chefs d'entreprise etc.., et quand ces hommes (ce sont presque toujours des hommes) sont pris en flagrant délit de friser les limites de ou rompre les lois, ils les appuient comme s'ils étaient des héros populaires de mauvaise réputation, des gangsters armés de stylos à plume au lieu de revolvers — des gars qui, malgré leur égoïsme et cruauté, sont au dessus des règles mesquines qui nous limitent.

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—The potential of popularization of electric 3 wheel taxis.
The hurdle for the diffusion of electric cars (4 wheel vehicles) are said to be the 3 points of cruising range, charging facilities and vehicle price, but 3 wheel taxis are used within fixed routes and do not require much cruising range. Also they don't need special equipement to be able to recharge from a house electrical outlet, their price is reasonable, so there aren't obstacles to them becoming popular.
Philippines being our main import partner and being a country that receives the main share of ODA support, japanese companies have high hopes of obtaining high quality materials and service.

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—The potential of popularization of electric 3 wheel taxis.
The hurdle for the diffusion of electric cars (4 wheel vehicles) are said to be the 3 points of cruising range, charging facilities and vehicle price, but 3 wheel taxis are used within limited routes and do not require much cruising range. Also they don't need special charging equipment since it is rechargeable from house electrical outlets, their price is reasonable, so there aren't obstacles to them becoming popular.
So from the Philippines' point of view Japan is the largest import partner and the ODA donor, and Japanese companies with high levels of reputation for quality and service capabilities have lots of prospects.

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Bienvenus à la section vacances de la course au Oscars. Le gros des achats est terminé pour les groupes de critiques. Plus de 20 organisations régionales,municipales et d'états, quelques cinq associations de presse et critiques spécialisés, trois entités exclusivement en ligne et la "Screen Actor Guild" ont toutes annoncé leurs lauréats. Quelqu'un dans un poirier a certainement été pris en compte. Comme la plupart des pronostiqueurs auraient pu vous dire il y a deux mois, la bataille finale va se réduire à "Esclave pendant douze ans" contre "Gravité".
L'anticipation précédant ces trois semaines durant lesquelles la course aux Oscars prend forme se dissipe en suffisance. Encore une victoire pour "Esclave pendant douze ans". Oh regarde, ce groupe a aussi beaucoup aimé Jared Leto.

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Bienvenue dans la section vacances de la course au Oscars. Le gros des achats est terminé pour les groupes de critiques. Plus de 20 organisations régionales,municipales et d'états, quelques cinq associations de presse et critiques spécialisés, trois entités exclusivement en ligne et la "Screen Actor Guild" ont toutes annoncé leurs lauréats. Quelqu'un dans un poirier a certainement été pris en compte. Comme la plupart des pronostiqueurs auraient pu vous dire il y a deux mois, la bataille finale va se réduire à "Esclave pendant douze ans" contre "Gravité".
L'anticipation précédant ces trois semaines, durant lesquelles la course aux Oscars prend forme, se dissipe en suffisance. Encore une victoire pour "Esclave pendant douze ans". Oh regarde, ce groupe a aussi beaucoup aimé Jared Leto.

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December 12th, at the Lifelong Learning Center of Yamato city, Kanagawa, the "Exhibitions Seminar" opened. Organizer is the Industrial Activity Division of the Citizens Economics Department of Yamato City.

In Yamato, a project for "Industrial Technological Training", aimed at small and medium enterprises and small shop managers with the goal to better their capacity at technological development and management, is being carried out, this year, it is a series of exhibitions and other events titled "Exhibitions Seminar", about client acquisition and market expansion, targeting exhibiting industrials, and offering the know-how to guide the exhibition to success. It's the first time such a subject is offered.

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December 12th, at the Lifelong Learning Center of Yamato city, Kanagawa, the "Exhibitions Seminar" was held. Organizer is the Industrial Activity Division of the Citizens Economics Department of Yamato City.

In Yamato, a project for "Industrial Technological Training", aimed at small and medium enterprises and small shop managers with the goal to better their capacity at technological development and management, is being carried out, this year, it is a series of exhibitions and other events titled "Exhibitions Seminar", about client acquisition and market expansion, targeting exhibiting industrial, and offering the know-how to guide the exhibition to success. It's the first time such a subject is offered.

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Seeing as in this period deliveries are numerous, I am contacting you regarding your hope of a fast delivery.
Please understand that it will not be possible to deliver on time for the 25/12.

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During this time of a year, deliveries are numerous.↵
I have contacted you regarding your hope of a fast delivery.
Please understand that it will not be possible to deliver you package to you before 25/12.

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Thank you for the answer to our enquiry from the other day.

There was some delay at customs, but now they are close by.

Those are great articles and I think I will enjoy handling their sales,
I feel there will be a big response to market expansion in Japan.

We plan on making the main order in the course of next week.

There are the goods you sent, but there was a mistake with the liquids.
There were 2 of ＊＊, and none of ## and ##.
For the main order, the quantities are going to be larger too.
Please do a thorough check before shipping.

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Thank you for the answer to our inquiry from the other day.

There was some delay at customs, but now they are close by.

Those are great articles and I think I will enjoy handling their sales,
I feel there will be a big response to market expansion in Japan.

We plan on making the main order in the course of next week.

The goods you had sent have an error in the liquids.
There were 2 of ＊＊, and none of ## and ##.
For the main order, the quantities are going to be larger too.
Please do a thorough check before shipping.

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Vous voyez un retranchement en termes de revenu familial, vous voyez un abandon de services de base, telle que l'éducation publique, éducation publique fonctionnelle. Vous voyez le sous-prolétariat poursuivi a travers d'une prétendue guerre contre les drogues dangereuses qui est en réalité une guerre contre les pauvres et qui nous a transformé en l'état le plus incarcérant de l'histoire de l'humanité, en termes du nombre de personnes que nous avons placées dans des prisons américaines et du pourcentage d'américains que nous avons placés en prison. Aucune autre nation sur la terre n'emprisonne des personnes dans la quantité et le taux dans lequel nous le faisons.

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Vous voyez un retranchement en termes de revenu familial, vous voyez un abandon des services de base, tel que l'éducation publique, éducation publique fonctionnelle. Vous voyez le sous-prolétariat poursuivi à travers une prétendue guerre contre les drogues dangereuses, qui est en réalité une guerre contre les pauvres et qui nous a transformé en l'état le plus incarcérant de l'histoire de l'humanité, en termes du nombre de personnes que nous avons placé dans des prisons américaines, et du pourcentage d'américains que nous avons placés en prison. Aucune autre nation sur la terre n'emprisonne des gens en aussi grande quantité et à un taux aussi haut que nous le faisons.

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I appologize for contacting you late.

Thank you for the thorough review you made. It is perfect.
I would like to continue working together.

Thank you very much.

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I appologize for contacting you late.

Thank you for the thorough review you made. It is perfect.
I would like to work with you again.

Thank you very much.