Agnes Metanomski (meissa) — もらったレビュー

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This is about the EIN we discussed yesterday.

The policies of the transfer company I have been using have recently become more rigid.

It seems that without an EIN it is not possible to export from the USA any longer.

Apparently the articles have to be sent back to you, the vendor.

I apologize, but could you receive the returned goods this one time?

Please give me your address.

After this, if possible, I would like to have the articles sent to Japan directly via USPS.

If it is impossible, then I wish for the articles to be sent to the address of a friend in California.

I will, of course, pay the shipping costs separately.

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This is about the EIN we discussed yesterday.

The policies of the forwarding company I have been using have recently become more rigid.

It seems that without an EIN it is not possible to export from the USA any longer.

Apparently the articles have to be sent back to you, the vendor.

I apologize, but could you receive the returned goods this one time?

Please give me your address.

After this, if possible, I would like to have the articles sent to Japan directly via USPS.

If it is impossible, then I wish for the articles to be sent to the address of a friend in California.

I will, of course, pay the shipping costs separately.

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クーポンをありがとうございました。評価を削除してみています！

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質問の理由: 注文はどこにあるのでしょうか？

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こんにちは。あなたに関税を引き継いでされていることを聞いていましたが...

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クーポンをありがとうございました。評価を削除してみます！

7523
質問の理由: 注文はどこにあるのでしょうか？

4330
こんにちは。そちらが関税代金を負担すると聞いていましたが...

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Even if you aren't someone that cries easily, I think "Tsuritama" will move your heart to the point of tears, it is such a good anime.

What I means is, it is an anime one wants to see!!

This might be just an extra point, but I believe the opening, "Monochrome tedium", is also a strong, famous song.

After all, a good anime always has a good opening and a good music.

"Fuji Fabric", who created "Monochrome Tedium", exactly 2 years after the passing away of their main vocal artist,

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Even if you aren't someone that cries easily, I think "Tsuritama" will move your heart to the point of tears, it is such a good anime.

What I mean is, it is an anime one wants to see!!

This might be just an extra point, but I believe the opening, "Monochrome tedium", is also a strong, famous song.

After all, a good anime always has a good opening and a good music.

"Fuji Fabric", who created "Monochrome Tedium", exactly 2 years after the passing away of their main vocal artist,

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Well, being multifaceted, and not one-sided, is proof that it is a masterpiece. (^^)

This is a clear synopsis of the story, to awaken interest.
However, from here on, there will be story spoilers...

It is the story of a lonely boy, a self.styled alien and a fishing prince, who become friends, and go fishing together with a strange (25 years old) transfer student...

Shall we leave the explanation at that?..♪

That much alone indicates that, being about youth, it contains plenty of fun and heart-rending elements.
There is plenty to excite and move the heart.

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Well, even this,↵
masterpiece is an evidence for being made of multidimensional things, not single dimensional (^^)

This is an interesting synopsis but its quite clear.
However, in this case, there will be story spoilers...

It is the story of a lonely boy who makes friends with a self proclaimed alien, fishing prince and a strange (25 years old) transfer student, and go fishing in four,

Shall we leave the explanation up to that?..♪

Let it alone,↵
being about youth, there are enough fun fun and heart-rending elements.
Exciting and well enough to move the hearts.

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"Tsuritama" is a rare masterpiece mix of anime about fishing and bromance anime in Japan.
No way, I never thought something like this would be seen in Japan!

Although it's such a masterpiece, very few people around me have seen it, because in truth...
Isn't it a fact that "Tsuritama" was positioned as a hidden masterpiece?
So, I would like here, by all means, to tell everyone how good "Tsuritama" is.

But..↵
"Tsuritama" has so many good points, that it is difficult to explain them in a few words.

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"Tsuritama" is a rare masterpiece mix of anime about fishing and bromance anime in Japan.
I never imagined seeing something like this in Japan!

Although it's such a masterpiece, it's true that very few people around me have seen it.
That's why "Tsuritama" is considered a hidden masterpiece.
So, I would like here, by all means, to tell everyone how good "Tsuritama" is.

However, "Tsuritama" has so many good points that it is difficult to explain them in a few words.

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but in America, it seems a well-known genre.

"Bromance" is an abbreviation, the official name is "Brother Romance".

It is a story that has no BL elements, but depicts the deep friendship between men.

In that sense, "Tsuritama" is an anime where you enjoy watching close friends being together.
Of course, it is also fun to watch the interactions with girl companions, lovers and family members. (^^)

"Tsuritama", which depicts the deep friendship between men, is an anime that shows so beautifully a page of teenage life, that when I watched it, my eyes kept watering.

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But in America, it seems a well-known genre.

"Bromance" is an abbreviation, the official name is "Brother Romance".

It is a story that has no BL elements, but depicts the deep friendship between men.

In that sense, "Tsuritama" is an anime where you enjoy watching close friends being together.
Of course, it is also fun to watch the interactions with girl companions, lovers and family members. (^^)

"Tsuritama", which depicts the deep friendship between men, is an anime that shows so beautifully a page of teenage life, that when I watched it, my eyes kept watering.

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were going through some hardships at the time they made this piece.

The truth is, they overcame such harsh times, and facing forward created such a bright tune.
The band's strenght to "give it all" and "go forward", makes me want to weep.

I have this tune in my MP3 player even today♪
Indeed, I listen to it frequently♪

The anime "Tsuritama", together with it's opening, is certainly the greatest, and a masterpiece amongst the masterpieces you'd want to try!

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They were going through some hardships at the time they made this piece.

The truth is, they overcame such harsh times, and facing forward created such a bright tune.
The band's strenght to "give it all" and "go forward", makes me want to weep.

I have this tune in my MP3 player even today♪
Indeed, I listen to it frequently♪

The anime "Tsuritama", together with it's opening, is certainly the greatest, and a masterpiece amongst the masterpieces you'd want to try!

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Seeing those 4 boys fishing side by side, for some reason, made me feel like my chest was constricting and I wanted to weep.
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Could it be because, during my own youth, I dreamed of such situations?
I longed to be part of a friendship like the one shown in "Tsuritama".

At the beginning of my introduction of "Tsuritama", I explained that "Tsuritama" was a masterpiece of bromance anime, or something like that.

"Bromance" is a word seldom heard in Japan,

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Seeing those 4 boys fishing side by side, for some reason, made me feel a tightening in my chest and I was on the verge of tears.
It could be because, during my own youth, I had been dreaming of such situations.
I longed to be part of a friendship like the one shown in "Tsuritama".

At the beginning of my introduction of "Tsuritama", I explained that "Tsuritama" was a masterpiece of bromance anime, or something like that.

"Bromance" is a word seldom heard in Japan,

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I apologize for the trouble this time.

It seems the articles were stopped at your country's EMS handling company (delivery company).
Apparently there are problems in your country.

We sent an enquiry from here, but to day there is no answer.
According to our experience, this case will take some time.

Would reimbursing you as an apology for the wait be all right?

Ans then, could you please refuse receipt when the articles are delivered?

If you accept, we will refund your money promptly.

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I apologize for the trouble this time.

It seems the articles were stopped at your country's EMS handling company (delivery company).
Apparently there are problems in your country.

We sent an inquiry from here, but there has been no reply yet today.
According to our experience, this case will take some time.

Would reimbursing you as an apology for the wait be alright?

And then, could you please refuse the articles when they are delivered?

If you accept, we will refund your money promptly.

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Cher Mr. / chère Mme. XXX,

merci pour votre réponse.
Nous sommes désolés d'entendre que vous n'êtes pas satisfait(e) de la condition de l'objet.
Nous avons déjà remboursé dans sa totalité le montant que vous avez payé à travers du system d'Amazon.
Le remboursement devrait être traité dans les jours qui viennent.
S'il vous plaît veuillez le confirmer.

Cordialement

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Monsieur, Madame,

Nous vous remercions de votre réponse.
Nous sommes désolés d'entendre que vous n'êtes pas satisfait(e) de la condition de l'objet.
Nous avons déjà remboursé dans sa totalité le montant que vous avez payé par le système d'Amazon.
Le remboursement sera traité dans les jours qui viennent.
Veuillez le confirmer.

Cordialement,

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Mr Kim

I went to the bank in order to transfer the money, but I could not do a transfer from Japan in Korean won.
I will transfer the billed amount of 3,960,000KRW in dollars.
Although it is an imposition, could you please write me an invoice converted to US dollars?
The commission in exchange for US dollars to Korean won will be paid on the Japanese side.

(Please add the charge for the commission for the exchange of US dollars to Korean won clearly to the invoice.)

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Mr Kim

I went to the bank to transfer the money, but I could not transfer it in KRW from Japan.
I will transfer the billed amount of 3,960,000KRW in dollars.
I am sorry for disturbing, but could you please issue me the invoice converted to US dollars?
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We will pay for the service charge for currency exchange.

(Please state the service charge for the currency exchange from USD to KRW into the invoice.)

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Did you manage to obtain an EIN? The transfer company MyUS tried several times to contact you in November, but received no reply, according to them. Recently, it seems that there were changes to the laws related to foreign trade in the USA, and shipping to a foreign country is apparently impossible without an EIN. As a matter of fact, many of the goods I bought from you in November and December last year are still at MyUS, and have not been forwarded to me. It is quite a problem. According to what the staff from MyUS said, it could be possible to acquire an EIN in 15 minutes. As I would like to continue doing business with you, could you please obtain an EIN?

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Could you obtain an EIN? The transfer company MyUS tried several times to contact you in November, but received no reply, according to them. Due to recent changes to the laws related to foreign trade in the US, shipping to a foreign country is apparently impossible without an EIN. As a matter of fact, many of the goods I bought from you in November and December last year are still at MyUS, and have not been forwarded to me. It is quite a problem. According to the MyUS staff, it's possible to acquire an EIN in 15 minutes. As I would like to continue doing business with you, could you please obtain an EIN?

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I am satisfied I could acquire this music instrument. Only, before I give a "natural feedback" , and considering that the state of the pad was not as described, if you would reimburse part of the 50.000 Yen (approximately $500) that I spent on repairs, I think I could give a positive feedback. That's all.

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I am satisfied I could acquire this music instrument. Only, before I give "natural feedback" , and considering that the state of the pad was not as described, if you would reimburse whole or part of the 50,000 yen (approximately $500) that I spent on repairs, I think I could give positive feedback. That's all.

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German Evaluation

Random checks are made at Customs.
Unfortunately I cannot say when import taxes will be applied.
Due to this I am worried this time whether this evaluation will be made.
This evaluation is unfair.
For me it is unreasonable.
Couldn't it be eliminated?

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German Evaluation

Random checks are made at Customs.
Unfortunately, I cannot tel when import taxes will be applied.
Due to this, I am worried whether this evaluation will be made this time.
This evaluation is unfair.
I can not accept this.
Couldn't it be eliminated?

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I have removed the rust from the razor I sold you, but since you were unsatisfied with the article, although it was unused (new) and sold cheap, I have accepted its return.

Usually we refund after the article has been sent back, but if you withdraw your claim in Ebay's resolution Center and rate the feedback to Positive, we will immediately refund the $127.94.

We post more details through pictures than other exhibitors, and also carry the cost of returned goods, so please understand our position. Thank you.

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I removed the rust from the razor I sold you, but since you were unsatisfied with the article, although it was unused (new) and sold cheaply, I have accepted its return.

Usually we refund after the article has been sent back, but if you withdraw your claim in eBay's Resolution Center and give us positive feedback, we will immediately refund the $127.94.

We post more detailed pictures than other sellers, and also bear the shipping cost of returned goods, so please understand our position. Thank you.

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The cancellation of contract removes only the account of the seller, the account of the purchaser is left.
Best regards.

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The cancellation of the contract removes only the account of the seller; the account of the purchaser is left open.
Best regards.

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The package has no instructions. It seems like all the accessories shown in the display image are there, but I can't confirm exactly.
please consider about the 3 points bellow:
Kyurei: is missing an arm
Jagi: is missing an arm
big Kenshiro: has a broken hip.
If you accept the above please bid.

I haven't checked the current state and operation of the set of various ranger squadron transformer toys. For this reason I offer it at a low price.
Please check the state through the image.

Thank you for the great transaction this time.
I want to do business with you again. If there's any japanese article you'd want I'll look for it.

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The package has no instructions. It seems like all the accessories shown in the display image are there, but I can't confirm that exactly.
Please be aware of the three points below:
Kyurei: is missing an arm
Jagi: is missing an arm
Big Kenshiro: has a broken hip.
If you accept the above then please bid.

I haven't checked the current state and operation of the set of various ranger squadron transformer toys. For this reason, I'm offering it at a low price.
Please check the condition through the image.

Thank you for the great transaction this time.
I want to do business with you again. If there's any Japanese items you want I'll look for them.

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The rings arrived yesterday. They are of very good workmanship.
As expected, it is exactly what I requested from you.

Starting after New Year, the sales site will be in construction, I think the sales should start in March.

According to my experience, it will take a bit of time until we can start selling.
It depends on the merchandise, but in general it should take some 3 months.

For that reason, I think reordering will take some time.
I am repeating myself, but please do not destroy the mould.

If in 1 year the sales should not show results, I will contact you regarding the disposal of the moulds.

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The rings arrived yesterday. They are of very good workmanship.
As expected, it is exactly what I requested from you. Thank you very much.

Starting after New Year, the sales site will be in construction, so I think the sales should start in March.

According to my experience, it will take a bit of time until the products start selling.
It depends on the merchandise, but in general it should take some 3 months.

For that reason, I think reordering will take some time.
I am repeating myself, but please do not destroy the mould.

If in 1 year the sales should not show results, I will contact you regarding the disposal of the moulds.