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Thank for your reply.
Why did not you send this product to Japan this time?
Recently, I received the same quantity of the product dorm MyUS.
In the case you do not send me, what should i do?
Let me know?

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Thank for your reply.
Why can't you send this product to Japan this time?
Recently, I received similar product from MyUS.
In the case you can not send me the item, what should i do?
Please let me know?

元の翻訳
Firstly, we think that it is necessary to deepen bonds of the family which are the most familiar community, so we held a project of citizen participation in conjunction with government and companies to regenerate the relationship between people which have been losing recently,
On that day, We will perform live stage and challenge corner which have a participation of families, child care support booth and fair, fireworks, about 2000 persons of citizen will appear and deepen the bond among them

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Firstly, we think that it is necessary to deepen bonds of the family which is the most familiar community, so we held a project of citizen participation in conjunction with government and companies to regenerate the relationship between people which have been losing recently,
On that day, We will perform live stage and challenge corner which have a participation of families, child care support booth and fair, fireworks, about 2000 persons of citizen will appear and deepen the bond among them

元の翻訳
Firstly, We sorry to inform that ... group is not the most handsome.
Let try your best next time!!!
Secondly, ...Group is a little handsome.
Congratulation!!!
And the most handsome is ...group!!!
Congratulation!!!
And now is the second game.
In this second game,,,
And the 2 games are over. And now i am happy to announce the final ranking
" Determine ranking"
So We will announce the winner.

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Firstly, We are sorry to inform that ... group is the least handsome.
Let try your best next time!!!
Secondly, ...group is a little handsome.
Congratulation!!!
And the most handsome is ...group!!!
Congratulation!!!
And now is the second game.
In this second game,,,
Now the second game has finished and i am happy to announce the final ranking.
" Decide ranking"
So We will announce the winner.

元の翻訳
After asking impressions, please towards to everybody
So which group's face is the most handsome, it depends on your votes
because if you think that is the most handsome please make a big applause for them.
Firstly, Who think A group face is the most handsome, please make a big applause for them
Next, Who think B group face is the most handsome, please a make big applause for them
Last, Who think C group face is the most handsome, please a make big applause for them
Ranking depends on the volume of applause.
And now, here is the result

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After asking impressions, I will address to everyone.
So which group's face is the most handsome, it depends on your applause.
If you think that is the most handsome one, please make a big applause for it.
Firstly, if you think group A's face is the most handsome, please make a big applause for them
Next, if you think group B's face is the most handsome, please make a big applause for them
Last, if you think group C's face is the most handsome, please make a big applause for them
Ranking depends on the loudness of applause.
And now, here is the result

元の翻訳
(Towards to the person of board, touch on the board), here is the board.
Towards to each group) time fis 1 minute.
Take off the timer and set 1 minute and towards to everybody.
Pass the bag which included part of face to the candidate is stading in the front.
Are you ready?
Let make the lovely faces
Notice, Let's go!!!
press the switch on the timer
( in this first game)
When the timer rings, say "Stop and finish the game
Take the blindfold of candidates in front
ask some impressions like "Do you like this face?".

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(Towards to the person of board, touch on the board), here is the board.
Towards to each group) time is 1 minute.
Take off the timer and set 1 minute and towards to everybody.
Pass the bag which included part of face to the candidate is stading in the front.
Are you ready?
Let make the lovely faces
Notice, Let's go!!!
press the switch on the timer
( in this first game)
When the timer rings, say "Stop and finish the game
Take the blindfold of candidates in front
ask some impressions like "Do you like this face?".

元の翻訳
#biglemon
I have some questions
I heard that the exhibited PT9 and PT2 ball was bought from TourVan, so why you wrote the title and Description of item that they come from TourIssue?
Tour ID Band is not being put, isn't it?
There is a entry that STRAIGHT FROM CALLAWAY TOUR CENTER so is Tour Center is TourVan's thing?
I am very sorry but Did you mistake in checking the paid instruments to PGA tour pro?↵

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#biglemon
I have some questions
I heard that the exhibited PT9 and PT2 ball was bought from TourVan, so why you wrote the title and Description of item that they come from TourIssue?
Tour ID Band is not being put, isn't it?
There is a entry that STRAIGHT FROM CALLAWAY TOUR CENTER so is Tour Center is TourVan's thing?
I am very sorry but Did you mistake in checking the paid instruments to PGA tour pro?

元の翻訳
#habit
Send me the invoice of V steel
Can i make a payment on........in relation to the cutoff date of the credit
Thank you for telling me about product of head.

#International
The customer got the flag but because i do not know the whereabouts of the sign so i have proposed to send back again. There are many signs that do not match with the feature of the searched sign. I am sorry but I have suspected the authenticity. I think i will return all the goods if you delivery to us the same things next time

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#habit
Send me the invoice of V steel
Can i make a payment on [date] in relation to the cutoff date of my credit?
Thank you for telling me about the production of Head.

#International
The customer got the flag but because i do not know the whereabouts of the sign so i have been proposing to send it back again. There are many signs that do not match with the feature of the searched sign. I am sorry but I have suspected the authenticity. I think I will return all the goods if you delivery to us the same things next time

元の翻訳
Sorry for writing e-mail suddenly
I bought the following script and i put it on server but displaying is to slow and it troubles me so much.
After seeking and realizing your site on the following bulletin board, I was able to browse lightly
If it is okay with you, could you tell me your plan and server you are using?
You will help me very much if you teach me in English because i can not understand Thai language even one word.
I am very sorry for this impolite e-mail.
Thank you for your reply, i will reference it
Thank you from my heart

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Sorry for writing e-mail suddenly
I bought the following script and i put it on server but displaying is to slow and it troubles me so much.
After seeking and realizing your site on the following bulletin board, I was able to browse lightly
If it is okay with you, could you tell me your plan and server you are using?
You will help me very much if you teach me in English because i can not understand Thai language even one word.
I am very sorry for this impolite e-mail.
Thank you for your reply, i will use it as a reference
Thank you from my heart

元の翻訳
When I tested the ER02 the suspected initial defect
There was no trouble. I work smoothly.
However, parts surrounded by a red circle in the attached image Configuration was not included..
Please send this two part.
Instead of that the part which surrounded by a red circle in the photo I have taken instead was included.
I think this is not a part of the other products.
You will not be able to used in ER02 because of thickness of the screw
I have a new order.
Send together with this order items is fine

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When I tested the ER02 the suspected initial defect
There was no trouble. It works smoothly.
However, parts surrounded by a red circle in the attached image Configuration was not included..
Please send this two part.
Instead of that the part which surrounded by a red circle in the photo I have taken instead was included.
I think this is not a part of the other products.
I will not be able to used in ER02 because of thickness of the screw
I have a new order.
Sending together with this order items is fine

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply
I have confirm the contents.
the Japanese URL which i made by myself now is available but there is a error when i tried to upload.
I think i will give up.
I promise to donate if you can solve this problem
However, this problem is not reserved
It is really an amazing script. I wanna thank From my heart
It will be very hard support but please try your best

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Thank you for your reply
I have confirmed the contents.
the Japanese URL which i made by myself now is available but there is a error when i tried to upload.
I think i will give up.
I promise to donate if you can solve this problem
However, this problem is not reserved
It is really an amazing script. I wanna thank from my heart
It will be very hard support but please try your best

元の翻訳
The point existing this two things is common

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This two has one compatible point in common

元の翻訳
The strength of our company is that we can create a person who have a lot of experiences and the execution of business improvement

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The strength of our company is that we can create a person who has a lot of experiences and the execution of business improvement

元の翻訳
I really do not understand about the way to buy product so i always buy on ebay.
Please ship the product to Japan without damaging
I am waiting for arrival

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As I don't understand how to purchase the item, I bought it on ebay as usual.
Please ship the product to Japan safe from damage.
I am looking forward to its arrival

元の翻訳
I really do not understand about the way to buy product so i always buy on ebay.
Please ship the product to Japan without damaging
I am waiting for arrival

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I really do not understand about the way to buy product so i bought on ebay as usua
Please ship the product to Japan without damaging
I am waiting for arrival

元の翻訳
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Treatment to posted images
The operator can remove the posted image without notice if they determines these pictures are inappropriate (such as obscene,violent). The operator can stop account if there are any vicious activities
Terms of use.
User responsibility
The user takes responsibility for any result of any act that was carried out by using this app.The responsibility for the content that you submitted using this application can be found in the user's own.The operator of this application does not take responsibility for the contents that user submitted via the Service