Khoa (mapmetroi) — もらったレビュー

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I am a man who living in Tokyo.
I am interested in English and Chinese, i think that i want to learn English so your message has arrived
I can supply you the Japan's information as you want.
it is no problem so please ask me any thing
i am having business with foreigner.
i really want to know what they are interested in Japan.
My English conversation is still not good and i really want to improve through your e-mail
I will be looking forward to your e-mail

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I am a man who living in Tokyo.
I am interested in English and foreign cultures, i think that i want to learn English so your message has arrived
I can supply you the Japan's information as you want.
it is no problem so please ask me any thing
i am having business with foreigner.
i really want to know what they are interested in Japan.
My English conversation is still not good and i really want to improve through your e-mail
I will be looking forward to your e-mail

元の翻訳
Today, there was a response from the person in charge that "for the test, the shops that has fewer sold products are limited"
I made ​​a phone call to the shop in the prefecture because there was no handling stores in my city, unfortunately, this store is also out of stock.
About..., i e-mailed to exhibitor, It does not seem to sell separately because the product value of the card is reduced to half if it is not sold a a set
Please purchase it for me if you find out a place to send it separately
Did you buy***I do not understand clearly about ***i do not know what your wanted products are
.

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Today, there was a response from the person in charge that "for the test, the shops that has fewer sold products are limited"
I made ​​a phone call to the shop in the prefecture because there was no handling stores in my city, unfortunately, this store is also out of stock.
About..., i e-mailed to exhibitor, It does not seem to sell separately because the product value of the card is reduced to half if it is not sold as a set
Please purchase it for me if you find out a place to send it separately
Did you buy***I do not understand clearly about ***so i do not know what your wanted products are
.

元の翻訳
Hello,
The postage is 10 usd, i understand.
Can i pay by U.S dollar?
I am also have business on Amazon of Japan, America and Europe
So i have knowledge about postage
Your dolls become very important to my life
So if you do not mind, you can also sell your goods in Japan.
please contact me via email if you think it is no problem to sell

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Hello,
The postage is 10 usd, i understood.
Can i pay by U.S dollar?
I am also have business on Amazon of Japan, America and Europe
So i have knowledge about postage
Your dolls become very important to my life
So if you do not mind, you can also sell your goods in Japan.
Please contact me via email if you think it is no problem to sell

元の翻訳
Could you send to Japan by using First class Mail.
You send the quitely same item from Japan to U.S many time, if you send by First class Mail, i think he postage will around 17usd

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Could you send to Japan by using First class Mail.
You send the quitely same item from U.S to Japan many time, if you send by First class Mail, i think he postage will be around 17usd

元の翻訳
Thank your for your support.
Please answer me the following question.
Last time i order this one and this one, Installation of double-size hammock stand (double use) is possible?I received the inquiry from customer that hammock is short and not reach to stand, is it right?
The story will change but the hammock has been introduced to the magazine before and now it is not about magazine anymore, it was published to the famous interior relationship site
Let see watch the following attached URL
Best regards

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Thank your for your support.
Please answer me the following question.
Last time i order this one and this one, Installation of double-size hammock stand (double use) is possible?I received the inquiry from customer that hammock is short and not reach to stand, is it right?
The story will change but the hammock has been introduced to the magazine before and now it is not About magazine anymore, it was published to the famous interior relationship site in Japan
Let see the following attached URL
Best regards

元の翻訳
Amazon is a example about using internet as a book store.
In this computer society, Business can be more effective with using the power of technology and will be replaced by technology in this way.
The properties that pass over the time as well as distance of computer have changed many businesses
Now, whatever business it also concerned to computer less or more now
The connection between computer and business is becoming stronger in the future

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Amazon is a example about using internet as a book store.
In this computer society, Business can be more effective with using the power of technology and will be replaced by technology in this way.
The properties that pass over the time as well as distance of computer have changed many businesses
Now, whatever business it is, italso concerns to computer less or more now
The connection between computer and business is becoming stronger in the future

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
If the price is including postage, i really want to buy it
I am waiting for your reply

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Thank you for your contact.
If the price is ***USD including postage, i really want to buy it
I am waiting for your reply

元の翻訳
I purchased the following PHP script.
I watched YouTube videos and manuals but
I was not able to set the home page.
Because I can not understand English properly, you might not been able to fully understand the manual.
It is so inconvenient but please send me the basic setting because i will tell the FTP information
File itself, i do not have to upload so Contact me if you need something
Sorry for this inconvenience
Here is the FTP information

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I purchased the following PHP script.
I watched YouTube videos and manuals but
I was not able to set the home page.
Because I can not understand English properly, you might not been able to fully understand the manual.
It is so inconvenient but please send me the basic setting because i will tell the FTP information
File itself, i do not have to upload so please contact me if you need something
Sorry for this inconvenience
Here is the FTP information

元の翻訳
Sorry for late reply
Will you ship product on next Monday?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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Sorry for the late reply
Will you be able to ship the product by next Monday?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
FR 様
こんにちは
評価を探して消しますが探せませんでした。どこに探せますか？
私は最終的にPOSTNLからパッケージを追跡することができます。今日到着しなければなりません。今、他の問題があります。。送金がフリーじゃないですか？現金で３３．５８を支払分ければなりませんと伝われました。
この問題を手伝ってください。
宜しくお願い致します。

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FR （フランス）
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こんにちは
削除する評価を探していますが見つかりせんでした。どこで探せますか？
私はやっとPOSTNLからパッケージを追跡することができます。今日到着するはずです。今、他の問題があります。。送金が無料のはずですが、現金で３３．５８ユーロを支払わなければなりませんと言われました。
この問題も手伝ってください。
宜しくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
History of call center.
April 1st, 2002.
Joined in company as operator...
Rewarded the operator newcomer award.
July 1st, 2007
Appointed as a supervisor at the company's contact center
After being charge of domestic Lodging department, took responsibility for establish Life service department.
April 1st 2008
appointed as a chief supervisor at the company's contact center
Promoted of multi-skills of the domestic Lodging & Life Service.
April 1st 2009, appointed as a Deputy Director in the company's contact center
Use number .->. review (year on year %)
Sales .->, yen (year on year%)
Balance of payment --> Profitability

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History of call center.
April 1st, 2002.
Joined in company as an operator...
Awarded the operator newcomer award.
July 1st, 2007
Been appointed as a supervisor at the company's contact center
After being in charge of domestic Lodging department, took responsibility of establishing Life service department.
April 1st 2008
Been appointed as a chief supervisor at the company's contact center
Promoted the multi-skills of the domestic Lodging & Life Service.
April 1st 2009, been appointed as a Deputy Director in the company's contact center
Used number .->. review (year on year %)
Sales .->, yen (year on year%)
Balance of payment --> Profitability

元の翻訳
The original is also very cute!
Please let me carry out this negotiation.
1. Send me the price list.
2. Will the product will be sent form Viet Nam?
3. Please let me know about Terms of trade. FOB is possible?
4. Leather case and package of nail clippers is different. Do you have intention to produce 1 package next time?
1 sample was dented in the bottom of the tin case.
Because the nail clippers is the case including product, if it was dented we can nor sell it in Japan. Please check the tin case carefully if it is dented or not before shipping

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The original is also very cute!
Please let me carry out this negotiation.
1. Send me the price list.
2. Will the product be sent form Viet Nam?
3. Please let me know about Terms of trade. Is FOB possible?
4. Leather case and package of nail clippers are different. Do you have intention to produce 1 package next time?
1 sample was dented in the bottom of the tin case.
Because the nail clippers is the case including product, if it was dented we can not sell it in Japan. Please check the tin case carefully if it is dented or not before shipping

元の翻訳
But, Your Evaluation is 100%. So i really satisfied with your support.
Therefore i sent this message before evaluating.
About shipment,please be careful in packing the luggage.
International shipment, the goods is arranged very violently, so it is easy to be damaged.
Packing the product in box is easy to be damaged.
I really appreciate your support but i am not satisfied with the condition of product.

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But, Your Evaluation is 100%. So I'm really satisfied with your support.
Therefore i sent this message before evaluating.
About shipment,please be careful in packing the luggage.
International shipment, the goods is arranged very violently, so it is easy to be damaged.
Packing the product in box is easy to be damaged.
I really appreciate your support but i am not satisfied with the condition of product.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your hlep.
ebay account has been limited.
But the last day, it can limit-up again.
I have also submitted documents of identification and other documents like before
I am having purchasing on ebay.
Limited is a big trouble to me.
Please release it as soon as possible.
I am having transaction on ebay as a gentlmen.
Please solve this problem as soon as possible

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Thank you for your help.
ebay account has been restricted.
But the last day, it can limit-up again.
I have also submitted documents of identification and other documents like before
I make a living from ebay.
The restriction is very troubling for me.
Please remove it as soon as possible.
I am courteously doing transaction on ebay.
Please resolve this problem as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
I understand about R11s4W.
I made a payment for RBZ Tour 10.5 Head
I also confirm about deduction of $240.
Thank you for your quick action.
Is selling to Ebay of Mr.Golf Xcess and Mr.golfingyourway is the same company.
Thank you in advance.
I'm really interested in Versa #9 and Versa#7.
If you don't mind please send the picture of each kind to me.↵
If the condition is ok i am gonna buy both.
Best regards

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I understand about R11s4W.
I made a payment for RBZ Tour 10.5 Head
Also, I confirmed about deduction of $240.
Thank you for your prompt action.
Is Mr.Golf Xcess selling on eBay the same company as Mr.golfingyourway?
I look forward to your continued cooperation.
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I'm really interested in Versa #9 and Versa#7.
If you don't mind, could you please send me some pictures of each kind?↵
Withought any problem for its condition, I'm going to buy both of them.
Best regards,

元の翻訳
If there is any important correct concerning about legal while discussing with A company and B company, i will contact again

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If there is any important correction according to the law while discussing with A company and B company, I will contact you again.

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According to Mr Tanaka's words, Managing the land is the responsibility of A company so i think that Confirming with A company about this contract plan and pushing work are good way.
The contract plan sent by attaching decided to add (not correction)the valid land from now to the future,without mentioning to the not being decided land by W contract (including invalid land) .
I'm gonna changing these such words because i won't lost any interests which obtained in this contract. About this is there any risk for you?

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According to Mr Tanaka's words, Managing the land is the responsibility of A company so I think that Confirming with A company about this contract plan and pushing work are good way.
The contract plan that I have attached decided to add (and not correct)the valid land from now,without mentioning the land decided by the double contract (including invalid land) .
I have changed these contracts in such words because I won't lose any interests which were obtained in the past contract. Is there any risk for you?

元の翻訳
Contest result announcement

In application period from September 1st to 30th,406 works has been applied.
Then, we spent the voting period "your COOL determines ranking"
Sorry for keep you waiting. Now is the announcement of the result!
The high-ranking prizewinner chosen among 406 applications and the first champion were decided to everybody above
We will inform to the winner the shipment of the prize by an email.
Please be careful that an email from administration is not blocked.
ten days after this announcement if there is no answer the winner will lose the right to receive the prize

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The contest result announcement

In application period from September 1st to 30th,406 works has been applied.
Then, we spent the voting period "your COOL determines ranking"
Sorry for keep you waiting. Now is the announcement of the result!
The high-ranking prize winners chosen among 406 applications and the first champion were decided to everybody above
We will inform to the winners the shipment of the prize by an email.
Please be careful that an email from administration is not blocked.
ten days after this announcement if there is no answer the winner will lose the right to receive the prize