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Hello,
We are contacting you because the item that you handle is very interesting to us.

We would like to purchase this item in quantity.
So can you give us big discount?

We will pay via paypal or credit card.
The shipping address will be in Florida.

I will looking forward for your reply.
Please reply back to my SKYPE. Thank you and best regards.

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Hello,
We are contacting you as we are very much interested in the products you handle.

We would like to purchase this product in quantity.
So would it be possible for you to consider giving us a quantity discount?

We will pay via PayPal or credit card.
The shipping address will be in Florida.

We will look forward to hearing from you.
Please reply back to my SKYPE. Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
M said he loves sushi so A took M out to revolving sushi bar for dinner. However, M doesn't want to eat sushi even though he loves it. This sushi bar only had the sushi that he doesn't like, and he was not satisfied. So A asked him to go to another restaurant, but he disagreed since he can't eat beef because of his religious reason. We found out that the stakehouse nearby didn't have menu that will not contain beef, so they went to that restaurant. A suggested the menu that does not contain beef to M. But M is worried that the food contains beef.

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A heard that M loves sushi so A took M out to revolving sushi bar for dinner. However, M doesn't want to eat sushi, his favorite. It turns out that this sushi bar only had the sushi toppings that he doesn't like, and he was not satisfied. So A asked him out to go to another restaurant, but he disagreed since he can't eat beef because of his religious reason. They found out that the steakhouse nearby served the dishes that do not contain beef, so they went to that restaurant. A suggested the menu that does not contain beef to M. But M is worried that the food contains beef.

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The ☆ is supposed to be in between the leaves of the book, but the clerk must have forgotten to do that.
It is my fault that I didn't check it before I exhibit.

Cancel this order and I will give you full refund
I will ship this book and give you a refund of $5 for the replacement of ☆
I will include ○ that I am exhibiting in this shipment as a substitute of ☆

Please choose one the three written above.

For the custom reason, i can't mark this as a gift.
Even though that there is a custom duties, it will be a buyer's response to pay the custom at ebay so I can't pay for that.
I will ship from Japan so it will take some time to arrive.

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The ☆ is supposed to be in between the leaves of the book, but the clerk must have forgotten to do that.
It was my fault that I have not checked it before I exhibited.

Cancel this order and I will give you full refund
I will ship this book and give you a refund of $5 for the replacement of ☆
I will include ○ that I am exhibiting in this shipment as a substitute of ☆

Please choose one of the three written above.

For the customs reason, i can't mark this as a gift.
Even though that there is a custom duties, a buyer is responsible for the import customs’ fee according to the policy of eBay so I can't pay for that.
I will ship from Japan so it will take some time to arrive.

元の翻訳
Unfortunately, the shipment from FEDEX this time has turned to official clearance at Chinese customs.
Usually, this will not happen because FEDEX is simplified clearance even though that the shipment is from HONG KONG or ZHUHAI.
Please let us know how much is the cost that you spend to us.
I will to my boss about this.

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Unfortunately, the shipment from FEDEX this time has turned to official clearance at Chinese customs.
Usually, this will not happen because FEDEX is simplified clearance even though that the shipment is from HONG KONG or ZHUHAI.
Please let us know how much is the cost that you spend to us.
I will talk to my boss about this.

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I have sent 3 mails after you made a bid, but I still have not receive the shipping fee that is short.
I described about the shipping fee in the note, and I include the bill for the extra shipping fee.
If you don't contact by 16th, I will cancel your bid.
I will wait for you to pay the shipping fee.

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I have sent three emails after you made a successful bid, but I still have not received the shipping fee that is short.
I described about the fee in the note, and I also include the bill for the extra shipping fee.
If you don't contact me by 16th, I will cancel your bid.
I will wait for you to pay the shipping fee.

元の翻訳
Robert氏とMatthew氏が東京で初めて出会ったときはそれぞれがウェブの代理店を営んでいた。Robert氏は当時日本語を勉強していたが、オンラインのクラウドソースを使用して翻訳システムを構築することは素晴らしいと考えた。Matthew氏は日本語に堪能であり、売り込みをかけていた。2009年に両者は合意した。

「東京ではこのアイデアを理解する人がたくさんいました」とRobert氏は言いました。

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Robert氏とMatthew氏が東京で初めて出会ったときはそれぞれがウェブの代理店を営んでいた。Robert氏は当時日本語を勉強していたが、オンラインのクラウドソースを使用して翻訳のスタートアップを起業することは素晴らしいと考えた。Matthew氏は日本語に堪能であり、（そのアイディアの売り込みを）受け入れた。2009年に両者は一緒に取り組むことに合意した。

「東京にはこのアイデアに理解を示してくれる人がたくさんいました」とRobert氏は言う。

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I would like to purchase one more of the same product that i bought from you today.
If it is able to purchase, please send me the invoice by email. Also, please include in the same shipment that I bought from you today.
I will be looking forward to hear from you.

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I would like to purchase one more of the same product that i bought from you today.
If it is available for purchase, please send me the invoice by email. Also, please include in the same package as the item that I bought from you today.
I will be looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I would like to purchase one more of the same product that i bought from you today.
If it is able to purchase, please send me the invoice by email. Also, please include in the same shipment that I bought from you today.
I will be looking forward to hear from you.

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I would like to purchase one more of the same product that I bought from you today.
If I am able to purchase it, please send me the invoice by email. Also, please include it in the same shipment that I bought from you today.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
鈴木様
メールありがとうございます。お問い合わせいただき、私どもも大変うれしく思います。また今後もよい取引ができるものと思います。
リサイクルガラスについてですが、プレーンのガラスか、網の入ったガラスの写真のどちらが希望かご教示いただけますでしょうか？
鈴木様はキャンどりホルダー、ビン、壺、ガラスドームか、それともタンブラーかボウルのみにご興味がおありでしょうか？

またご連絡いただけますようお願いいたします。
以上よろしくお願いいたします。

Ｌｉｎｈ

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鈴木様
メールありがとうございます。お問い合わせいただき、私どもも大変うれしく思います。また今後もよい取引ができるものと思います。
リサイクルガラスについてですが、プレーンのガラスか、波打っているガラスの写真のどちらが希望かご教示いただけますでしょうか？
鈴木様はキャンドルホルダー、ビン、壺、ガラスドームか、それともタンブラーかボウルのみにご興味がおありでしょうか？

またご連絡いただけますようお願いいたします。
以上よろしくお願いいたします。

Ｌｉｎｈ

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Recently, the Auther of this script below has spread out e-mail address of few hundred customers as CC.
Although it is not intentional, number of spam mail has been increasing.
It is probably because of this list of e-mail address has been sold to others.
Is it permitted in your company policy to send e-mail to the customer directly?
And also, I request this Auther to get punished as follow

・Delete all the scripts that this auther wrote or ban exhibit
・Refund to customer who got spam mail

If the punishment is not strict enough, I will use this mail list as well.

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Recently, the author of this script below has spread e-mails of hundreds of customers as CC.
Although he claims that it is not intentional, the amount of spam has been increasing.
It is probably because of this list of e-mails has been sold to others.
Does your company policy permit sending e-mails to customers directly?
And also, I ask you to penalize this author as follows:

・Delete all the scripts that this author wrote or ban him from listing them again
・Issue refunds to customers who have received spam

If the punishment is not strict enough, I will use this mail list as well.

元の翻訳
Investing to young country by institutional investor
Giving ideas or point of view about macro enviroment from different stand point or vision
Please give topics about variable annuity insurance
Thank you for translators that translate very technical stuffs. I undrestand very well.
Too much advertize from the sponser SSGA (Masaki Sugihara)
Not just being a classroom style, it was very interesting to hear many-sided opinions from various panelists
Discussion about asset allocation, or philosophy about pension fund
Third time →It showed Secomd time on the name tag: Please make sure that there is no mistake

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Investing in young country [wrong term] by institutional investors
Giving ideas or point of view about macro enviroment from different stand point or vision
Please give topics about variable annuity insurance
Thank you to translators who translate [tense confusion] very technical stuff [informal]. I undrestand very well.
Too much advertize [parts of speech confusion] from the sponser SSGA (Masaki Sugihara)
Not just being a classroom style, it was very interesting to hear many-sided opinions from various panelists
Discussion about asset allocation, or philosophy about pension fund
Third time →It showed Secomd time on the name tag: Please make sure that there is no mistake

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I can not continue as ebay seller when i keep share paying the duties.
It is very sad, but is refuse recieving or cancel the only way to solve this as I wrote before?
I hope that this problem will get solved between you and France Customs.

Right now, it is midnight in Japan. I deeply apologize, but I have very important business tomorrow, so I have to go to bed. I will send replay tomorrow. Sorry but please understand.

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I can not continue as an eBay seller if I keep paying the customs duties.
It is very sad, but don't you have no other option besides refusing to receive the package and canceling the order as you wrote before?
I hope that this problem will get solved between you and French customs.

Right now, it is midnight in Japan. I deeply apologize, but I have very important business tomorrow, so I have to go to bed. I will send you a reply tomorrow. Sorry but please understand.

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There is an oil leak from this car.
I have to send it to the repair shop so I can 't sell this car.
I deeply apologize, but please understand the circumstance.
If I found similar car, I will let you know in advance.

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There is an oil leak from this car.
I have to send it to the repair shop so I can't sell this car.
I deeply apologize, but please understand the circumstances.
If I find a similar car, you will be the first I tell.

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Thank you for sending the corresponding file.
I tried the new file, but setting up customer A to paid version from Administrator side and then log in from customer A,
it shows that it is in paid version but can not create new ABC.
Sorry to bother you but can you check this?
*If I set customer A back to free version, he can create new ABC.

Also, I can not renew the name at configuration, but is this just my error?
If so, then i will just delete the row itself and use it.
Please check this as well.

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Thank you for sending me the corresponding file.
I tried the new file, set customer A to the paid version from the Administrator side and then logged in as customer A.
I see that the paid version has been applied for sure, but I cannot create a new ABC.
Sorry to bother you but can you check this?
*If I set customer A back to the free version, he can create new ABCs.

Also, I cannot renew the names in the configuration. Is this just my error?
If so, then I will just delete the row itself and use it.
Please check this as well.