翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 英訳を御願いします。金融関連のセミナーで取られたアンケートに対する回答です。よろしく御願いします。（※注：各回答に対する質問は異なりますが、英訳の必要がないために省略しています。）

日本語

機関投資家による新興国投資について
さまざまな立場や視野でマクロ環境に対して観点やアイデアを頂くこと
変額年金保険関連のトピックを是非頂きたいと思います
専門的な内容の通訳していただいた方々、ありがとうございました。とてもよく伝わりました
スポンサーSSGA（杉原正記）宣伝臭さが鼻につきすぎた
講義の形ではなく、各パネリストの色々な意見が多角的に聴けて非常におもしろかったです
年金基金のアセットアロケーション、哲学についての議論
第３回→名札第２回：間違いがないよう注意された方が良い

英語

Investing to young country by institutional investor
Giving ideas or point of view about macro enviroment from different stand point or vision
Please give topics about variable annuity insurance
Thank you for translators that translate very technical stuffs. I undrestand very well.
Too much advertize from the sponser SSGA (Masaki Sugihara)
Not just being a classroom style, it was very interesting to hear many-sided opinions from various panelists
Discussion about asset allocation, or philosophy about pension fund
Third time →It showed Secomd time on the name tag: Please make sure that there is no mistake

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/03/28 02:29:34

元の翻訳
Investing to young country by institutional investor
Giving ideas or point of view about macro enviroment from different stand point or vision
Please give topics about variable annuity insurance
Thank you for translators that translate very technical stuffs. I undrestand very well.
Too much advertize from the sponser SSGA (Masaki Sugihara)
Not just being a classroom style, it was very interesting to hear many-sided opinions from various panelists
Discussion about asset allocation, or philosophy about pension fund
Third time →It showed Secomd time on the name tag: Please make sure that there is no mistake

修正後
Investing in young country [wrong term] by institutional investors
Giving ideas or point of view about macro enviroment from different stand point or vision
Please give topics about variable annuity insurance
Thank you to translators who translate [tense confusion] very technical stuff [informal]. I undrestand very well.
Too much advertize [parts of speech confusion] from the sponser SSGA (Masaki Sugihara)
Not just being a classroom style, it was very interesting to hear many-sided opinions from various panelists
Discussion about asset allocation, or philosophy about pension fund
Third time →It showed Secomd time on the name tag: Please make sure that there is no mistake

This translation contains various ESL issues.