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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/05/26 17:45:50

日本語

Mは寿司が大好物と聞いてAはMと回転寿司に夕食にでた。だがMは好物の寿司を目の前にしても食べようとしない。実は苦手なネタを出されたのだ。その寿司屋はMの苦手なネタしかなく、Mは満足していなかった。そこでAは他の店にいこうと誘うが、Mは宗教の都合で牛肉が食べられないので断った。近くのステーキ屋には牛肉の入ってないメニューもあることが分かったので2人はステーキ屋で食事をすることにした。Aは牛肉の入ってないメニューをMの為に提案した。だがMは料理に牛肉が入っていないか心配している。

英語

M said he loves sushi so A took M out to revolving sushi bar for dinner. However, M doesn't want to eat sushi even though he loves it. This sushi bar only had the sushi that he doesn't like, and he was not satisfied. So A asked him to go to another restaurant, but he disagreed since he can't eat beef because of his religious reason. We found out that the stakehouse nearby didn't have menu that will not contain beef, so they went to that restaurant. A suggested the menu that does not contain beef to M. But M is worried that the food contains beef.

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chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/26 18:06:20

元の翻訳
M said he loves sushi so A took M out to revolving sushi bar for dinner. However, M doesn't want to eat sushi even though he loves it. This sushi bar only had the sushi that he doesn't like, and he was not satisfied. So A asked him to go to another restaurant, but he disagreed since he can't eat beef because of his religious reason. We found out that the stakehouse nearby didn't have menu that will not contain beef, so they went to that restaurant. A suggested the menu that does not contain beef to M. But M is worried that the food contains beef.

修正後
A heard that M loves sushi so A took M out to revolving sushi bar for dinner. However, M doesn't want to eat sushi, his favorite. It turns out that this sushi bar only had the sushi toppings that he doesn't like, and he was not satisfied. So A asked him out to go to another restaurant, but he disagreed since he can't eat beef because of his religious reason. They found out that the steakhouse nearby served the dishes that do not contain beef, so they went to that restaurant. A suggested the menu that does not contain beef to M. But M is worried that the food contains beef.

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