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An opportunity for tourists to come and sweat with Muay Thai Kick Boxing!
Welcoming suitable for beginners and experience people

Don't only watch kickboxing but come and experience the greatness!
Unfortunately we do not have any staff who are proficient in English, but even without words staff are polite and kind in their support.
Additionally we can prepare a course that is taylor made to your needs.
Enjoy Kickboxing without the stress.

☆ On the day please wear clothes which you can workout in, a towel, and an additional change of clothes.

One lesson is 3000円

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An opportunity for tourists to come and sweat with Muay Thai and Kick Boxing!
Welcoming beginners and experienced people.

Don't only watch Muay Thai and kick boxing but come and experience the greatness!
Unfortunately we do not have any staff who are proficient in English, but even without words staff are polite and kind in their support.
Additionally we can prepare a course that is tailor-made to suit your needs.
Enjoy Kickboxing without the stress.

☆ On the day please bring clothes which you can workout in, a towel, and an additional change of clothes.

One lesson is 3000 JPY

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I am also slightly concerned that the item you were interested in and purchased has not been delivered yet.
The item is usually delivered within two to there weeks.
Today is passing the 2 week mark so please wait one more week.
I am also frequently checking the tracking number.
I hope for it to be delivered soon.

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I am concerned that the item you purchased has not arrived yet.
The item usually arrives at the customer within two to there weeks after shipment.
Two weeks have elapsed today, so please wait one more week.
I keep checking the tracking number regularly.
I hope you will receive it as soon as possible.

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As I have been able to return the ticket, as planned please book an airplane ticket and hotel for the 6th and the 7th of August.
Please also employ the interpretator as planned.
Additionally are you able to make deep fried squid and deep fried octopus in your factory?
Is everything ok to go as planned?
Also please send me your email address.

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As I have been able to repurchase the ticket, as planned please book an airplane ticket and hotel for in 6th and out 7th of August.
Please also arrange the interpreter as planned.
Additionally, are you able to make deep fried squid and deep fried octopus in your factory?
Is everything ok to go as planned?
Also please send me your address.

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At the moment we have no Pro stock, so this time is the original and V2000 ok?

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At the moment we have no Pro in stock, so this time is the original and V2000 ok?

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Why not start from a transaction of roughly 3000 dollars?
We anticipate a long and amicable relationship with your company.

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Why not start from a transaction of roughly 3,000 dollars?
We anticipate a long and amicable relationship with your company.

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I am mailing from the EMS forwarding address.
There is a point where the invoice is left out please correct it. My check has been left out.
Please send the verification of proof of origin, which does not need correction, together with the other documents on next week's Monday.
We would like to make the next container as soon as possible, therefore is it ok if we export the attached good to you from Japan? If you are happy with this we will ship the next container to Hochimin. My boss also said that they would like to order 10 tonnes of goods from your factory.

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I am emailing from the EMS forwarding address.
As there is a point where the invoice is left out, please correct it. My check has been left out.
Please send the verification of proof of origin, which does not need correction, together with the other documents on next Monday.
We would like to make items for the next container as soon as possible, so is it ok if we export the attached good to you from Japan? If you are happy with this we will ship the next container to Ho Chi Minh. Our president said that he would like to order 10 tonnes of goods from your factory.

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In the office Japanese is essential. If Japanese is fine then I would like to introduce you to an agency, how is this for you?

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In the office Japanese is essential. If it is fine, I would like to introduce you to an agency, how is this for you?

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I would like to place an order for next time. This time I would like to order it with sea mail. The contents of the order are as below. Are the conditions for sea mail FOB?

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I would like to place the next order. This time I would like to order it with sea mail. The contents of the order are as below. Are the conditions for sea mail FOB?

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Thank you for your mail, I was taken aback!
I was also happy to receive the amazing photos. Thank you!!

Also happy birthday to Stefan!
Us having the same birthday is rare isn't i.
I have not met any one with the same birthday as me so I am really happy.

My sister and I are well, my sister has started working as a choir teacher in Tokyo.

How is the new stadium?
I am really looking forward to the new song.

I hope Stephan had a great Birthday.

Thank you very much.

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Thank you for your mail, I was taken aback!
I was also happy to receive the amazing photos. Thank you!!

Also happy birthday, Stefan!
Us having the same birthday is rare (not quite right).
I have not met anyone with the same birthday so I am really happy.

My sister and I are well. She has started working as a choir teacher in Tokyo.

How is the new stadium (wrong word)?
I am really looking forward to the new song.

I hope Stephan (should be 2nd person) had (tense?) a great birthday.

Thank you very much.

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Canon プリントヘッドに直接なPAYPAL額を教えてください。今の供給先は発送に対する問題があるみたいです。
連絡は○○
私のフィードバックは５０００以上１００％好意的で是非ご覧ください。

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Canon プリントヘッドに直接なPAYPAL額を教えてください。今のサプライヤーは供給に際して問題があるみたいです。
私の連絡先は○○です。
私のフィードバックをご覧ください。５０００以上、１００％好意的です。