Hitomi Gruenberg (h-gruenberg) — 付けたレビュー

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欠陥のある/正常に動作しない
買い手のコメント：ジャケット/インナーライニング腕、腰、胴の下のほうで絡まっていました。指示通りに洗濯しましたが、インナーライニングはひどく絡まったままでした。これでは着ることができません。―　全額払い戻しをお願いします。

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欠陥のある/正常に動作しない
買い手のコメント：ジャケット/インナーライニング腕、腰、胴の下のほうで束になっていました。指示通りに洗濯しましたが、インナーライニングは集まったままでした。これでは着ることができません。―　全額払い戻しをお願いします。

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I have ordered 3 items. When the arrive in can you please send them? I will be paying by PayPal, could you please send me a payment request including the postage cost. I await your reply

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I'll order 3 items. When it's arrived, can you please send them? I will be paying by PayPal, could you please send me a payment request including the shipping cost. I'm awaiting your reply.

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We are very sorry for the late reply.
The dimension of the product is 36 (US4) × 42 (US10).
If you want bigger sizes, expand it before you print or print in the original size and cut it open.

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We are very sorry for the late reply.
The size range of this product is 36 (US4) to 42 (US10).
If you want bigger sizes, make an enlarged print or cut it open after you print it out the original size.

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#アマゾン

商品が日本から返品されますので、”アナと雪の女王　クリストフ　人形”をご都合のよい方法で経済的な航空便で我々へご返送頂き、送料を返金しますので下記のリンクから送料をお知らせ下さい。

http://www.amazon.com/contact-us

我々は誠意を持って対応し、あなたに損害を与えないよう可能なすべての手を尽くします。

https://www.amazon.com：生成された返送用ラベルについては、箱の中に入れておいて頂く様お願いします。

こちらへご返送をお願いします。：

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#アマゾン

商品が日本から返品されますので、”アナと雪の女王　クリストフ　人形”をご都合のよい時に一番安い航空便で我々へご返送頂き、送料を返金しますので下記のリンクから送料をお知らせ下さい。

http://www.amazon.com/contact-us

我々は誠意を持って対応し、あなたに損害を与えないよう可能なすべての手を尽くします。

https://www.amazon.com:生成された返送用ラベルについては、箱の中に入れておいて頂く様お願いします。

こちらへご返送をお願いします。：

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We couldn't return the payment until the products arrive at Japan. That's because of the possibility of losing our products and money at the same time.
We will return the payment once the products returned without any damage.

We explained several times to buyer that the full payment return would be made only if the products could be delivered back completely. However, buyer couldn't accept our explanation and require us to return payment while the products was still in America. We may lose our products and money if the buyer insist.

1. Although the shipment of delivery was late, we had already claimed that it might took no more than 10 days.

Buyer bought the products on May 14, and we delivered them on May 16. Japan Post Air (Track No. RR905710443JP)
The arrival date should be May 21, but unfortunately postponed and arrived on May 24.

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We can't return the payment until the products arrive at Japan. That's because of the possibility of losing our products and money at the same time.
We will return the payment once the products are returned without any damage.

We've explained several times to buyer that the full refund would be made only if the products are back in nice condition. However, buyer couldn't accept our explanation and demanded to us to return the payment while the products were still in America. We may lose our products and money at this state.

1. Although the delivery was late, we had already announced that it might take max. 10 days.

Buyer bought the products on May 14th, and we delivered them on May 16th. Japan Post Air (Track No. RR905710443JP)
The arrival date should be May 21st, but unfortunately, was postponed and it arrived on May 24th.

元の翻訳
#We only allowed to be paid by cash. Please be aware that we do not accept credit-card payment.
#If you reserved the target goods beforehand, all the payment must be paid in advance.
#Please confirm that "the ways of shipping and receiving at the stores" at the CD selling booths in each concert venue.
#If you chose shipping, shipping cost will be charged to the total cost.
# Please be sure that we do not accept refund once you reserved the goods in advance. The defective goods can be exchanged.

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#We accept cash only. Please note that we do not accept credit card payment.
#If you reserved the target goods, all the payment must be paid in advance.
#Please confirm with the CD sales booths in each concert venue regarding of our delivery(pickup/ shipping etc.).
#If you chose shipping, shipping cost will be charged to the total cost.
# Please be sure that we do not refund once you reserved the goods in advance. The defective goods can be exchanged.

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There are many customers for special event such as client dinner, anniversary and birthday.
We offer service staff on each tables and ask viands which is not good at and the other request.
We keep always in our mind that customers can spend happy hour.

Recommending for a date, because of attaching weigh to independent table. ↵
Interior of chic impression based on black. Using ingenuity for lightning and layout to keep independence of each tables, making consideration for individual privates.
Rich space for adults is most suitable for a date.

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There are many customers come for special events such as reception dinner, anniversary and birthday.
We offer service staff on each tables who takes care of customer's special needs and requests like each customer's likes or dislikes.
We keep always in our mind that customers can spend happy hour.

Our independent and private table layout is perfect for dates.↵
Our interior based on black gives chic impression. Using ingenuity for lighting and layout to keep independence of each tables, making consideration for individual privates.
Rich space for adults is most suitable for a date.

元の翻訳
Mr. Mizuguchi, Teruaki
Mizuguchi Teruaki↵
With thinking what our customers want, configure the menu.

Born in 1977. Since He was in elementary school, he has liked cooking, and was to aspire to be a cook naturally. Workplace for the first time was the restaurant ship around the Tokyo Bay. Then he traveled around Europe for 3-4 months, feel culture and authentic cuisine in his skin and deepen the profound knowledge. He became the chef of the 'Ginza KAZAN' from in 2005. Because it is a shop has a large amount of female customer, he has been working thinking like incorporating the fruit to the menu, even stuck to the delicate dish and customer satisfaction at first.

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Chief. Mizuguchi, Teruaki
Creat menu with care of what customers want.

Born in 1977. Since he was in elementary school, he has liked cooking, and was to aspire to be a cook naturally. Workplace for the first time was the restaurant ship around the Tokyo Bay. Then he traveled around Europe for 3-4 months, experienced culture and authentic cuisine which resulted in deepenied his knowledge. He became the chef of the 'Ginza KAZAN' in 2005. Because this restrant has a large amount of female customers, He is very particular about creating menu to incorporate with a lot of fruits and delicate dishes.↵

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Few days ago I have sent a message along with a picture. Please take a look at this picture.. Witout a part I can not ware this product.

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Few days ago I have sent a message along with a picture. Please take a look at that picture. Without the part I can not install this product.

元の翻訳
After reconsideration, I could make time to meet Nami.
Let me know when you decide what time and where in Tokyo we meet.

Japanese customers patronized it.
When can I order 2013 collection?
I wonder if you could send me a complete catalogue.

I would love to order each 10 of straps in the picture, 10 Black straps and 5 Tan straps.
Would you ship them with the back order which I ordered last time?
Please let me know when you can ship them as well.

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After reconsideration, I made time to meet Nami.
Let me know when you decide what time and where in Tokyo we will meet.

Japanese customers patronized it.
When can I order 2013 collection?
I wonder if you could send me a complete catalogue.

I would love to order 10 of each straps in the picture, 10 Black straps and 5 Tan straps.
Would you ship them with the back order from last time?
Please let me know when you can ship them as well.

元の翻訳
●Kairo for being stuck on clothes(disposable type)
●Use: protection against the cold, keeping your body warm, and prevention of the cold
●Usage: Take the Kairo out of the package right before using, remove the paper, and [Stick the Kairo on a Cloth without rubbing it.]
●Do not stick a Kairo directly on your skin.
●Works great on you waist

●Carbonic acid gas foaming type
●Medicinal bath additive
●Put a tablet in a bath tab with hot water(180-200L), and get it dessolved completely before taking a bath.
●Your body gets warm and it continues for a while after a bath.
●This bath additive softens bath water and is mild to skin.

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●Kairo for being stuck on clothes(disposable type)
●Use: protection against the cold, keeping your body warm, and prevention of the cold
●Usage: Take the Kairo out of the package right before using, remove the paper, and [Stick the Kairo on a Cloth without rubbing it.]
●Do not stick a Kairo directly on your skin.
●Works great on you waist

●Carbonic acid gas foaming type
●Medicinal bath additive
●Put a tablet in a bath tab with hot water(180-200L), and let it dessolved completely before taking a bath.
●Your body gets warm and it continues for a while after a bath.
●This bath additive softens bath water and is mild to skin.

元の翻訳

ご注文いただきありがとうございます。16-inch R-Rated Ted Plushの発注を確認いたします。こちらの商品がPlushのR-rated版であるかを明らかにしたいのですが、言い回しの中で不適切な言葉を使うといった際どいバージョンではございません。↵
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優先すべきはお客様にこちらの商品をお届けするということを強調したいです。
ご検討のほどよろしくお願いします。
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ご注文いただきありがとうございます。16インチTed ベアRバージョン(18歳以上オンリー)の発注を確認いたしました。こちらの商品はTedのクリーンバージョンではなく、そのままのRバージョン(18歳以下には不向き)ですことを発送前にお客様にご了解していただきたくご連絡しております。
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ご確認のほどよろしくお願いします。
敬具、Begum9