graceoym (graceoym) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
イギリスさん、
届いていないメッセージがあるということでしょうか。もう一度送ってみませんか。

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イギリスさん、
届いていないメッセージがあるということでしょうか。もう一度送っていただけますか。

元の翻訳
OKです。請求書をお送りします。昨日話していた他の商品をご所望ですね。

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OKです。請求書をお送りします。昨日話していた他の商品もご所望ですね。

元の翻訳
If you can admit those conditions, you may allow to make contracts with our members.

Thank you for your understanding.

Beside, please tell us the appropriate sizes of the pictures to put them on your web site. It takes a while but we prepare for it.

It is not simple to explain the price of the sword, but if you want only the Shirosaya (the sham which you can stick the sword in it), we can offer it from 13000 dollars.

We need 6 month to 1 year to make them.

If you only want Shirosaya, we can prepare it for 6 month. But if you want to have more improvements on such as saya or gaku, it might take 1 year to make those.

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If you can admit those conditions, you may allow to make contracts with our members.

Thank you for your understanding.

Beside, please tell us the appropriate sizes of the pictures to put on your web site. It takes a while but we will prepare for it.

It is not simple to explain the price of the sword, but if you want only the Shirosaya (the sham which you can stick the sword in it), we can offer it from 13,000 dollars.

We need 6 months to 1 year to make them.

If you only want Shirosaya, we can prepare it in 6 months. But if you want to have more improvements on such as saya or gaku, it might take 1 year to make those.

元の翻訳
I return some goods that I bought from you by reason of defective goods.
I've already sent 6 goods.
I think you have received the goods, so please refund the price of 6 immediately.
EMS tracking number:

In addition I have 7 defective goods on hand.
I will return them, please refund the money.

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I return some goods that I bought from you by reason of being defective goods.
I've already sent 6 goods.
I think you have received them, so please refund the price of 6 immediately.
EMS tracking number:

In addition, I have 7 defective goods on hand.
I will return them, please refund the money.

元の翻訳
Lots of Japanese people use a cute lunch box, lunch bag and a water bottle for lunch time to enjoy. We are featuring many items relating to lunch time.
Nowadays, there are a lot of recipes for cute hand-made japanese lunch box on the internet. Let's make a lunch box with these items! The T-shirt with a cat that wears big glasses is cute! Not only girls who like Harajyuku fashion but all girls can't miss it if you are interested in Japanese cute fashion.

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Lots of Japanese people use cute lunch boxes, lunch bags and water bottles and enjoy their lunch. We are featuring many items for lunch time.
Nowadays, there are a lot of recipes for cute hand-made Japanese lunch box on the internet. Let's search them and make a lunch box with these items! The cat drawn on the T-shirt with big glasses is cute! Not only girls who like Harajuku fashion but all girls can't miss it if you are interested in Japanese cute fashion.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your response.
Certainly I confirmed your tracking number.
It was delivered to your home on June 6. Since you were absent, it was apparently hold at delivery office until June 20.
After storage term was expired on June 21, it was returning to a sender.
I am very sorry you were unable to receive the item.
You can choose either re-delivery free of charge or full refund.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Have a good day!

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Thank you for your response.
Certainly I confirmed your tracking number.
It was delivered to your home on June 6. Since you were absent, it was apparently hold at the delivery office until June 20.
After storage term was expired on June 21, it was returning to the sender.
I am very sorry you were unable to receive the item.
You can choose either re-delivery for free of charge or full refund.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Have a good day!

元の翻訳
I want to purchase this one, but I can't put it in the cart.
Please tell me how.
Thank you.

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I want to purchase this item, but I can't put it in the cart.
Please tell me how.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
The product was dirty so I am preparing to send it back.
It costs $13 to do this.
Do I pay this fee?
I think you should pay this $13 charge.

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The product was dirty so I am preparing to send it back.
It costs $13 to do this.
Do I have to pay this fee?
I think you should pay this $13 charge.

元の翻訳
Dear Sir;
My account was restored. Thank you very much.
I have one question.
My UK account was restored, but my accounts in Germany and France were still suspended.
Recently, my accounts in all countries were restored, but accounts in Germany and France were suspended again.
Can you tell me the reason why? Do I have to bring up the improvement plan to Germany and France respectively?
I strongly want to restore all my accounts. Please tell me the issue about my account.
Thank you.

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Dear Sir;
My account was restored. Thank you very much.
I have one question.
My UK account was restored, but those in Germany and France are still suspended.
Recently, my accounts in all countries were restored, but those in Germany and France were suspended again.
Can you tell me the reason why? Do I have to bring up the improvement plan for German and French respectively?
I strongly want to restore all my accounts. Please tell me if there is any issue about my account.
Thank you.