chee_madam — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
アダプターの本体は全く別のものです。

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アダプターの本体は全く別のものです。(商品の違いに関する説明なので、全く違う種類のアダプターです、みたいないみでしょうか？）

元の翻訳
As for the tracking number 420342389400111899561328745397,
it is written as Leather, but it is not real leather.
It is the same product as the tracking number 420342389400111899561328745151.
Please confirm it again.

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As for the tracking number 420342389400111899561328745397,
it is written as Leather, but the material for the item is not the real leather.
It is the same product as the tracking number 420342389400111899561328745151.
Please confirm it again.

元の翻訳
I am going to arrive Osaka on Monday evening.
As for the return from Osaka, it is going to be on Thursday evening.
I am going to set appointment-times with several customers so that you are able to be with us to talk business.
Also, I am going to be accompanied with my father. He is very keen on meeting you in Osaka.

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I am going to arrive Osaka on Monday evening.
As for the return from Osaka, it is going to be on Thursday evening.
I am going to arrange appointments with several customers in accordance with your availability.
Also, I am going to be accompanied by my father. (I will be traveling with my father as ) he is very keen on meeting you in Osaka.

元の翻訳
I will be arriving in Osaka in early evening on Monday.
I will leave from Osaka in early evening on Thursday.
I would like to arrange appointments of some customers during your available time.
And, I will be with my father for this trip. He told me that he really wanted to see you in Osaka.

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I will be arriving in Osaka in early evening on Monday.
I will leave from Osaka in early evening on Thursday.
I would like to arrange appointments with some customers for the time you are available.
And, I will be traveling with my father for this trip, as he told me that he really wants to see you in Osaka.

元の翻訳
I don't mind if you will divide the above items for two shipping.

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I don't mind if the above items are shipped in two shipments.

元の翻訳
I can't tell this much to just anyone.
If I can't tell you, would support be difficult?
If so, I will give up updating today and wait for the next update.

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I just cannot disclose the authorization information to third parties.
Without the information, would it make it difficult for you to provide the support?
If so, I will give up updating today and wait for the next update.

元の翻訳
FTP information is as follows.


Could you tell me the file name that you changed, if possible?

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FTP information is as follows.


Could you tell me the name of the file that you changed, if possible?

元の翻訳
Hello.
I received the item safely.
Thank you.
I asked to appraise if it is a real one or not, and it was appraised to be false one.
Therefore, I would like to return it immediately.
Please refund 24,055 Japanese Yen.
I will return the item to you immediately.
I request that you process it promptly before it developed into a big problem.

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Hello.
I received the item safely.
Thank you.
I have had it appraised for its genuinity, and found out that it was fake.
Therefore, I would like to return it immediately.
Please refund 24,055 Japanese Yen.
I will return the item to you immediately.
I request that you process it promptly before it developed into a big problem.

元の翻訳
With regard to the package with tracking #420342389405511699000407154330, the tracking information has indicated "UTL", but what does it mean?
Please let me know what kind of condition it is.

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With regard to the package with tracking #420342389405511699000407154330, the tracking information has been indicated as "UTL", but what does it mean?
Please let me know what kind of status it is.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
The merchandise is in stock.
Once you order one, we’ll ship it.

Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.
The merchandise is in stock.
Once you order one, we will ship it.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
We still have some stock. The item will be shipped to you after you place an order.
Sincerely

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Thank you for your message.
We still have some of that merchandise in stock. The item will be shipped to you after you place an order.
Sincerely yours,

元の翻訳
I am sorry for the late reply.

I can arrange my schedule if the plan is in the following date.

Aug. 18 (Mon): from 5:00 to 6:00 pm
Aug. 19 (Tue): from 1:00 to 2:00 pm.

I look forward to your reply.

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I am sorry for the late reply.

I can arrange my schedule for the following dates and times:

Aug. 18 (Mon): from 5:00 to 6:00 pm
Aug. 19 (Tue): from 1:00 to 2:00 pm.

I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
As for this item, we have few in stock and the discount limit for the sales price is $1,300.
Your understanding would be very much appreciated.

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Thank you for your message.
As for this item, we have few in stock and the best price we can give you is $1,300.
Your understanding would be very much appreciated.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
There is not much storage left of this item, so the most I can price down is 1300$.
Thanks,

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Thank you for your message.
There is not much stock left of this item, so the best price that we can give you is $1300.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
By A, I was unable to pay by some error.
I will transfer the amount for the item from the bank,↵
so please let me know your account number of the bank.
Thank you.

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By A, I was unable to pay due to some error.
I will transfer the amount for the item from the bank, so please provide me with your bank account number.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
The payment failed via the method A with an unknown error.
I will try transferring the product price from a bank, so please let me know your bank account number.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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The payment failed via the method A due to some error.
I will try paying for the product by bank remittance, so please let me know your bank account number.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
I couldn't pay in the way of A due to some errors.
I will remit the merchandise price from a bank, so please tell me numbers of your bank account.
Thank you in advance.

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I couldn't make payment through A due to some errors.
I would like to pay for the goods through bank remittance, so please tell me the details of your bank account.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Today we have heard from the post office. They say that the parcel has already arrived in Kazakhstan.
We asked the international post office to confirm with Kazakhstan regarding the parcel. However, as parcels cannot be tracked in Kazakhstan, they say they are not sure how long it will take to find them out. Sometimes they are found out very soon and sometimes it takes a month.
I will contact you as soon as further information comes to hand. We appreciate your patience.

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Today we have heard from the post office. They say that the parcel has already arrived in Kazakhstan.
We asked the international post office to confirm with Kazakhstan regarding the parcel. However, as parcels cannot be tracked within Kazakhstan, they say they are not sure how long it will take to find them out. Sometimes they are found out very soon and sometimes it takes a month.
I will contact you as soon as further information comes to hand. We appreciate your patience.

元の翻訳
Today we have received the reply from Post Office. They confirmed the postal matter had arrived at Kazakhstan.
As the track within Kazakhstan is impossible, we have currently asked Internal Post Office to confirm the whereabouts of the post in Kazakhstan.
We expect the result at an early date, but it might take one month if late.
Once upon the successive information, we will contact you. We are very sorry for the late process.

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Today we have received a response from the Post Office. They confirmed the postal matter had arrived at Kazakhstan.
As it is impossible to track the status within Kazakhstan, we have currently asked the Internal Post Office to confirm the whereabouts of the post in Kazakhstan.
We expect the result at an early date, but it might take one month if late.
Once we have more information, we will contact you. We are very sorry for the inconvenience this delay may have caused you.

元の翻訳
There was a contact from the post office today. The parcel has arrived to the Kazakhstan.
As it is untraceable in Kazakhstan, we asked for the confirmation from international post office to Kazakhstan post office,↵
however, it may be found very soon, but it may take a month for the latest.
We will contact you as soon as more information come to us. Sorry for your inconvenience.

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We have heard from the post office today, and they have told us that the parcel has arrived in Kazakhstan.
As the shipment status is untraceable within Kazakhstan, we asked the international post office to confirm the status with Kazakhstan post office. We have learned that it may be found immediately if early, but there is a possibility that it may take as long as a month.
We will contact you as soon as we have information available to us. Sorry for your inconvenience.

元の翻訳
I have received the item.
When I checked it, the scale which the doll supposed to have was missing.
Would you please send the scale as soon as possible.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I have received the item.
When I checked it, the scale which the doll supposed to have was missing.
Would you please send me the scale as soon as possible.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
I have received the goods.
When I was checking them I realized that the doll was missing its balance.
Can I ask you to send the balance as soon as possible please?
Thank you.

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I have received the goods.
When I was checking them I realized that the scale (balance) which the doll is supposed to hold was not enclosed in the package.
Can I ask you to send the balance as soon as possible please?
Thank you.