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I found now. I have not found an error in the website of "What is your production environment?"↵
But I see the error in the website of demonstration and my website,

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I have just noticed now that the error is not displayed on your production website?. However, I see the errors on the demonstration site and my website,

元の翻訳
I noticed the site of your public performance environment (?) doesn't diplayed eroor.
It becomes the error in a demonstration site and own site.

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I noticed the site of your production environment (?) doesn't display the error.
However, errors are displayed on the demonstration site and my website.

元の翻訳
Paradox is a new ad network that enables to promote not risk but application for high level users.

Its advertisement is listed confused in contents of application where it is listed, and thereby we can expect an effect with high retention.

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Paradox is a new ad network that enables to promote the apps to quality-conscious users without risks.

The advertisements are listed under the cloak of the content provided by the apps where they are listed, thereby enabling us to expect higher retention.

元の翻訳
It is possible to describe "gift" in the invoice and to describe "used camera(lens)" as the product name.
But as it is a breach to ebay policy to describe a price lower than the actual price in an invoice, we will not do that.
Sorry but please understand.

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We can indicate "gift" in the invoice and describe "used camera (lens)" as the product name.
However, we cannot indicate the price lower than the actual price, as it is a breach of ebay policy.
Sorry but please understand.

元の翻訳
We can list "gift" in invoice and "used camer(lens)" in name of the item.

However, we do not list a lowered price of the item since it violates a policy of ebay.

We apologize to you.

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We can list "gift" in invoice and "used camera (lens)" as the name of the item.

However, we do not list a lowered price of the item since it violates a policy of eBay.

We apologize to you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact me.
I have never shipped to Portugal. I don't understand about the customs.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do anything for you.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I have never shipped to Portugal, so I don't know anything about the customs there.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do anything for you.

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Thank you for inquiring.
I have never shipped anything to Portugal. I wouldn't know about the customs.
I'm sorry I couldn't be of any help.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
I have never shipped anything to Portugal, thus I wouldn't know anything about the customs there.
I'm sorry that I couldn't be of any help.

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ABC Support

I purchased A on August 20, 2014 but I mistook to put my e-mail address at the time of purchase.

This is a wrong e-mail address: B

Regarding B’s e-mail account, the service has been stopped since March this year so I still cannot access to A e-mail that you have sent.

Could you send A e-mail to the correct e-mail address again?

This is a correct e-mail address: B

I sent a code and attached a screen shot of Paypal payment record as proof of purchase.

Code: C

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ABC Support

I purchased A on August 20, 2014 but I have entered a wrong e-mail address at the time of purchase.

Wrong e-mail address: B

Regarding e-mail account B, the service has been abolished since March this year so I still cannot access to e-mail for A that it should have been sent to me by you.

Could you send e-mail A to the correct e-mail address again?

Correct e-mail address: B

I am forwarding the code and screenshots showing the PayPal payment record as proof of purchase.

Code: C

元の翻訳
ポルトガールに発送する前に、海関を通す貨物の問題をないようにしてください。

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以前、ポルトガルに発送したことがありますか？また、その際に通関の問題がありましたか？

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The package and the wrapping which I returned to you is exactly same condition as it came to me.
That is, I sent back with the same wrapping and the box as you sent me.
I do not understand that you complain about the packaging condition and refuse receiving the returned goods.
Your conduct is a sin against faith.

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The package and the wrapping which I returned to you is exactly the same condition as it was delivered to me.
That is, I have returned the item with exactly the same wrapping and the box as you sent me.
I do not understand the reason for you complaint about the packaging condition and refuse receiving the returned goods.
Your conduct is a sin against faith.

元の翻訳
Have you shipped the item A?
I have not received the AWB number from you yet?

If you have shipped the item A, would you please let me know the AWB number?
If you have not, would you tell me when it would be shipped.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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Has the item A been shipped out already?
I have not received the AWB number from you yet.

If you have shipped the item A, would you please let me know the AWB number?
If you have not, would you tell me when it would be shipped.

Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
It would be completely a rip-off of the template below. If you have permission, it's OK though. But the quality of the design would be getting worse.

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It would be a complete rip-off of the template below. If you have permission, it's OK though. But the quality of the design would be getting worse.

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Obviously you have stolen from the template below. I wish you had a permission. But the design looks dull.

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Obviously it is plagiarized from the template below. It shouldn't be any problem if they had a permission. But the design looks lame.

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Thank you for your message.
We have already refunded the product price to your account.
It takes time for the data to be updated.↵

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Thank you for your message.
We have already refunded the amount we have initially received for your product purchase.
It should show up on your account sometime soon.

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Thank you for the message.
Concerning the item's price, I have given you a refund.
It should soon show at your account.

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Thank you for the message.
I have already refunded you the amount you have paid for the product.
It should be show at your account any time.

元の翻訳
あなたがこのアイテム、衣服、またはレンズを売る理由、をお願いいたします。

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あなたがこの商品を売ろうとする理由はなんでしょうか？本体またはレンズに摩耗している箇所があるのでしょうか？どうぞお知らせ下さい。

元の翻訳
この商品を手放そうとされる理由はなにかあるのでしょうか、本体やレンズに傷などかあるのでしょうか？

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この商品を手放そうとされる理由はなにかあるのでしょうか、本体やレンズが摩耗しているのでしょうか？

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Thank you for the message.
We deeply apologize that we sold the items which are prohibited to sell in Amazon.
We have already removed all the pointed items from the listings.
We are grateful if you can confirm it.
Please let us know if there is any item we forgot to remove.↵
Thank you for you cooperation as we will immediately remove the items if remaining.

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Thank you for the message.
We deeply apologize that we sold the items which are prohibited to be sold in Amazon.
We have already removed all the relevant items from the listings.
We are grateful if you can confirm it.
Please let us know if there is any item we forgot to remove, so that we can immediately remove it from our store.↵
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
I paid you $51.85 and also $23.49 for international shipping. I would like to get $75.34 back if it's full refund. I would pay my return shipment.

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In addition to $51.85 which I have paid to you, I have paid $23.49 to the international courrier which you have used. I would like you to issue me a refund of $75.34, if you are giving me a full refund. I will cover the shipping charges for the return,

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message. The product will be shipped soon, so please wait. We are sorry to tell you that the product is expected to be delivered in a week, since it takes more time for being a oversea delivery.

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Thank you for your message. The product will be shipped as it becomes available, so please wait. ↵
We are sorry to tell you that the product is expected to be delivered in a week, since it takes more time for the international shipping.

元の翻訳
The items I received were totally different from what I ordered.
Please send the items I ordered immediately.

GD140613303-2: Color is wrong.

QJ10512428: Totally different items were delivered.

Please send above two items immediately.

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The items I received were totally different from what I ordered.
Please send the items I ordered immediately.

GD140613303-2: The item is in wrong color.

QJ10512428: Totally different item was delivered.

Please send above two items immediately.

元の翻訳
We can send goods to Indonesia.
We only accept PalPal as a payment option.

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We can send (ship のほうがいいかもしれませんね） goods to Indonesia.
We only accept PalPal as a payment option.

元の翻訳
We are able to sent the product to Indonesia.
You can pay through Paypal.

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We are able to send the product to Indonesia.→We can ship our items to Indonesia.
We accept payment through PayPal.

元の翻訳
I have informed by the Japan post today that the item has been still retained at the below post office in America.



According to the Japan post, the USPS had been attempted to call you up several times, but they failed to reach you.
I am sorry for taking up your time, but I would like to request you to get in touch with the post office to arrange the date on which you would be able to receive the item.

Also, we will request the USPS to retain the item until you will receive it as it has passed considerable days after beginning the retention.
Thank you for your understanding and cooperation.

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I have been informed by the Japan Post today that the item still has been retained at the below post office in the US.



According to the Japan Post, the USPS had attempted to call you up several times, but they failed to reach you.
I am sorry for taking up your time, but I would like to request you to get in touch with the post office to arrange the date on which you would be able to receive the item.

Also, we will request the USPS to retain the item until you will receive it as it has passed considerable days after beginning the retention.
Thank you for your understanding and cooperation.