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元の翻訳
Thank you for your confirming of return product.
I understand about 15% of storage commission.
Please make a refund of another amount
I wish to receive via Papal
I am sorry for bothering you
From now on, I hope to receive your support
Kind regards
Fukuyama

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Thank you for your confirming of return product.
I understand about 15% of storage commission.
Please make a refund of the balance
I wish to receive via Papal
I am sorry for bothering you
From now on, I hope to receive your support
Kind regards
Fukuyama

元の翻訳
Could you ship all the products I have ordered together?
2013120434899
2013120330490
2013112922173
Please ship the above product together.
About the missing product of QJ131107414-1 you contact me, please cancel it.
Please arrange the refund for the canceled part
Please refund via Paypal
Please stop shipping the wrong product arbitrarily

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Could you ship all the products I have ordered together?
2013120434899
2013120330490
2013112922173
Please ship the above product together.
About the missing product of QJ131107414-1 you have contacted me, please cancel it.
Please arrange the refund for the canceled part
Please refund via Paypal
Please stop shipping the wrong product arbitrarily

元の翻訳
1. Today, I shipped the product. I shipped Japanese candy which foreigner is interested in. I think it will arrive within 10 days. I also sent a sticker of AAA of bicycle shop of my resorting. When looking at the Western style clothes I can see that there is colder than Tokyo.
2. This week, Is the owner of BBB? I will go to Japan from US because of the business trip. I also came the cafe of my friendly neighbor.

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1. Today, I shipped the product. I shipped Japanese candy which foreigner is interested in. I think it will arrive within 10 days. I also sent a sticker of AAA of bicycle shop of my resorting. When looking at the Western style clothes I can see that there is colder than Tokyo.
2. This week, The owner of BBB? arrived I will go to Japan from US because of the business trip. He also came the cafe of my friendly neighbor.

元の翻訳
Thank you for buying A
I am very sorry , but today We shipped on SAL flight by Japan post.
The customer has paid the postage for option that selected EMS
We will refund immediately 23 USD for postage option
It takes around 2 weeks to arrive Australia by SAL flight so please keep patient more for the item arrival
Tracking number is AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa
Sorry for bothering you so much

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Thank you for buying A
I am very sorry , but today We shipped on SAL flight by Japan post.
The customer has paid the postage for option that selected EMS
We will refund immediately 23 USD for postage option
It takes around 2 weeks to arrive Australia by SAL flight, so please keep patient more for the item arrival
Tracking number is AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa
Sorry for bothering you so much

元の翻訳
Hello, I am very happy because I can buy such a wonderful product.
Please send me the total amount
Please describe 100 Euro in the Invoice for shipping
It is just for tariff counter-plan
Thank you and best regards

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Hello, I am very happy because I can buy such a wonderful product.
Please send me the total amount
Please describe 100 Euro in the shipping invoice
It is just for tariff counter-plan
Thank you and best regards

元の翻訳
Regarding to the order,I am so sorry but I can not accompany your request
I will contact you when it was able to deliver rose earlier than December 11.
Regarding to the order on 1st Dec, I heard that it is canceled once.
sincerely, I am so sorry for bothering you thing time
From now on, hope to receive your support
Kind regards

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Regarding to the order,I am so sorry but I can not accompany your request
I will contact you when it was able to deliver rose earlier than December 11.
Regarding to the order on 1st Dec, I heard that it is canceled once.
Sincerely, I am so sorry for bothering you this time
From now on, I hope to receive your support
Kind regards

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
I understand the contents you told me.
In case the product arrive to me after you deal with the refund you made, I will contact you as soon as possible when I receive the product.
Then, I promise to you about giving back the refunded amount

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Thank you for your contact.
I understand the contents you told me.
In case the product arrives to me after you deal with the refund you made, I will contact you as soon as possible when I receive the product.
Then, I promise to you about giving back the refunded amount

元の翻訳
I want to confirm about one thing in hurry.
It is about the life of the battery.
When I assume the resistance of the skin with 1MΩ, set the volume at the MAX and use continuously (Summary, Until it it no battery anymore), How long the battery last?

I am waiting for your prompt action

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I want to confirm about one thing in hurry.
It is about the life of the battery.
When I assume the resistance of the skin with 1MΩ, set the volume at the MAX and use continuously (Summary, Until it it no battery anymore), How long does the battery last?

I am waiting for your prompt action

元の翻訳
Thank you for your response.
I want to buy for the price,but I don't know where it is "Price per Doug" so please tell me it.
I only see"buy it now" like that on products page.

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Thank you for your response.
I want to buy at that amount,but I don't know where it is "Price per Doug" so please tell me about it.
I only see"buy it now" like that on products page.

元の翻訳
Let me ask a question about the price before sending.
Is it property that I input only product price into price?
Do I have to add the delivery charge in US?
The next message is displayed on the price input screen.
Is there something disadvantage or penalties,if I send products by agree without clicking Confirm?
The next message was displayed when I made upward adjustment for price.
Please tell me how to deal with this problem.
Should I send the screen copy of invoice on email?

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Let me ask a question about the price before sending.
Is it property that I input only product price into price?
Do I have to add the delivery charge in US?
The next message is displayed on the price input screen.
Is there something disadvantage or penalties,if I agree and ship the products without clicking Confirm?
The next message was displayed when I made upward adjustment for price.
Please tell me how to deal with this problem.
Should I send the screen copy of invoice on email?

元の翻訳
I have a question about the declared price.
・Should I put only price of the product as "price"?
Do I need to add domestic shipping to the price?
・The following message appears on the price declaration screen.
If the product is shipped without having confirmed it, will there be any inconvenience or penalty?
・When I corrected the declared price, I received the following message.
Please tell me what I need to do.
Should I email a copy of the invoice screen?

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I have a question about the declared price before shipment
・Should I put only price of the product as "price"?
Do I need to add domestic shipping to the price?
・The following message appears on the price declaration screen.
If I agree and ship the product without clicking confirm, will there be any inconvenience or penalty?
・When I corrected the declared price, I received the following message.
Please tell me what I need to do.
Should I email a copy of the invoice screen?

元の翻訳
I forgot to write this.
Please ask A to ake the document previously mentioned.
I found out that the person in charge at B had a trouble with the customs, and the person in charge of the custom clearance got upset and that's why it's taking extra days.
If you canot create the documents, I'll return the item once so please change the forwarding company from B to xx and resend it.
If xx cannot send it, i'm afraid to ask you this but please make refund.
If I use B, it takes time till I receive it, and the item of A I bought from other company in US was sent by xx and already received.

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I forgot writing this.
Please ask A to make the documents previously mentioned.
I found out that the person in charge at B had a trouble with the customs, and the person in charge of the customs clearance got upset and that's why it's taking extra days.
If you can't create the documents, I'll return the item once so please change the forwarding company from B to xx and resend it.
If xx cannot send it, i'm afraid of asking you this, but please make refund.
If I use B, it takes time till I receive it, and the item of A I bought from another company in US was sent by xx and already received.

元の翻訳
In relation to the Japan Pharmaceutical Affairs Law, I have fixed materials A and B.
Please replace it with the following updated version attachment. Please also print and keep a copy of attachment C.

I have added "Lot No" in the "confirmation section" of article 4.4.
I have added an input column for the "Lot No" in a separate sheet.

I have added an input column for the "Lot No" in all the documents. It does not matter if it is the same with the "Production No" so please input the "Lot No.".

Please input the "Lot No" of the raw materials to the "Lot No" section in the table of material D.

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In relation to the Japan Pharmaceutical Affairs Law, I have fixed documents A and B.
Please replace it with the following updated version attachment. Please also print and keep a copy of attachment C.

I have added "Lot No" in the "confirmation section" of article 4.4.
I have added an input column for the "Lot No" in a separate sheet.

I have added an input column for the "Lot No" in all the documents. It does not matter if it is the same with the "Production No" so please input the "Lot No.".

Please input the "Lot No" of the raw materials to the "Lot No" section in the table of document D.

元の翻訳
Hello, the product seems to be kept at the customs.

It seems to be kept at post office or the customs.
All marshmallows were sold out

Although, what was said "replacement", please send this marshmallow.

Please get it.
One more time, I am so sorry for disturb you

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Hello, the product seems to be kept at the customs.

It seems to be kept at post office or the customs.
All marshmallows were sold out

Although, what was said "replacement", please send this marshmallow.

Please get it.
One more time, I am so sorry for disturbing you

元の翻訳
One of the two orders has been missing.
As I would like to track through UPS's website, please send me the tracking number.
As one product does not arrive, please issue a full refund.

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One of the two orders has been missing.
As I would like to track through UPS's website, please send me the tracking number of the 2nd product
As one product does not arrive, please issue a full refund.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the quotation.
The price on the quotation is $650, but the same product can be purchased for $610 on Amazon.
Since this is a large quantity order, would it be possible to lower the price a little bit more?
I would like to buy it for $590 and under.
Thank you for your consideration.

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Thank you for the quotation.
The price on the quotation is $650, but the same product can be purchased at $610 on Amazon.
Since this is a large quantity order, Could you lower the price a little bit more?
I would like to buy it for $590 or less.
Thank you for your consideration.

元の翻訳
Mr. Paul. It was the best today's live. Impression ! Thank you so much.
by the way, please come to Japan!

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Mr. Paul. It was the best today's live. Impression ! Thank you so much.
By the way, please come to Japan!

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the estimates.

I have checked all my local banks, but they only offered money transfer in dollars. I couldn't find any banks that offered direct money transfer to you account in bahts. I'm afraid I couldn't transfer my money today.

Western Union (WU) offers money transfer in bahts, will you be able to receive money that way? I've heard that WU is often used in Thai too.
It would be helpful if we could use WU, as we have to transfer money in the same way from now on.

Also, after you have received the money, could you tell us a rough estimate for the time it takes to finish the rings I have ordered first?

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Thank you for sending me the estimates.

I have checked all my local banks, but they only offered money transfer in dollars. I couldn't find any banks that offered directly money transfer to your account in bahts. I'm afraid I couldn't transfer my money today.

Western Union (WU) offers money transfer in bahts, will you be able to receive money that way? I've heard that WU is often used in Thai too.
It would be helpful if we could use WU, as we have to transfer money in the same way from now on.

Also, after you have received the money, could you tell us a rough estimate for the time it takes to finish the rings I have ordered first?

元の翻訳
We have corrected the record book you have given to us previously.
Please use the attached record book for the item X.
The contents which has had a significant change are as follows;

The column for sampling inspection is newly provided here. Inspect the item according to the ※1 and ※2 and fill either “O” or “X” as a result. If the result is “X”, please write the countermeasure you take into the remarks. Please confirm the contents of three items whether those are correct or not.

The “*” and “#” are added to 7.

After completing the judgment for the shipping, please send us copy of the record book filled with the necessary items according to the provision stated in the clause No. 4 of the contract.

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We have corrected the record book you have given to us previously.
Please use the attached record book for the item X.
The contents which have had a significant change are as follows;

The column for sampling inspection is newly provided here. Inspect the item according to the ※1 and ※2 and fill either “O” or “X” as a result. If the result is “X”, please write the countermeasure you take into the remarks. Please confirm the contents of three items whether those are correct or not.

The “*” and “#” are added to 7.

After completing the judgment for the shipping, please send us copy of the record book filled with the necessary items according to the provision stated in the clause No. 4 of the contract.

元の翻訳
I will send the “task agreement:” stated in the contract so please confirm the details. Specifically, please check the correctness of the contact in charge and the contact details.
If there is no concern, please keep the copy at the manufacturing factory. (Please let us know the completion of checking even no issues). We keep the original. Pleas let us know if there is change of the contact in charge and others. We will also inform you.
Also, please follow the provision stated in the clause No. 4 when shipping the items.
If you have inquiries, please let us know.
The task agreement is required by the Pharmaceutical Affairs Act of Japan.

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I will send the “task agreement:” stated in the contract so please confirm the details. Specifically, please check the correctness of the Liaison Officer name and the contact details.
If there is no concern, please keep the copy at the manufacturing factory. (Please let us know the completion of checking even no issues). We keep the original. Please let us know if there is change of the person in charge and others. We will also inform you.
Also, please follow the provision stated in the article No. 4 when shipping the items.
If you have inquiries, please let us know.
The task agreement is required by the Pharmaceutical Affairs Act of Japan.