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元の翻訳
I am sorry for let you contact me many times.
I have not displayed your company product the 2nd time
Could I ask you to withdraw the claim to B?
Please help me
I am believing in you
Good luck to you!!!

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I am sorry for letting you contact me many times.
I have not displayed your company product the 2nd time
Could I ask you to withdraw the claim to B?
Please help me
I am believing in you
Good luck to you!!!

元の翻訳
I have purchased the following products.
If you send the invoice which has been adjusted to 700 Euro follow to commitment, I will make a payment.

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I have purchased the following products.
If you could send me the invoice which has been adjusted to 700 Euro follow to commitment, I will make a payment.

元の翻訳
Hello.
The product has been stored in customs
Postal has also been stored in customs
Marshmallow has been all sold out.
You said "change", what does it mean? I will send the following Marshmallow
Please eat it by all means.
Once more, Sorry for bothering you.

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Hello.
The product has been kept in customs
Postal has also been kept in customs
Marshmallow has been all sold out.
You said "change", what does it mean? I will send the following Marshmallow
Please eat it by all means.
Once again, Sorry for bothering you.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your real understanding about the Japanese sword.
Japanese sword is not only a lump of iron, a very sharp cutlery,also need to understand that it includes the philosophy and spirituality.
Especially, it is the best aesthetics and philosophy when it is along with Samurai's death.
However, There is a trend to capture the Japanese sword with the art of ornamental only, and we were very concerned about this.
Because you are living with the constantly weapons of a proud solider in honor, your understanding about the soul of Far East's samurai is very natural.

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Thank you very much for your real understanding about the Japanese sword.
Japanese sword is not only a lump of iron, a very sharp cutlery,but also need understanding that it includes the philosophy and spirituality.
Especially, it is the best aesthetics and philosophy when it is along with Samurai's death.
However, There is a trend to capture the Japanese sword with the art of ornamental only, and we were very concerned about this.
Because you are living with the constantly weapons of a proud solider in honor, your understanding about the soul of Far East's samurai is very natural.

元の翻訳
About the Ford Explorer you had bought, because arrival of documents from the previous owner was delayed so departure becomes 4th Dec.Originally, departure date was 27th but it was too early on 25th so it became late. We are making the document so there will be delayed again. Please contact about progress situation

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About the Ford Explorer you had bought, because arrival of documents from the previous owner was delayed so departure becomes on 4th Dec.Originally, departure date was 27th but it was too early on 25th so it became late. We are making the document so it won't be delayed again. Please contact about progress situation

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply.
At present, We are considering purchasing with company's boss.
Sorry for this impolite but could you offer us some discount?
I think that If you offer us some discount it is useful for persuading my boss.
Please think about it.
We will decide purchasing after receiving your offering.We are making payment documents now.
We will take part in the auction within 2-5 days.
At the risk of sounding too forward, please wrap tightly to Impact-resistant material and ship it.
Please support for us.Thank you and best regards.

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Sorry for the late reply.
At present, We are considering purchasing with company's boss.
Sorry for this impolite but could you offer us some discount?
I think that If you offer us some discount it is useful for persuading my boss.
Please think about it.
We will decide purchasing after receiving your offer.We are making payment documents now.
We will take part in the auction within 2-5 days.
At the risk of sounding too forward, please wrap tightly to Impact-resistant material and ship it.
Please support us.Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I want to confirm that, now Boot-Console is out of stock so it is impossible to buy.
Then, I am interested in shipping service
From now quantity will be increased so when I want to purchase large product like wheel I will ask you.
Please let me know if you have any information about shipping cost and order method

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Thank you for your reply.
I want to confirm that now Boot-Console is out of stock so it is impossible to buy.
Then, I am interested in shipping service
From now, quantity will be increased so when I want to purchase large size of items like wheels I will ask you.
Please let me know if you have any information about shipping cost and order method

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I want to confirm that, now Boot-Console is out of stock so it is impossible to buy.
Then, I am interested in shipping service
From now quantity will be increased so when I want to purchase large product like wheel I will ask you.
Please let me know if you have any information about shipping cost and order method

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Thank you for your reply.
I want to confirm that Boot-Console is out of stock and it is impossible to buy it.
Then, I am interested in shipping service
I was thinking that I would like to order a big quantity of items or a larger size of items like wheels from now on.
Please let me know if you have any information about shipping cost and order method

元の翻訳
Thank you for your confirmation.
If time is about 2-3 days I will be waiting so please including it in the package and ship it
Thank you and best regards

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Thank you for your confirmation.
If it's about 2-3 days I will wait so please include it in the package and ship it
Thank you and best regards

元の翻訳
I received watch. I am very satisfied, thank you.
The price of black watch is $4800 but, this is price for how many items?
I want buy 50 items of black one.
Total amount of 50 items of black one is 4250 USD, is it ok?
If it is Okay I will pay via paypal $4250

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I have received the watch. I am very satisfied with it, thank you.
You have mentioned that the price of black watches is $4800 but how many watches can I get on this price?
I want to buy 50 black watches.
Is the total price for 50 black watches $4250?
If it is, I will pay $4250 via Paypal.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I am very interested in this product but could you sell me at lower price
Thank you and best regards

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Hello,
I am very interested in this product, but could you please consider selling it to me at a lower price?
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I am very interested in this product but could you sell me at lower price
Thank you and best regards

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Hello,
I am very interested in this product but could you sell it to me at a lower price?
Thank you and best regards

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply.
Now, I am creating the website which used the product you are dealing
Because the customer deposits for me late so I think of paying for you on 17th.
Thank you and best regards

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Sorry for the late reply.
Now, I am creating the website which used the product you are dealing
Because the customer deposits for me late so I think about paying for you on 17th.
Thank you and best regards

元の翻訳
About Sunday.
Could you change the study place?
A half of my house is my mother office.↵
On Sunday she works hard so could we change to the coffee shop near station?
Time is as schedule-13h50 at ticket barrier of station.
Because this is the first time we meet so I have sent you a picture so that you can recognize me, dose it arrive?
I am a English starter. Even though I read textbook but it could not remember grammar at all.
I hope that I can remember grammar when we have conversation.
I am looking forward to your reply

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It is about the lesson on Sunday.
Could we change the location?
My mother works at home and it won't be convenient for us to have a lesson in my house.↵
So could we change the place to the coffee shop near the station?
We still meet at 1:30pm as scheduled before at the ticket barrier of the station.
Because this is the first time we meet so I have sent you a picture of myself so that you can recognize me. ↵
Did you receive it?
I am a starter for learning English . Even though I read the textbook, I still could not understand the grammar at all.
I hope that I can pick up some grammar when we have English conversation.
I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I will contact when I go Brazil.
Marcelo please contact me when you come Japan.
I will practice so that we can talk in English and Portuguese a little
Thank you very much for sending me an e-mail

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I will contact you when I go Brazil.
Marcelo, please contact me when you come to Japan.
↵
I will practice English and Portuguese so that we can communicate.
Thank you very much for your e-mail.

元の翻訳
ベンダーはAmazonの発送政策を合わなかった。それで、２日１１月に注文したとき３－５日間かかる”発送”を選びました。配信は今１５日１１月から５日１２月まで推計されました

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ベンダーはAmazonのデリバリーポリシーに反しました。１１月２日に注文したとき"配送期間"にて３－５日を選びました。現時点では到着日は１１月１５日から１２月５日くらいになるということでした。

元の翻訳
The following order, Is it possible to change into "standard" because it is ordered in the "Overnight" on its own?
Order No. A128480122
Please refund the difference
If it is impossible, please cancel and order again

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Regarding the following order, is it possible to change to "standard" because it is ordered as the "Overnight" on its own?
Order No. A128480122
Please refund the difference
If it is impossible, I will cancel the order and reorder again.

元の翻訳
システム：NTSC/ PAL DVDリージョン012345678 BDゾーンブルーレイ：A / B/ CDivX/ DivXHD、MPEG4 AVC、HPL4.1、MPEG2、HPML、SMPTE VC1、APL3、MPEG2、HPML、AVCHD、MKV、BD-R/-RE、DVD（NTSCとPALフォーマット）、DVD + /-R/RW、CD、DTS-CDやCD-R/RW、MPEG-1、

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システム：NTSC/ PAL DVDリージョン012345678 BDゾーンブルーレイ：A / B/ CDivX/ DivXHD、MPEG4 AVC、HPL4.1、MPEG2、HPML、SMPTE VC1、APL3、MPEG2、HPML、AVCHD、MKV、BD-R/-RE、DVD（NTSCとPALフォーマット）、DVD + /-R/RW、CD、DTS-CDとCD-R/RW、MPEG-1、

元の翻訳
We can not find the Design Japan Company you have talked to me.
We am doubtful of this company existence, and We do not have an intend to purchase from this company.
We can not contact via phone, A man named Baozheng Di who is inquiring is not Japanese citizen, right?. We think he is Chinese from his name.
Do you think that juridical person company has contacted via Gmail?
We really want to purchase this product,
It is not cheap product so We want to check the shop just for sure.
I am looking forward to the new package's videos

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We could not find the Design Japan Company you have talked to me.
We are doubtful of this company existence, and we do not have an intention to purchase from this company.
We can not contact via phone, A man named Baozheng Di who is inquiring is not a Japanese citizen, right?. We think he is Chinese from his name.
Do you think that juridical person company has contacted via Gmail?
We really want to purchase this product,
It is not a cheap product so we want to check the shop just for sure.
I am looking forward to the new package's videos

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I am very sorry for opening the case last time.
From now I want to meet you to find out the solution.
About this time product, Please count the quantity in your stock.
And then, Could you sell me this product at the same price
If it is possible, I think i can prolong business with you.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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Thank you for your reply.
I am very sorry for opening the case last time.
From now I want to talk to you to find out the solution.
About this time product, please count the quantity in your stock.
And then, could you sell me this product continuously at the same price?
If it is possible, I think I can do business with you for a long time.
I am looking forward to your reply.