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rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 24 Feb 2014 at 14:37

original a. Greetings. Today I have to inform you regrettable notice. Since the item you ordered us the other day was deemed inflammable article with high-pressure gas, we could not send the item. We are very sorry for the inconvenience. We can accept your cancellation. How you can cancel the order: Log in to b. Please choose "Cancel" or "Return" from the order history. I wish you a good luck!

corrected a. Greetings. Today I have to inform you of some bad news. Since the item you ordered us the other day was deemed inflammable article with high-pressure gas, we could not send the item. We are very sorry for the inconvenience. (Because we haven't shipped the item yet,) we can accept your cancellation. How you can cancel the order: Log in to b. Please choose "Cancel" or "Return" from the order history. I wish you a good luck!

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French 16 Dec 2013 at 22:56
Comment laissez-moi savoir とfaites-moi savoirが不自然。　シンプルにj'aimerais bien savoir.....などのほうが自然でしょう。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2013 at 02:18
original Thank you for your email. Please fill in the safety standard for each 20 helmets I purchased from you previously on the excel sheet which I will send you with the information of each helmet by an email for which I was asked by Ministry of Economy of Japan. I apologize for the inconvenience. ↵ ↵	corrected Thank you for your email. Please fill in the safety standard for each 20 helmets I purchased from you previously on the excel sheet which I will send you with the information of each helmet by an email for which I was asked by Ministry of Economy of Japan. I apologize for the inconvenience.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 06 Jul 2013 at 22:03
Comment 問題ないと思います

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 29 May 2013 at 06:13
Comment This translation is understandable. However, I think it's good to remember that though sentences can be really long in Japanese, in Engli...

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 09 May 2013 at 15:45
Comment 勉強になりました。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 04 May 2013 at 21:03
Comment 送り先はsenderではないと思いますが。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 01 May 2013 at 23:46
Comment 簡潔で原文を的確に反映した良い翻訳だと思います。 私も自分が翻訳をするときに、ぜひ参考にさせていただきます。 どうぞよろしくお願い致します。 （"by a cheap method" の部分ですが、「なるべく安く」（つまり、安ければ安いほど良いのでは）ということで...

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Apr 2013 at 21:48
Comment Greetingsという表現は知らなかったんですが、こういう風に使えるんですね。勉強になりました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 24 Apr 2013 at 13:16
Comment 良い翻訳だと思います。 AK-38(NEW)については、新品か新製品かは原文からだとわからないですね。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 24 Apr 2013 at 13:06
Comment 分かりやすくていいと思います。ただNEWは、新製品を指していると思います。

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 19 Apr 2013 at 21:00
Comment 日本語が残っています。 誤訳・誤字、大文字小文字の混在なども散見されます。 なお、英語なので全角文字は使わない方が良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 19 Apr 2013 at 20:17
Comment Good job!

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 18 Apr 2013 at 15:10
Comment for security reasons　が訳してありません。 会社同士のやり取りで、自分の会社のことを指して「私達」という日本語は使いません。 段落の変え方が原文と違います。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 17 Apr 2013 at 21:40
Comment This princess, is a girl who loves fashion and nail art so much. のカンマなど、やや不自然な箇所があります。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 19 Apr 2013 at 17:58
Comment the young people -> young people as the one who holds the license by Osaka Co. (大阪株式会社). -> sounds weird your continued business -> co...

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Apr 2013 at 21:29
Comment 意味は通じると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 19 Apr 2013 at 03:07
Comment 勉強になります。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 19 Apr 2013 at 03:10
Comment 良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 16 Apr 2013 at 09:41
Comment 訳として不自然でなく、日本語の商品説明文としても自然な良い翻訳だと思います。

rated this translation result as ★ English → French 23 Apr 2013 at 17:46
Comment This isn't French....

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French 21 Jan 2014 at 18:21
Comment 主語が統一されていないので　ＪＥなのかＮＯＵＳなのかどちらかにしましょう。　少し不自然な文です。例えば一行目　一例として Tout d'abord, nous tenons à vous présenter nos excuses pour votre commande ...