Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

返事をありがとう。

私が買った２０個のヘルメットの記録をエクセルでお送り

しますのでもうしわけございませんが、それぞれのヘルメットの

安全規格をエクセルに記入してください。

日本の経済産業省にお願いされました。

もうしわけございません。

よろしくお願いいたします。

English

Thank you for your email.

Please fill in the safety standard for each 20 helmets I purchased from you previously on the excel sheet which I will send you with the information of each helmet by an email for which I was asked by Ministry of Economy of Japan.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

Reviews ( 1 )

nyamababy rated this translation result as ★★★★ 22 Jul 2013 at 02:18

original
Thank you for your email.

Please fill in the safety standard for each 20 helmets I purchased from you previously on the excel sheet which I will send you with the information of each helmet by an email for which I was asked by Ministry of Economy of Japan.
I apologize for the inconvenience.
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corrected
Thank you for your email.

Please fill in the safety standard for each 20 helmets I purchased from you previously on the excel sheet which I will send you with the information of each helmet by an email for which I was asked by Ministry of Economy of Japan.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

The message was clearly here and the grammar is OK, but there could have been a better phrasing for this. I'm not sure whether I should put it here or not because it's totally going to change everything.