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元の翻訳
We are really sorry that our goods arrived late.
We discussed about this, and decided to refund 14.50$ of special delivery shipping charges in order to apologize. We would appreciate if you understand our apology.

There are stolen or lost goods, delay in delivery and negligence of notice all over the world on holiday season.

If you don't know how to delete your negative feedback, please check the URL below.

We really hope you have a good New Year.

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We are really sorry that our goods arrived late.
We discussed this internally and decided to refund you $14.50 of special delivery shipping charges [different from the original] as a token of our apology. We would appreciate it if you could accept our sincerest apology.

There are stolen or lost goods, delay in delivery, and negligence of notice [different from the original] all over the world in this holiday season.

If you don't know how to delete your negative feedback, please check the URL below.

We wish you a wonderful new year (you dropped a year-end).↵

元の翻訳
しかしながら、Valleyの比較優位はイノベーションを行うという点にある。むしろ、それはイテレーションの過程を通じて、企業に製品と技術の商品化を行わせるのに必要な、環境的・文化的なインセンティブを与えるものである。

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しかしながら、Valleyの比較優位はイノベーションを行うという点にあるのではない。むしろ、それは企業が繰り返しの過程を通じて製品や技術の商品化を行うために必要な、環境的・文化的なインセンティブを与えるものである。

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This guitar is not stuck a plywood of corina on. The both of its neck and body are made for 3 pieces. It's not a 1-piece corina. It's about 3.5kg weight. This guitar has no scars or marks on its body because it is brandnew.

I'm inquiring MOON about your base guitar. I informed of the conditions of your base guitar and asked a question about the remedy. It is weekend today in Japan, so I will notice you immediately after I receive the reply.

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This guitar does not have Korina wood on it. It's 3 pieces with the neck and body. It's not a 1-piece Korina. It's about 3.5kg heavy. This guitar has no scars or marks on its body because it is brand new.

I'm inquiring to MOON about your base guitar. I informed them of the conditions of your bass guitar and asked them for a remedy. It is the weekend today in Japan, so I will notify you immediately after I receive their reply.

元の翻訳
This guitar is not stuck a plywood of corina on. The both of its neck and body are made for 3 pieces. It's not a 1-piece corina. It's about 3.5kg weight. This guitar has no scars or marks on its body because it is brandnew.

I'm inquiring MOON about your base guitar. I informed of the conditions of your base guitar and asked a question about the remedy. It is weekend today in Japan, so I will notice you immediately after I receive the reply.

修正後
This guitar is not stuck a plywood of Korina on. Both its neck and body are made of 3 pieces. It's not a 1-piece Korina. It's about 3.5kg weight. This guitar has no scars or marks on its body because it is brand new.

I'm inquiring MOON about your bass guitar. I informed them of the conditions of your bass guitar and asked them a question about the remedy. It is weekend today in Japan, so I will notice you immediately after I receive a reply.

元の翻訳
Would you please tell me the size(length * width * height) of the box ? Use inch as a unit, please. I appreciate that you would tell me the weight of the box, if possible. Thank you for assisting me.

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Would you please tell me the size(length * width * height) of the box ? (Use inch as the unit), please. I appreciate if you can also tell me the weight of the box. Thank you for assisting me.