tr_naoki_tokyo_japan — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
12本(フルケース1つ)の注文をしています。ASINコードを受け取りました。この注文で全12本を5/6前に届くように発送してください。注文の総額は113ドルです。

よろしくお願いします。

ロバート

修正後
12本(フルケース1つ)の注文をしています。これが商品に記載されたASINコードです。この注文で全12本を5/6前に届くように発送してください。注文の総額は113ドルです。

よろしくお願いします。

ロバート

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I understand about the spring.
Did you send me the goods I orderd in Apr. 9th, and 17th, yesterday?

Sincerely,

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Thank you for your reply.
I understand about the spring.
Do you mean you sent me the goods I orderd in Apr. 9th, and 17th, yesterday?

Sincerely,

元の翻訳
For that reason we would suggest the wrist strap to be exchanged.

There are two ways to do that.
1. We will exchange it for a strap that is most similar to the Omega's genuine strap.
The design of the strap will be introduced beforehand.
2. We will ship a watch case part only and a strap will not be included so that customer can purchase a strap that he likes after it arrives.
There will be $500 refund for the strap from us.

Please feel free to contact us if there is any other way.

We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
For that reason we would suggest the wrist strap to be exchanged.

There are two ways to do that.
1. We will exchange it for a strap that is most similar to the Omega's genuine strap.
The design of the strap will be introduced beforehand.
2. We will ship a watch case part only and a strap will not be included so that you can purchase a strap that you like after it arrives.
There will be $500 refund for the strap from us.

Please feel free to contact us if there is any other way.

We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
Single[jujika(cross)~film[Ghost story in the school-curse soul of language-]ver.](Type-C)
→single linkaged apply ticket C

mini album [horror songs album+[Ghost story in the school-curse soul of language-]OST(interim)]
→apply ticket for sound truck

Album[Killing Me Softly](Type-A、Type-B、Type-C)
→apply ticket for album

[targeting live-event to apply]
horror live (interim)
special live (interim)

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CD single[jujika(cross)~film[Ghost stories in the school-curse soul of language-]ver.](Type-C)
→entry ticket C for connected with CD single

mini album [horror songs album+[Ghost stories in the school-curse soul of language-]OST(interim)]
→entry ticket for sound truck

Album[Killing Me Softly](Type-A、Type-B、Type-C)
→entry ticket for album

[targeting live-event to apply]
horror live (interim)
special live (interim)

元の翻訳
horror live(interim)/ special live(interim) summery for how to apply

修正後
horror live(tentative title)/ special live(tentative title) summery for how to apply

元の翻訳
[each live event date/ hole]
We will show on official web site when decision.

[destination for apply]
3-1-30
minamiaoyama, minato-ku
Tokyo
〒107-0062
Avex Entertainment CO., LTD
6th music division sales promotion room
Tokyojosiryu [live event]application clerk

※With respect to the handling of personal information※
The parsonal information will be used for only hold the event by each Avex group for example informing elected.

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[each live event date/ hall]
We will show them on the official web site when decision.

[destination for apply]*each live event in common
3-1-30
minamiaoyama, minato-ku
Tokyo
〒107-0062
Avex Entertainment CO., LTD
6th music division sales promotion room
Tokyojosiryu [live event]application clerk

※With respect to the handling of personal information※
The personal information will be used for only hold the event by each Avex group for example informing the prize-winner.

元の翻訳
【Official URL】 http://uula.jp
【Official facebook】 https://www.facebook.com/UULA.official
【Official Twitter】 https://twitter.com/UULA_official

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【Official URL】 http://uula.jp
【Official Facebook】 https://www.facebook.com/UULA.official
【Official Twitter】 https://twitter.com/UULA_official

元の翻訳
■May J. will be on UULA My Selection Corner!
May J. will select "Recommended Music" to listen "On the walk" and "Karaoke songs", in UULA My Selection Corner app where you can enjoy all the cinema, music and animation!
The corner will be available for you to view from Tuesday, 16, April.

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■May J. will be on UULA My Selection Segment!
May J. will choose "Recommended Music" to listen "On the walk" and "Karaoke songs", in UULA My Selection Segment app where you can enjoy all the cinema, music and animation!
The segment will be available from Tuesday, 16, April.