石村達雄 (tatsuoishimura) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I have some requests for you:

・Exhibition and sharing of the Favorite Folder
・Making of plural Favorite Folders
・Making of Playlist
・Indication of the name of the music being played at the moment
・Indication of the play time of whole music

Nice if one can to share and coordinate the user info of ABC Script in this Script, too, which I suppose will make it considerably popular and salable.

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I have some requests for you:

・Publish and sharing Favorite Folder
・Creating several Favorite Folders
・Creating Playlist
・Displaying the name of the music now playing
・Displaying the playlist with duration

It would be nice if we can share and use the user information of ABC Script in this Script. Then you can sell it more.

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Dear Alessandra,
I have returned two jeans by the Japan post's international package today (tracking number ○○○); they say it would arrive in approximately one week.
I attach hereby the image to explain the reason for returning the goods.

・ △△ product made in Italy always has tricolor stitches.
・ The returned goods (w28/w32) does not have a tricolor stitch although they indicate made in Italy.
・ I have never seen other △△ 8B9(w30) than made in Tunisia.
One of the three same products I purchased and not returned is made in Tunisia.

Please check.
Thank you

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Dear Alessandra,
I have returned two jeans by the Japan post's international package today (tracking number ○○○); they say it would arrive in approximately one week.
I attach hereby the image to explain the reason for returning the goods.

・ △△ product made in Italy always has tricolor stitches.
・ The returned goods (w28/w32) do not have tricolor stitches although they indicate made in Italy.
・ I have never seen other △△ 8B9(w30) than made in Tunisia.
One of the three same products I purchased and not returned is made in Tunisia.

Please check.
Thank you

元の翻訳
前回の電子メールでマルレーンと私がお伝えしたとおり、ここでトレーニング・セッション「AGITO Translate – TMと上級ユーザーのためのTMと文節処理」」のためのオンラインセミナーへのご招待をいたします。同セッションは「翻訳メモリ」処理と文節ルールに的を絞った、AGITO translateのジョブに相応の経験がある上級AGITO translateユーザーを対象とするものです

あなたのウェブ・ブラウザでこの「ウェビナー」に参加される場合は、下のリンクの「Lyncミーティングに参加する」をクリックしてください。オーディオは、ご自身のPCに接続しているヘッドセットを使っても、下記提供のダイヤルイン番号と会議IDを使って通常の電話でダイアルインされてもいずれでも結構です。

さらに詳しい情報は招待ページをご覧ください。

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前回の電子メールでマルレーンと私がお伝えしたとおり、ここでトレーニング・セッション「AGITO Translate – TMと上級ユーザーのためのTMと文節処理」」のためのウェビナーへのご招待をいたします。同セッションは「翻訳メモリ」処理と文節ルールに的を絞った、AGITO translate業務に相応の経験がある上級AGITO translateユーザーを対象とするものです

あなたのウェブ・ブラウザでこの「ウェビナー」に参加される場合は、下のリンクの「Lyncミーティングに参加する」をクリックしてください。オーディオは、ご自身のPCに接続しているヘッドセットを使っても、通常の電話でダイアルインされてもいずれでも結構です。下記のダイヤルイン番号と会議IDを使ってください。

さらに詳しい情報は招待ページをご覧ください。

元の翻訳
49 years old woman, injured falling from chair.
Right hand injury, right-handed person, radius distal edge bone fracture AO C2.

So-called rim fracture near the articular facet.
We operated using a APTUS 2.5 locking plate this time.

The most suitable operation method to be studied (what kind of plate to use; other operation method like use of the back side plate which is not introduced in Japan to be considered).

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49 years old female, injured when fell off a chair.
Right-handed, right hand injury with a radius distal fracture AO C2.

So-called rim fracture near the articular facet.
Performed a surgery with a APTUS 2.5 locking plate this time.

What'd be the most appropriate surgical procedure (a consideration for what kind of plate to use, a new dorsal plate not yet introduced in Japan, and other surgical procedues, etc.).

元の翻訳
Thank you for your continued cooperation.

The product which I ordered on 10/10 (order number 700003488) reached me today which is not the one I ordered.
I ordered CUC14-5, but received.

I send enclosed the image of the delivered product and your invoice for your checking.
The invoice says CUC14-5. Probably it is mis-shipping from you.

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Thank you for your continued cooperation.

The product which I ordered on 10/10 (order number 700003488) reached me today which is not the one I ordered.
I ordered CUC14-5, but received CUH14-5.

I send enclosed the image of the delivered product and your invoice for your checking.
The invoice says CUC14-5. Probably it is mis-shipping from you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your mailing me the documents

I received the PDF file of B/L, however our customs broker seems to be wanting the PDF files of the packing list and the invoice, too, so would you please send them to me if possible?

And well, sorry;↵
I have not paid the shipping charge yet .
How much was that?
I will remit it; please send me the bill.

Looking forward to your kind reply.

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Thank you for your mailing me the documents.

I received the PDF file of B/L. However, our customs broker seems to be wanting the PDF files of the packing list and the invoice, too, so would you please send them to me if possible?

And well, sorry, I have not paid the shipping charge yet.
How much was that?
I will remit it, so please send me the bill.

Looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
輸出規制の承認とエージェントの指定

顧客は、xx LLCの（「xx」）製品（その耐久消費財、繊維製品、デザイン/アート/コンセプトワーク、防衛サービスおよび技術データを含むが、これに限定されない）のあるものが、武器の国際的な取引規則、武器輸出規制法または輸出管理規制を含むが、これに限定されない米国の輸出法規の対象となる（かかる各規制製品を「規制製品」いう）場合があることを認めている。顧客は、そのような規制製品が移転されない場合があることを知らされている。

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輸出規制の承認とエージェントの指定

顧客は、xx 社の（「xx」）製品（その耐久消費財、繊維製品、デザイン/アート/コンセプトワーク、防衛サービスおよび技術データを含むが、これに限定されない）のあるものが、武器の国際的な取引規則、武器輸出規制法または輸出管理規制を含む（ただし必ずしもこれらに限定されない）米国輸出規制法の対象となる（かかる各規制製品を「規制製品」という）場合があることを認める。顧客は、そのような規制製品は輸出されない場合があることを知らされている。

元の翻訳
#william

If I ship it out to Japan, how long does it take to arrive?
Do you include the ID band and the putter cover as the last time?
Is it difficult for you to ship it to Japan at $450?

#will

I consider to purchase a SLDR TS 3 Wood and a Hybrid.
What degrees will be the loft of the Hybrid? I will purchase the Hybrid, too, if it is of the desired loft.
How about $260 for the purchase of both, $160 for one (SLDR TS 3 Wood)?

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#william

If I [subject] ship it out to Japan, how long does it take to arrive?
Do you include the ID band and the putter cover as the last time?
Is it difficult for you to ship it to Japan at $450?

#will

I consider purchasing a SLDR TS 3 Wood and a Hybrid.
What degree will be the loft of the Hybrid? I will purchase the Hybrid, too, if it is of the desired loft.
How about $260 for the purchase of both, $160 for one (SLDR TS 3 Wood)?

元の翻訳
The way of art is far, as though it Is endless," he taught. Teacher sometimes made a quiet talk also and the classroom fell silent. Sure, Teacher was trained to shed tears freely as he wished, so he used the skill in his readings from time to time. We studied how you could shed tears as you like, but no one could succeed in doing so.

(1940, Masuji Ibuse)

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The way of art is far, as though it is endless," he taught. Teacher sometimes made a quiet talk and the classroom fell silent. Sure, Teacher was trained to shed tears freely as he wished, so he used the skill in his readings from time to time. We studied how you could shed tears as you like, but no one could succeed in doing so.

(1940, Masuji Ibuse)

元の翻訳
Teacher gave us his lesson that we had to continue with efforts. "I found they said in a program of a certain new school of drama that they had made a spark-flying effort for three months. Though I thought just threemonths effort, howeveer many sparks they made fly, wouldn't be much, they were complaining in the end that the efforts were not rewarded. As for myself, I havemade my spark flying efforts for fifty years, yet not bringing any result.

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The teacher always gave us his lesson that we had to make efforts. "I found they said in a program of a certain new school of drama that they had made a spark-flying effort for three months. Though I thought just three months effort, however many sparks they made fly, wouldn't be much, they were complaining in the end that the efforts were not rewarded. As for myself, I have made my spark flying efforts for fifty years, yet not bringing any results.

元の翻訳
彼女についての迅速なニュースをありがとう。バンベルクから税関まであなたが運転し、彼女は製品をピックアップしたのですね。税関はそうです。関税について彼らが引き受けるレシートとはとかくそうです。で、私が旅行経費を持ちますので、ドラッグにおいてはよい取引でしょう。彼女からのアプローチに期待します。

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彼女についての迅速なニュースをありがとう。バンベルクから税関まであなたが運転し、税関は製品を集荷したのですね。税関はそうです。関税について彼らが引き受けるレシートとはとかくそうです。で、私が旅行経費を持ちますので、ドラッグにおいてはよい取引でしょう。彼女からのアプローチに期待します。

元の翻訳
Some photographs may be different from the goods. The reason: we place the photographs of the same type of goods, which however cannot cover all of them because there are so many of the kinds.

Please check on the web site of 〇△ for the details, . All the products will be shipped from Japan. We purchase all from the regular dealer and they are in the unused (new) states. No imitations, please be assured about that.

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Some photographs may be different from the actual goods. The reason: we posted the photographs of the same type of goods, which however cannot cover all of them because there are so many of the kinds.

Please check on the website of 〇△ for the details, . All the products will be shipped from Japan. We purchase all goods from authorized dealers and they are unused and brand new. Please be assured that we do not handle fake items.

元の翻訳
小口扱い（LCL）出荷、手数料USD300.00USドル/出荷、コンテナー・フレイト・ステーション（CFS） 管理費USD 17.00USドル/CBMが適用されます。
* 引渡し時期
注文確認後12-14週。
* 梱包基準
内部3層、マスター5層の茶色カートン、バブルポリやスタイロフォームは不使用。その他さの包装材の使用要請には、顧客口座への請求が発生します。
* 見本費用は原価プラス300%が適用されます。注文が確認されかつ全アイテムに対して1つの無料サンプルの注文がある場合、各サンプルのFOBコスTが適用されます。
* 価格有効性
6ヵ月以内。
* 品質規格
当社は100%リサイクル・ガラスを使用し、本製品の性質上、同ガラスは以下を含みます。
+ 気泡（最高1.2cm、気泡のサイズは製品寸法による）
+ 薄いライン
+ 不均等な厚さ

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小口扱い（LCL）出荷、手数料USD300.00USドル/出荷、コンテナー・フレイト・ステーション（CFS） 管理費USD 17.00USドル/CBMが適用されます。
* 引渡し時期
注文確認後12-14週。
* 梱包基準
内部3層、マスター5層の茶色カートン、バブルポリやスタイロフォームは不使用。その他の包装材の使用要請には、顧客口座への請求が発生します。
* 見本費用は原価プラス300%が適用されます。注文が確認されかつ全アイテムに対して1つの無料サンプルの注文がある場合、各サンプルのFOBコストが適用されます。
* 価格有効期限
6ヵ月以内。
* 品質規格
当社は100%リサイクル・ガラスを使用し、本製品の性質上、同ガラスは以下を含みます。
+ 気泡（最大で1.2cm、気泡のサイズは製品寸法による）
+ 薄いライン
+ 厚さのバラツキ

元の翻訳
Thank you for your estimate of the postage.
However, as $ 435 is rather high please send it this time to my Chinese partner company.
I will probably name this Chinese partner of mine as the recipient in future, too, when we kick the business into gear.
And would you be good to let this partner call directly the person in charge in your factory in CHina to talk about the details?
I would like to have them discuss about the address and the carrier.
In case there is any difficultyit for that, I would inform you the recipient's address and the carrier we want you to use.

I wait for your answer on the above.

With kindest regards,

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Thank you for estimating the shipment charges.
However, $ 435 is rather expensive, so please ship it to my partner company in China for this order.
I will probably delegate this Chinese partner as the addressee in the future, too, when we kick the business into gear.
And would you be good to let this partner call directly the person in charge in your factory in China to talk about the details?
I would like to have them discuss about the address and the carrier.
In case there is any difficulty for that, I would inform you the recipient's address and the carrier we want you to use.

I wait for your answer on the above.

With kindest regards,

元の翻訳
お送りするケトル数点は明日当方で受け取り、2月20日木曜日にあなたのもとに届く予定になっているむね確認させていただきます。
予約番号は下記の通り。

何でも修理したいものがあるときは、光沢のある灰色のツール・ロールに入ったプロテックツールキットがあなたのお供をします。
iFixit.comの道具マニアたちが設計したプロテックツールキットがあれば、クールなツールを使いたいばかりに、壊れてもいない機器も修理していましそう。
ツールには以下のアイテムを同梱。
プラスチック製開封具、2。機器を損傷しないソフトプラスチック製、手に負えない密閉容器を傷をつけずにこじ開けるのに最適です。

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お送りするケトル数点は明日当方で受け取り、2月20日木曜日にあなたのもとに届く予定になっている旨、確認させていただきます。
予約番号は下記の通り。

何でも修理したいものがあるときは、光沢のある灰色のツール・ロールに入ったプロテックツールキットがあなたのお供をします。
iFixit.comの道具マニアたちが設計したプロテックツールキットがあれば、クールなツールを使いたいばかりに、壊れてもいない機器も修理していましそう。
ツールには以下のアイテムを同梱。
プラスチック製開封具、2。機器を損傷しないソフトプラスチック製、手に負えない密閉容器を傷をつけずにこじ開けるのに最適です。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support.
I had only one problem then; it doesn't display the related images.
I'm sorry but would you please give me advice or make modifications?
It takes time before playing depending on the video, but I don't think this is a problem of Script.

I'm sorry for your time on this, but I appreciate it if you could help me.

And I don't mind if you delete the demo on the A site (also fine if you leave it as is). I think that it may be confusing if the demo is used for the display as it isn't a very popular site.

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Thank you for your support.
I had only one problem; it doesn't display the related images.
I'm sorry but would you please give me advice or make modifications?
It takes time before playing depending on the video, but I don't think this is a problem of Script.

I'm sorry for your time on this, but I appreciate it if you could help me.

And I don't mind if you delete the demo on the A site (also fine if you leave it as is). I think that it may be confusing if the demo is used for the display as it isn't a very popular site.

元の翻訳
I could not use the coupon cord for the following order because of the system error.
Please refund 20% of product price to me.

I have become able to use the coupon cord of PR20 from this order.

I have been sending emails about this matter time and again, but you have shown no sign of refunding it. In the meantime I had the following reply from Ana on March 5.

Go ahead immediately with the procedures of partial refunding for the orders that were not covered with 20%OFF, please.

Thank you in advance for your help.

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I could not use the coupon code for the following order because of a system error.
Please refund 20% of product price to me.

I have become able to use the coupon cord of PR20 from this order.

I have been sent numerous emails regarding this matter but you have shown no sign of refunding. In the meantime, I have the following reply from Ana on March 5.

Please take action for the partial refund for the orders that did not get 20% off as soon as possible

Thank you in advance for your help.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I want to set up a new separate account.
Is it possible?
What should I prepare for that, if any?
Also, can you transfer our proceeds to the European bank account?
Thank you for your cooperation in advance.
I'll keep my fingers crossed for you!

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Hello,
I want to set up another account newly.
Is it possible?
Is there anything that I should prepare for that?
Also, can you transfer our proceeds to the European bank account?
Thank you for your cooperation in advance.
I'll keep my fingers crossed for you!

元の翻訳
My present happiness is in looking you smiling.

Of course I will make every effort for that as well as keep the promise that I won't lie and never cheat on you.

So, would you keep staying by me with that smile for the rest of life.
Then I expect my happiness will be permanent...

Will you please marry me.

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My happiness is in looking you smiling.

Of course I will make every effort for that and I won't lie or ever cheat on you.

So, would you keep staying by me with that smile for the rest of my life?
Then I expect my happiness will be permanent...

Will you please marry me?