takashi80 — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing from us.

Are you satisfied with the product you have bought?

If so, please give us an evaluation of five stars!

修正後
Thank you for purchasing from us.

Are you satisfied with your purchase?

If so, please rate us with five stars!

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing from us.

Are you satisfied with the product you have bought?

If so, please give us an evaluation of five stars!

修正後
Thank you for purchasing from us.

Are you satisfied with the product you have bought?

If so, please give us a rating of five stars.

元の翻訳
I'm in trouble because there is something wrong with the purchase page. An error occurs there and I need help.

I'm waiting for your reply.

修正後
For some reason, I have not been able to process payment as I am having error on the payment page.

I'm waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
あなたのフィードバックがまだ0件なので、あなたに売ることを躊躇しています。
Paypal（ペイパル）のアカウントは持っていますか？　もし持っているならば、あなたに電話して、あなたが信用できる取引相手かどうか確認させていただきたいのですが。
また、219ドルというのは、ebayでの売価としては殆ど最安値です。
売価以外の手数料がかなり高いので。
今回これを売ったからといって、私は実質的には殆ど儲かりません。儲けは10ドル以下かもわかりません。
214.99ドルまでまけることはできるかもしれませんが、正直言って、ebayでは214.99ドル以下の値段にすることは絶対にないです。

修正後
あなたのフィードバックがまだ0件なので、あなたに売ることに懐疑的になっています。
あなたが信用できる取引相手かどうかを見極める為に連絡が取れるPaypal（ペイパル）のアカウントは持っていますか？　
また、219ドルというのは、ebayにおける弊社の売価としては殆ど最安値です。
売価以外の手数料がかなり高いので。
これより$10安くそれらを販売していたら、実質的には利益は上がりません。
214.99ドルまでまけることはできるかもしれませんが、正直言って、ebayを通じた販売ではこれが最終価格となります。↵
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（ここから下は、画面右側の備考欄にもあるとおり、御依頼主が英訳を希望されている部分です。）↵
As I newly registered on eBay, I have have not yet received any reviews/ratings.↵
I would like to give you a ring.↵
Please let me know your phone number.

元の翻訳
The server has stopped working yesterday and today.
I have not figured out a certain cause, but it seems that the server stops more often after the function of ABC is equipped.
And, it also seems that the number of accessing users relate to the stopping of the server (their access requires too much memory?)

Is there any way to turn off the function of ABC? I would like not so much to turn off the expression or the indication of the function as to turn off the function itself.
I am in trouble because the server stops everyday. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

修正後
The server has stopped working yesterday and today.
I have not figured out a certain cause, but it seems that the server stops more often since the function of ABC has been equipped.
Probably it has something to do with the number of user access (they take up too much memory?)

Is there any way to turn off the function of ABC? Instead of turning off the display, I would like to turn off the function itself.
I am in trouble because the server stops everyday. I am looking forward to hearing from you.