takapitan (takapitan) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Thanks you always for your purchases from my auctions.

It appears you want to purchase 300 small boxes and I want to accommodate your request.
How will you sell the small boxes in Canada?

If you promise me that you will not resell them on eBay, I can give you a discount.
The estimates cost is $1,500, postage included, for 300 of the item.

It takes about two weeks to produce the boxes.

Delivery will be either by EMS (express mail service) or airmail and will probably take one week.

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I will send the invoice through PayPal. When you have made payment I'll start manufacturing the boxes.

修正後
Thank you always for your purchases from my auctions.

It appears you want to purchase 300 small boxes and I want to accommodate your request.
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How will you sell the small boxes in Canada?

If you promise me that you will not resell them on eBay, I can give you a discount on them.
According to my estimate, the charge could be $1,500 for 300 boxes with free shipping.

It takes about two weeks to manufacture the boxes.

They will be sent either by EMS (express mail service) or by air, and it will probably take one week to arrive.

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I will send the invoice through PayPal. Once I confirm your payment, I'll start manufacturing the boxes.

元の翻訳
If you can send the current order by next Monday that would be very helpful.

I need parts for A and I need B.
I'm attaching a photo of the parts I need.
I need all the parts that are circled in red.
For A, are the screws and washers included?


For this item, can I purchase just the three parts below?

If this is possible, please tell me the price.

I have an account with Japanese PayPal.
Is it possible to pay this way?
The delivery address is in Florida.
After the order, how many days will it take to arrive?

I hope you can reply as soon as possible. Thank you very much.

修正後
If you could send the current order on next Monday that would be very helpful.

I need parts for A and I need B.
Attached is a photo of the parts I need.
I need all the parts that are circled in red.
For A, are the screws and washers included ?


As for this item, is it possible to purchase just the three parts below?

If it is, please inform me of the price.

I have an account with Japanese PayPal.
Is it possible to make payment through it?
The shipping address is in Florida.
After the order, how many days will it take to arrive?

I would appreciate if you could reply as soon as possible. Thank you.

元の翻訳
As you referred to A previously, we have found that they do not deal with this product XX.

I have confirmed with their website that they are not the exclusive agent for H either.

As far as I konw XX has not marketed in Japan yet.
XX is just great!
It is a shame that XX is not availabe in Japan.
I definitely recommend you to introduce it in the market here.

If A is just one of the distributors of H, could we become an exclusive distributor limited to handle XX alone?

We appreciate your consideration.

修正後
As you referred to A previously, we have found that they do not deal with this product XX.

I have confirmed with their website that they are not the exclusive agent for H either.
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As far as I konw XX has not marketed in Japan yet.
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XX is just great!
ビジネスの表現としては"just great"はくだけすぎかと思います。↵
原文もかなりカジュアルですが、really a wonderful productくらいでいかがでしょう。↵
It is a shame that XX is not availabe in Japan.↵
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I definitely recommend you to introduce it in the market here.

If A is just one of the distributors of H, could we become an exclusive distributor limited to handle XX alone?

We appreciate your consideration.

元の翻訳
Which is the product which I told you through the e-mail?

修正後
Which is the product which I told you through the e-mail?↵
Which product is the one that I mentioned in my email?↵
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文脈がないので難しいですね。↵
文中のwhichは文法的に誤りです。↵
through the e-mail accountなどのように後に名詞が来るならthe e-mailもありですが、ここでは不可です。