スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
貴方の要望が１ユニットであると思いました。

本件をクレジット部へ転送させてください。

よろしくお願いします。

カスタマーサポート

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貴方が１ユニットご希望されていると思っていました。

本件をクレジット部へ転送させてください。

よろしくお願いします。

カスタマーサポート

元の翻訳
Usually nabe large enough to hold with both hands is used because several people eat together, but sometimes at drinking party or kaiseki(formal traditional Japanese cooking), it is served for each person with small nabe.

Recently nabe for 1 person is sold, and when it is used, people sometimes eat by taking directly from the nabe without dividing into rice bowl.

Hot and extraordinary nabes are all gathered.

Information about gathering of hot and extraordinary nabe that is provided at goo ranking.

Popular nabe cooking this year is introduced.↵
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The ranking recommended for those who are sick and tired of usual nabe such as tomato nabe and curry nabe.

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Usually a large pot with both side holders is used for several people eating together, but sometimes at drinking parties or kaiseki (formal traditional Japanese food), it is the small pot that is served for each person.

Recently, those small pots for 1 person use are popular and by using a small pot, people can eat with the pot instead of taking the food out of the pot and then putting it into a rice bowl.

Check out the hot and extraordinary pots.

Information about hot and extraordinary pots is provided at goo ranking.

Goo ranking introduces the most popular hot pots in this year and recommends good choices to those who are sick of usual hot pots such as tomato hot pots and curry hot pots.

元の翻訳
I received dress that I had purchased online on December 25, but side was broken.

I want to return it, but the shipping charge from Japan is 2,000 to 3,000 yen.
Would you pay for it?
I have not worn the dress, and I have not removed the tag.

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I received the dress that I purchased online on December 25, but the side was torn.

I want to return it, but the shipping charge from Japan is 2,000 to 3,000 yen.
Would you pay for it?
I have not worn the dress, and I have not removed the tag.

元の翻訳
Hello.

I received a package that I had ordered.
Thank you.

I might order again.
On that occasion, I hope you will send to me again.

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Hello.

I received a package that I had ordered [tense?].
Thank you.

I might order again.
On that occasion, I hope you will send to me again [send what?].

元の翻訳
I requested to send a package urgently on January 11th. It was prepared to be sent on January 13th, but it was not sent by today.

Please send it immediately.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I requested to send a package urgently on January 11th. It was ready to be sent on January 13th, but it was not until today.

Please send it immediately.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
本日、本荷物の返送のため郵便局に確認。返送に５８ドルかかります。貴方がこの荷物を再送して欲しいか否かを確認したいのですが。

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この商品を返送するため、本日郵便局に確認しました。返送には５８ドルかかります。あなたがこの商品をまだ送ってもらいたかったかどうかを確認したかったのです。

元の翻訳
各時計（モデル）の詳細を記した用紙及びサンスクリーン&石鹸の写真を提供、本用紙を４項目に分離、さらに、同用紙の下部をご確認ください。

フェースローラー&ヘアエンハンスメントの厳密な証明のみならず
携帯電話の付属品及びその構成素材の証明も必要です。
１月３日に復旧工事を行ないます。

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各時計（モデル）の詳細を記した用紙及びサンスクリーン&石鹸の写真をご提供ください。本用紙を４項目に分け、さらに、同用紙の下部をご確認ください。

フェースローラー&ヘアエンハンスメントが何なのかを正確に確認し、
携帯電話の付属品及びその構成素材の証明も必要です。
１月３日に営業再開します。

元の翻訳
こんにちは
今注文をキャンセルします。理由は、発送に時間がかかりすぎるからです。また、貴店の本店が日本にある旨も存じませんでした。

キャンセルは、可能でしょうか。

敬具

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こんにちは
この注文をキャンセルしたいのです。理由は、配送に時間がかかりすぎるからです。また、貴店が日本に拠点を置いている旨も存じませんでした。

キャンセルは、可能でしょうか。

敬具

元の翻訳
The largest Christmas tree in Japan as high as 14.5 meters, which looks as if snow accumulated outside that is covered with snow, appeared.
By sparkling light at mirror ball on the floor, particle of light shines as if snow fell from ceiling along wall.

Pants of shilhouete that both men and women can wear.
Product for unisex.↵
Point of usual parker is long length where we wear.

It covers whole body where it is good for going outside and it can be used for relaxing.↵
We have no problem by wearing it at both front and back at our discretion.

No problem when hip is at face and front is at face.

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One of a largest Christmas tree in Japan appeared as high as 14.5 meters, which looks like coated by snow that was fallen outside.
By sparkling light at mirror ball on the floor, particle of light shines as if snow falls from ceiling along wall.

Pants of silhouette that both men and women can wear.
Product for unisex / standard parka's significant point of longer length.

As it covers whole body that is good for both going outside or as a room wear for relaxing / and you can wear it without checking front or back.

It's no problem if hip is at face and front is at face.

元の翻訳
しかし、貴方はそれを失くしたと言いましたが、私は、それを、既に、受け取っているので、取引しましょう。

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しかし、貴方はそれを失くしたと言いましたが、私は、それを、既に、受け取っているので、どう（取引）しましょうか？

元の翻訳
貴社が販売しているパンドラのネックレスの１つに興味を持っています。
即払いすると最短でいつごろお送りいただけますか。

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貴社が販売しているパンドラのネックレスの１つに興味を持って（検討して）います。
即払いすると最短でいつごろお送りいただけますか。

元の翻訳
In addition, aside from Payoneer, I am working on arrangement of opening account of Union Bank
in California.

I open account of Union bank newly, but please hold money received before I can use Payoneer again.

I am asking to talk about with you.
Currently receiving money is stopped , and our sales activity is stopped where we are at a loss.

I live in Japan, but if you know other way to send money, please let me know.

I appreciate your cooperation.

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In addition, aside from Payoneer, I am proceeding with opening an account at Union Bank
in California.

I open an account at Union bank, but please hold payment until I can use Payoneer again.

I would like to ask you an advice.
Currently I cannot receive money, and I am at a loss as my store cannot continue business.

I live in Japan, but if you know other ways to send money, please let me know.

I appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
What is specific packages?
I cannot understand what you say.
The package is sent so late, and I was wondering if I should inquire?

I checked what is preventing export, but I did not find what violates law.
Is it band of watch called "military strap"?
For confirmation, I attached invoice, and please check it.

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What is specific packages?
I cannot understand what you're saying.
Since the package was sent so late, I was wondering if I should inquire.

I have checked why is preventing to export, but I did not find what violates law.
Could it be the band of watch called "military strap"?
For your reference, please confirm the invoice as per attached.

元の翻訳
First, is cancellation of product informed to you?
As for refunding, at Amazon, amount of the product is officially drawn at credit card when I send notification of sending.

At this moment, amount of order must not be drawn, and please check history of drawing of account at credit card.

For confirmation, I will check the detailed status to Amazon now. I am sorry to make you worry. I will let you know as soon as I find the situation, and please wait for a while.

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First, is cancellation of product [article?] informed to you? [awkward]
As for refunding [awkward], at Amazon, amount [article?] of the product is officially drawn at credit card [article?] when I send notification of sending [awkward].

At this moment, amount [article?] of order must not be drawn, and please check history of drawing of account at credit card [articles?].

For confirmation, I will check the detailed status to [wrong proposition?] Amazon now. I am sorry to make you worry. I will let you know as soon as I find the situation [?], and please wait for a while.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I have not received product yet and I am worried about it very much.
Please check its devlivery.
Thank you.

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Hello.
I have not received the product yet and I am worried about it very much.
Please check its delivery status.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
During this time of year, we have a great number of packages to be delivered,
and thereby we arranged to deliver it as soon as possible.

You cannot receive it before December 25th, and i hope that you understand it.

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During this time of year, we have a great number of packages to be delivered,
and thereby we arranged to deliver it as soon as possible.

However, the package won't be able to delivered to you before December 25th. We hope that you understand it.

元の翻訳
Hello.

My business is going well.
I welcome that you are going to start business in Japan.

I am interested in becoming your partner.
What do you expect about me?

Distribution?
Market research?
Sales as agent?
Manangement of account?

I want to determine by details of what you request.

I hope that you and I can grow ourselves together.

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Hello.

My business is going well.
I welcome that you are going to start business in Japan.

I am interested in becoming your partner.
What do you expect from me?

Distribution?
Market research?
Sales as agent?
Manangement of account?

I want to determine by details of what you request.

I hope that you and I can grow together.