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I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have an inventory of A, I cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have A in stock, I would like to cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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Hello! How are you? And how are your children?
I apologize that I have not contacted you.
I was injured and had been in the hospital.
Could you help me in the work again?
If you can, please let me know. I will be waiting for it.
First you set information of 40 pieces of item by Excel file in drop box.
Then I set a file that I condsidered to be necessary in the box.
Please upload information of this item by 5 pieces at commerce.
The followings are your login ID and password.

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Hello, how are you? How are your children?
I apologize that I have not contacted you.
I was injured and had been in the hospital.
Could you please help me with my business again?
If you can, please let me know. I will be waiting for it.
I have put an Excel file that contains 40 item information in Dropbox.
I also put another file that I considered to be necessary in the box.
Please make sure to upload the item information by five to commerce.
The followings are your log in ID and password.

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June 2014: Live and Dance festival in Yomiuri Land "Sueyoshi Shuta Special Dance Number"

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June 2014 LIVE & DANCE festival at Yomiuri Land "Shuta Sueyoshi SPECIAL DANCE NUMBER"

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Koda Mirai new single album "Hotel" August 6th 2014 OUT! Picture with special bonus is up, contents of all recording is publicized and start trial listening of coupling!

On the day, we request that you follow the instruction and attention of the staff.
If you do not follow them, we might refuse your partcipation.
The sponsor is not responsible for the accidents that occur by not following the instruction and attention of the staff in the hall.
You are strictly prohibited from reselling, copying and faking. The ticket that was obtained by reselling, etc. is invalid.

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KUMI KODAi new single album "Hotel" August 6th 2014 OUT! Picture with special bonus is up, contents of all recording is publicized and start trial listening of coupling!

On the day, we request that you follow the instruction and attention of the staff.
If you do not follow them, we might refuse your participation.
The sponsor is not responsible for the accidents that occur by not following the instruction and attention of the staff in the hall.
You are strictly prohibited from reselling, copying and faking. The ticket that was obtained by reselling, etc. is invalid.

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Thank you for purchasing. As you said, I found a thin cloudness in the lens.It is thin, and it is not usually found when the picture is taken for this, but I have not verified it in detail by all the patterns in the pictures

We are a seller, so we cannot verify it to such a detail.
If you would like to cancel it, we will accept it. In that case, we request that you do not rate both sides. Please reply us.

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Thank you for purchasing. As you said, I found a thin dirt in the lens.It is thin, and it is not usually found when the picture is taken for this, but I have not verified it in detail by all the patterns in the pictures

We are a seller, so we cannot verify it to such a detail.
If you would like to cancel it, we will accept it. In that case, we request that you do not rate both sides. Please reply to us.

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i received the item a few minutes ago, but the following item was missing.


I ordered 5 pieces, but I found only 4 pieces in the package.
Could you send another one immediately?
It might give you an extra work, but I appreciate your cooperation.

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i received the package earlier, but the following item was missing.


I ordered 5 pieces, but I found only 4 pieces in the package.
Could you send another one immediately?
It might give you an extra work, but I appreciate your cooperation.

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Thank you for purchasing the item this time.
This item is an item with special specification that was made in↵
commemoration of 15 year, and it is imported from Japan.↵
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The language that is shown on the screen of the item is Japanese.↵
The manual in the package of the item is also listed in Japanese, and↵
there is no manual by English version.↵
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The YouTube below is explained in English, and we hope that you see it.

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Thank you for shopping with us this time.
This item is a special specification commemoratin gour 15th anniversary imported from Japan. The language shown on the item screen is in Japanese. The user's manual enclosed in the item package is in Japanese too, and English manual is not available. Our following YouTube video includes English guidanse, so we hope you find it helpful.

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Dear Responsible Person in Company

How do you do?

My name is . I run a seller central shop in Amazon.co. UK.

I listed your digital camera in the sales page of Amazon.co.UK in the beginning of last month.

I did not know about it. I apologize to have given you an inconvenience sincerely↵
because I listed your item that has not been authorized to sell within EEA at Amazon.

I apologize again.

I deleted all your items listed. I report it to you.

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To whom it may concern at 〇〇 Company,

How do you do?

This is 〇〇 from 〇〇, which runs a seller central shop on amazon.co.uk.

In early last month, I have listed your digital camera in our sale page of amazon.co.uk.

Even though it was not of our knowledge, we would like to express our sincere apologies for the inconvenience that has been caused to you for having listed your item on Amazon without the sales authorization within European Economic Area (EEA).

Once again, we are very sorry abut this.

Please be informed also, that we have already deleted the entire items of yours from our list.

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I found now. I have not found an error in the website of "What is your production environment?"
But I see the error in the website of demonstration and my website,

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I have noticed now that I do not found an error in the website on your production website.
But I see the errors in the demonstration website and my website,

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I found now. I have not found an error in the website of "What is your production environment?"↵
But I see the error in the website of demonstration and my website,

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I have just noticed now that the error is not displayed on your production website?. However, I see the errors on the demonstration site and my website,

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Paradox is a new ad network that enables to promote not risk but application for high level users.

Its advertisement is listed confused in contents of application where it is listed, and thereby we can expect an effect with high retention.

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Paradox is a new ad network that enables to promote the apps to quality-conscious users without risks.

The advertisements are listed under the cloak of the content provided by the apps where they are listed, thereby enabling us to expect higher retention.

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Paradox is a new ad network that enables to promote not risk but application for high level users.

Its advertisement is listed confused in contents of application where it is listed, and thereby we can expect an effect with high retention.

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Paradox is a new ad network that enables to promote an application for high quality users without risk.

As its advertisement shows being mixed up with the partner's app contents, and the high retention effect is anticipated.

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We can list "gift" in invoice and "used camer(lens)" in name of the item.

However, we do not list a lowered price of the item since it violates a policy of ebay.

We apologize to you.

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We can list "gift" in invoice and "used camera (lens)" as the name of the item.

However, we do not list a lowered price of the item since it violates a policy of eBay.

We apologize to you.

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We can list "gift" in invoice and "used camer(lens)" in name of the item.

However, we do not list a lowered price of the item since it violates a policy of ebay.

We apologize to you.

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We can list the item as a "gift" in invoice. and "used camer(lens)" as the name of the item.

However, we do not list a lowered price of the item since it violates a policy of eBay.

We apologize to you.

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We can list "gift" in invoice and "used camer(lens)" in name of the item.

However, we do not list a lowered price of the item since it violates a policy of ebay.

We apologize to you.

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We can mention the item as a "gift", and "used camer(lens)" as the name of the item.

However, we do not mention the lowered price of the item since it violates a policy of eBay.

We apologize to you.

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I looked for the ticket by which I can leave Osaka on Wednesday, but its price is double of the normal price.

If possible, I would like to travel based on the following schedule.
As I search brand in this trip, I will pay for the ticket.

If you don't mind, I would like to talk about business in the hotel where you are staying in the eventing of the day I arrive.

On Tuesday I am going to make an appointment for the customer we already have when you have the time.

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I looked for the ticket by which leaves Osaka on Wednesday, but its price is double the normal price.

If possible, I would like to travel based on the following schedule.
As I will also look for new brand name products for myself in this trip, I will pay for the ticket.

If you don't mind, I would like to talk about the business at the hotel you will stay in the evening of the day I arrive.

On Tuesday I am going to make an appointment for the customer we already have when you have time.

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Our store purchased this item from Japanese manufacturer and it is a new item that has been delivered to the warehouse of Amazon in USA.↵
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The customs duties are included in the price listed. Therefore, whe we deliver it to the customer, you do not have to pay by adding it. This item is guaranteed by Japanese manufacturer for 1 year. If you need repairing including intial defect, please contact our store.

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Our store purchased this item from Japanese manufacturer and it is a new item that has been delivered to the warehouse of Amazon in USA.　The customs duties are included in the price listed. Therefore, when we deliver it to the customer, you do not have to add the tariff on top of it. This item comes with 1-year warranty from the Japanese manufacturer. If you need repairing including intial defect, please contact our store directly.

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There was a problem in distribution system of Amazon. Europe.
We are very sorry to have given an inconvenience to Amazon. Europe.
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As the rating from customer remained the same, we send an email again.
Currently we have been rated highly 9 times, and it is double of the time↵
when we send an email.
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We will be rated again from customers as soon as we receive the item continuously.

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There was a problem in distribution system of Amazon Europe.
We are very sorry for having caused an inconvenience to Amazon Europe.
As we have saved up a certain amount of customer feedback, we wanted to email you again.
Currently we have received 9 good evaluations, and it is doubled since our last email.
We have the perspective for receiving more customer evaluation as soon as they receive the item.

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Thank you for reply.

Thank you for admitting that it is fake.
I do not want the fake one.
Then please refund in full including the fee.

I talked with consumer center, police station, Agency of Consumer, credit card company, Yahoo and Google. So the card company wil cancel for settlement of the card. But as there is your website, please return the item and process refunding.
Otherwise, the Agency of Consumer will announced that your website is dangerous and encourage people not to use it across the nation.

I appreciate your prompt reply.
Have a nice day!

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Thank you for reply.

Thank you for admitting that it is fake.
I do not want the fake one.
Then please refund in full including the fee.

I talked with consumer center, police station, Agency of Consumer, credit card company, Yahoo! and Google. So the card company will cancel for settlement of the card. However, you need to return the items and refund for your website.
Otherwise, the Agency of Consumer will announce that your website is dangerous and encourage people not to use it across the nation in Japan.

I appreciate your prompt reply.
Have a nice day!

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Hello.
I received the item safely.
Thank you.
I asked to appraise if it is a real one or not, and it was appraised to be false one.
Therefore, I would like to return it immediately.
Please refund 24,055 Japanese Yen.
I will return the item to you immediately.
I request that you process it promptly before it developed into a big problem.

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Hello.
I received the item safely.
Thank you.
I have had it appraised for its genuinity, and found out that it was fake.
Therefore, I would like to return it immediately.
Please refund 24,055 Japanese Yen.
I will return the item to you immediately.
I request that you process it promptly before it developed into a big problem.

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By A, I was unable to pay by some error.
I will transfer the amount for the item from the bank,↵
so please let me know your account number of the bank.
Thank you.

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By A, I was unable to pay due to some error.
I will transfer the amount for the item from the bank, so please provide me with your bank account number.
Thank you.

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By A, I was unable to pay by some error.
I will transfer the amount for the item from the bank,↵
so please let me know your account number of the bank.
Thank you.

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By A, I was unable to pay by some error.
Please let me know your bank account number as I will transfer the amount for the item from the bank.
Thank you.