スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Good day!
Thank you for purchasing.
Today I found that the explanation and picture of my item were different
while I was checking it before sending the item.
I apologize for it. Would you please agree to the cancellation?

The driver CD that is an accessory of the item is not attached due
to change of the model (I attach the picture).
You can download it from the Internet.
However, I do not recommend it to you since it is in Japanese.
We will refund you and send an item as our apology to you.
I apologize again.

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Good day!
Thank you for purchasing.
Today I found that the explanation and picture of my item were wrong
while I was checking it before sending the item.
I apologize for it. Would you please agree to the cancellation?

The driver CD that is an accessory of the item is not attached due
to change of the model (I attach the picture).
You can download it from the Internet.
However, I do not recommend it to you since it is in Japanese.
We will refund you and send an item as our apology to you.
I apologize again.

元の翻訳
We came here from the Los Angeles Airport by car and stayed overnight.
The host was very kind and his explanation was easy to understand.
It was my first experience to use the AB, but I did not have to worry.
The room was spacious enough even for 3 people, and we were lucky
to have the beer and coca cola in the refrigerator at free of charge.
The bed and sheet were clean, and we did not find any problem.
If I have a chance to stay in Los Angeles next time, I would like to stay here.
I would also like to recommend it to those who stay here.

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We came here from the Los Angeles International Airport by car and stayed overnight.
The host was very kind and his explanation was easy to understand.
It was my first experience to use the AB, but I did not have to worry.
The room was spacious enough even for 3 people, and we were lucky
to have the beer and coca cola in the refrigerator free of charge.
The bed and sheets were clean, and we did not find any problem.
If I have a chance to stay in Los Angeles next time, I would like to stay here again.
I would also like to recommend it to those who plan to stay in Los Angeles.

元の翻訳
As there are a number of things that we cannot understand unless we manage, we would like to do business with you even if you have not carried out the business much.
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What we should do to provide the high quality musical instruments in Japan to customers in Hong Kong and other countries by being ahead of rival sellers that you listed.
How we should develop the "strength" that only we have.
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We would like to manage by cooperating with you.

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As there are a number of things that we are not sure without any experiences, we would like to have a go with you even if you don't have much business experiences.
What we should do to provide the high quality Japanese musical instruments to customers in Hong Kong and other countries by being ahead of competitors?
How we should develop our own "strength"?↵
As you mentioned, these are what we need to find out.
We would like to find out how we can achieve them with your support.

元の翻訳
As there are a number of things that we cannot understand unless we manage, we would like to do business with you even if you have not carried out the business much.

What we should do to provide the high quality musical instruments in Japan to customers in Hong Kong and other countries by being ahead of rival sellers that you listed.
How we should develop the "strength" that only we have.

We would like to manage by cooperating with you.

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As there are a number of things that we cannot understand unless we manage, we would like to do business with you even though you have not carried out the business much.

What should we do to provide the high quality musical instruments in Japan to customers in Hong Kong and other countries by being ahead of rival sellers that you listed?
How w"should develop the "strength" that only we have?

We would like to manage by cooperating with you.

元の翻訳
As I was busy by preparation for participating in the NAMM Show 2015 that takes place in Anaheim in USA, I delayed in responding to you.

I saw all the documents you had sent to me.
I list our ideas.

1. We can arrange not only the musical instruments manufactured by Ishibashi but also all the ones we have in the Japanese market as an inventory. We would like you to pay at least 100 dollars as a fee or the fee corresponding to the price of the musical instrument you purchase.

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As I was busy at the preparation for the NAMM Show 2015 at Anaheim in USA, I was not able to respond to you soon.

I checked all the documents you had sent to me.
I would like to mention our ideas as follows:

1. We can arrange not only the musical instruments sold at Ishibashi Music but also all the ones available in the Japanese market. We would like to charge at least 100 dollars as a commission or the commission according to the price of the musical instrument you will purchase.

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing.
Regarding the item that we delivered this time,
it is the last one that we have had stored for a long time in our store.
Do you mind the scratch at outside of the box?
It is a new item where no one has touched the content in the box.
If you do not like it, you can return it.
We hope that you understand it.
As it is not sold by manufacturers, we cannot send the item
that replaces it.
We will pay back 10 dollars to you via Paypal if you use it.
You can contact us by positive feedback or e-mail.
We appreciate your cooperation.

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Thank you for purchasing.
Regarding the item that we delivered this time,
it is the last one that we have had stored for a long time in our store.
Do you mind the scratch outside the box?
It is a new item where no one has touched the content in the box.
If you do not like it, you can return it.
We hope that you understand it.
As it is not sold by manufacturers, we cannot send the item
that replaces it.
We will pay back 10 dollars to you via Paypal if you use it.
You can contact us by positive feedback or e-mail.
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me regarding the sending. I checked the slip of sending and will refund the shipping charge immediately. I will refund the amount of the item after its arrival. May I ask you a little patience by it? I would like to refund the amount of the item immediately, but a staff at Paypal told me not to refund in advance strictly. Also, I was swindled where I refunded before the arrival of an item and the buyer did not return the item after that recently. I have to handle it subject to the policy established. I appreciate your understanding.

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Thank you for contacting me regarding the shipment. I checked the shipping slip and will give you a refund for the shipping fees immediately. I will refund you for the amount of the item after its arrival. May I ask you a little patience until then? I would like to refund you for the amount of the item immediately, but a member of the staff at Paypal strictly instructed me not to give a refund in advance. Also, I had it happen recently that I gave a refund before the arrival of an item and the buyer never returned the item. This is why I have to follow with the established policy. I very much appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
Good day!
I could not use a coupon of xx a few minutes ago.
I would like you to change that I can use it again,
and order 2 of xx additionally.
I am looking forward to your reply.

I am going to purhase the Samsonite.
Do you give me the discount as much as the one for the Rimowa?
If you like, I would like to continue the business with you from now.
By considering the result I have had so far,
could you lower the price of the items other than the Rimowa?
May I ask you to discuss it with your boss?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

I cannot discuss it any more. I understand.

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Good day!
I could not use a coupon of xx a few minutes ago.
I would like you to change that I can use it again,
and order 2 of xx additionally.
I am looking forward to your reply.

I am going to purchase the Samsonite.
Do you give me the discount as much as the one for the Rimowa?
If you like, I would like to continue the business with you from now.
By considering the result I have had so far,
could you lower the price of the items other than the Rimowa?
May I ask you to discuss it with your boss?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

I cannot discuss it any more. I understand.

元の翻訳
We could not take only 1 page of the history by some cause. we "corrected" it.

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For some reason, the history for only one page was not recorded properly. We updated the status to "completed" on our end.

元の翻訳
We could not take only 1 page of the history by some cause. we "corrected" it.

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We could not take only 1 page of the history by some cause. we "corrected" it.

元の翻訳
住所を米国から日本へ変更する場合、お支払できません。送付先を米国の住所にした場合、支払うことができます。貴方が米国の住所へ送付するとどれくらいの日数がかかりますか。
また、本当に私は課税されませんか。米国の住所へ送付していただきたいのですが、課税について懸念しています。

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住所を米国から日本へ変更する場合、お支払できません。送付先を米国の住所にした場合のみ、支払うことができます。貴方が米国の住所へ送付するとどれくらいの日数がかかりますか。
また、本当に私は課税されませんか。米国の住所へ送付していただきたいのですが、課税について懸念しています。

元の翻訳
I checked a person who is in charge in Japan Post. He or she said that he or she could not find it in Japan since it is an item that has been already sent from Japan to Australia.
Sometimes it takes long time to be cleared at the customs in Australia but sometimes it takes short time.
I assume that it is taking long time this time.

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I checked with a person in charge in Japan Post. I was told that they could not find it in Japan since it is an item that has been already sent from Japan to Australia.
Sometimes it takes a long time to be cleared at Australian Customs but sometimes it takes a short time.
I assume that it is taking a long time this time.

元の翻訳
xx team including me will participate in NAMM show 2015 that is taken place in Anaheim from tomorrow as a buyer. For this reason, I can send it on January 27th at the earliest. I am looking forward to your payment.

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xx team including me will participate as a buyer in the NAMM show 2015 that takes place in Anaheim from tomorrow. For this reason, I can send it on January 27th at the earliest. I am looking forward to your payment.

元の翻訳
We appreciate that you contacted us regarding the guitar manufactured by G.
We are not going to violate a trade mark right of the G.
We are going to restate subject to the policy of eBay.

As we would like to use for the reference in the future,↵
would you please let us know the standard where which model violates the trade mark right and which model we can list at the eBay without causing a problem?

A limited number of the guitars manufactured by the G have been listed at the eBay. May we ask you the advice to prevent that we might sell the guitars with risk unconsciously in the future?

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We appreciate that you contacted us regarding the guitar manufactured by G.
We are not going to violate a trade mark right of G.
We are going to restate subject to the policy of eBay [unclear].

As we would like to use for future reference, would you please let us know the standard where which model violates the trade mark right and which model we can list at eBay without causing a problem?

A limited number of the guitars manufactured by G have been listed at eBay. May we ask you for advice as to prevent us from selling the guitars with risk unconsciously in the future [unclear]?

元の翻訳
As there was the fee at the credit card, I tried to purchase it via Paypal a few minutes ago, but I could not purchase it.
i proceeded to the last part, and found this message.

How can I handle it?
I will send a capture.
As i would like to purchase it immediately, would you please send the coupon again?

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As there was a fee charged on the credit card, I tried to purchase it via Paypal a few minutes ago, but I could not purchase it.
I proceeded to the last part, and found this message:

How can I handle it?
I have attached a Capture image.
As i would like to purchase it immediately, would you please send a coupon again?

元の翻訳
I am considering purchasing it. I have a question.
Is this plugin compatible with the theme of ABC?↵
If I purchase it, could you customize it to be used ↵
for the theme of ABC?
As a column of posting a message is special, it will not work unless↵
it is customized.

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I am considering purchasing it. I have some questions.
Is this plugin compatible with the theme of ABC? If I purchase it, could you customize it to be used for the theme of ABC?
As the posting column is special, it may not work unless it is customized.

元の翻訳
I checked an account of Paypal, but you have not paid yet.
If there is a problem at the system, could you inquire to the Paypal?

You have not paid for the item that won the bidding last month.
As I prepared the shipping, may I ask you to pay for it?

I asked you to return the item that I had sent to you by mistake.
I have already paid 33 dollars.
I hate to give you an extra work, but I hope that you understand me.

If I refund 50 dollars to you, I will be in the deficit as I give ↵
you a large discount.

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I checked the Paypal account, but you have not paid yet.
If there is a problem with the system, could you inquire PayPal?

You have not paid for the item that you won last month.
As I prepared it for shipping, may I ask you to pay for it?

I asked you to return the item I had sent you by mistake.
I have already paid you 33 dollars for [返送料金].
I hate to give you an extra work [a bit awkward], but I hope that you understand me.

If I refund you 50 dollars, I will be in red as I have already given you a large discount.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
As you can see at the page of the items,↵
I do not attach the guarantee card.
However, I am sure that it is an authentic item.
You can check it at a regular shop.

I sell several watches, and also purchase them at a special store.
If you still do not like it, you can return it, but you have to pay↵
for the shipping charge when you return.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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Thank you for contacting me.
As you can see on the product page, it does not come with a warranty card.
However, I am sure that it is an authentic item.
You can check it at a regular shop.

I sell several watches and also purchase them at a special store.
If you still do not like it, you can return it, but you have to pay for the shipping charge when you return it.
I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
i saw the rating.
I apologize to have caused an inconvenience to you this time.

As I would like to handle it sufficiently to make you understand,↵
would you please let me know the details?

You can return the item and I can issue a refund to you.

I make a living by the sales at eBay, and work on the items conscientiously.
I comply with the policy of the eBay.

I work hard enough to make you feel satisfied.

I am looking forward to your reply.

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I saw the rating.
I apologize for having caused you the inconvenience this time.

As I would like to handle it sufficiently to make you understand, would you please let me know the details?

You can return the item and I can issue you a refund.

I make a living by selling at eBay and work on the items [awkward] conscientiously.
I comply with eBay's policy.

I work hard enough to make you feel satisfied.

I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
You can return the item if you do not like its color. However, in that case, you have to pay for the shipping charge of the item. You are only responsible for the shipping charge when returning if you return the item and all the attachments. However, if the returned item and attachment are missing, have already used or damaged, we might request the payment for compensation of the damage.

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You can return the item if you do not like its color. However, in that case, you have to pay for the shipping charge of the item. You are only responsible for the shipping charge when returning the item and all the accessories. However, if the returned item and attachment are missing, have already used or damaged, we might request the compensation for the damage.

元の翻訳
The item you purchased was returned to me.
It had been stored in UK, and was returned.
I will send a previosu tracking number as a reference.
I will be waiting for your reply.

Thank you for contacting us.
We hate to say, but you have to pay for the shipping charge this time.
As I did in the last time, I wil let you know the tracking number after it is sent.
The shipping charge is 25 dollars.

May we ask you a patience until you receive it?

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The item you purchased was returned to me.
It had been stored in UK, and was returned.
Just in case I will send the previous tracking number.
I will await your reply.

Thank you for contacting us.
Unfortunately you will need to pay the shipping charge this time.
As I did last time, I will let you know the tracking number after the item is sent.
The shipping charge is 25 dollars.

It may take a little bit of time to arrive so I respectfully ask your patience.