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日本語

あなたの購入してくれた商品が返送されてきました。
イギリスで保管されて戻ってきたようです。
念の為に以前の追跡番号をおくります。
あなたからの連絡をお待ちしています。

連絡ありがとう。
お手数ですが今回は送料がかかります。
前回同様発送されたらあなたに追跡番号を連絡します。
送料は25 ドルです。

到着まで今しばらくお待ち下さい。

英語

The item you purchased was returned to me.
It had been stored in UK, and was returned.
I will send a previosu tracking number as a reference.
I will be waiting for your reply.

Thank you for contacting us.
We hate to say, but you have to pay for the shipping charge this time.
As I did in the last time, I wil let you know the tracking number after it is sent.
The shipping charge is 25 dollars.

May we ask you a patience until you receive it?

レビュー ( 1 )

cali_osakaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/01/14 18:00:06

元の翻訳
The item you purchased was returned to me.
It had been stored in UK, and was returned.
I will send a previosu tracking number as a reference.
I will be waiting for your reply.

Thank you for contacting us.
We hate to say, but you have to pay for the shipping charge this time.
As I did in the last time, I wil let you know the tracking number after it is sent.
The shipping charge is 25 dollars.

May we ask you a patience until you receive it?

修正後
The item you purchased was returned to me.
It had been stored in UK, and was returned.
Just in case I will send the previous tracking number.
I will await your reply.

Thank you for contacting us.
Unfortunately you will need to pay the shipping charge this time.
As I did last time, I will let you know the tracking number after the item is sent.
The shipping charge is 25 dollars.

It may take a little bit of time to arrive so I respectfully ask your patience.

Translation is certainly understandable but there are several unnatural phrasings and misspellings of words.