スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I am sorry to have kept you waiting.
I sent the item on January 18th.

I checked the tracking.
The item arrived in your country on January 28th, and it was sent
from international post exchange office on the same day.
You will receive it shortly.
Would you be a little patient?

If you would like to cancel it, I will cancel it in full.
In that case, could you refuse receiving the item?
Then it will be returned to me.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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I am sorry to have kept you waiting.
I sent the item on January 18th.

I checked the tracking.
The item arrived in your country on January 28th, and it was sent
from international post exchange office on the same day.
You will receive it soon.
Would you be a little patient?

If you would like to cancel it, I will cancel it in full.
In that case, could you refuse receiving the item?
Then it will be returned to me.
I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。私のイーベイでのユーザー名はreaciです。
既に、イーベイセラー"mints_house"からオークションにおいて
ペンタックス製の67Ⅱを獲得しました（商品番号：281565087375)。
これも貴方が運営していらっしゃるようですね。
しかし、この取引をキャンセルするとおっしゃいましたね。理由は、カメラが既に売れてしまっていたからだと。
ところが、このボディーとレンズのシリアル番号はこれ同じです。
このカメラをお持ちでしたら、私が獲得した価格と同一価格でお売りください。
それが不可能な場合、イーベイへこのオークションについて報告します。

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こんにちは。私のイーベイでのユーザー名はreaciです。
既に、イーベイセラー"mints_house"からオークションにおいて
ペンタックス製の67Ⅱを競り落としました（商品番号：281565087375)。
これも貴方が出品していらっしゃるようですね。
しかし、この取引をキャンセルするとおっしゃいましたね。理由は、カメラが既に売れてしまっていたからだと。
ところが、このボディーとレンズのシリアル番号が同じものが出品されています。
このカメラをお持ちでしたら、私が獲得した価格と同一価格でお売りください。
それが不可能な場合、イーベイへこのオークションについて報告します。

元の翻訳
It might be too much to say , but you can sell it better if you set the change log in the way that those other than the purchasers can see.↵

The Adsense at the demonstration website is not shown.
Could you tell me if only the website was banned or the account was banned?

修正後
It might be too much to say , but you can sell it better if you set the change log to be viewable to non-purchasers as well as purchasers.
The Adsense at the demonstration website is not shown.
Could you tell me if only the website was banned or the account was banned?

元の翻訳
弊社の会計部は、請求書が支払い済みであると言っております。以下のスクリーンショットをご参照ください。

銀行へ連絡し、記録を再チェック、状況を調べてください。

本件が迅速に解決しますように。

修正後
弊社の会計部は、請求書が支払い済みであると言っております。以下のスクリーンショットをご参照ください。

御社の銀行へ連絡し、記録を再チェックし、状況を調べてください。

本件が迅速に解決しますように。

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending the detailed information regarding the meeting.

As A has another appointment at 11:00,
could you change the meeting to between 11:00 and 11:30?

We added Murakami and xx at the CC.
From now, would you adjust about the meeting with them?

修正後
Thank you for sending the detailed information regarding the meeting.

As A has another appointment at 11:30,
could you reschedule the meeting to between 11:00 and 11:30?

We added Murakami and xx as CC.
From now on, would you contact them to reschedule the meeting?

元の翻訳
We apologize as the item arrives late.
The item sent from Japan to Germany might be stopped at the customs.
We will check it.
If you do not receive it until the 10th this month, we will refund you in full.
We appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
We apologize it is taking long for the item to arrive.
The item sent from Japan to Germany might have been stopped at the customs.
We will investigate on this.
If you do not receive it before the 10th day of this month, we will refund you in full.
We appreciate your kind understanding.

元の翻訳
Recently the condition of the e-mail server is not good, and sometimes I can neither send nor receive the e-mail.

As I am not sure if the e-mail is sent appropriately, I will send it again by setting the confirmation of opening the e-mail.
I apologize that I have sent the same e-mail repeatedly.

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Recently the condition of the e-mail server is not good, and sometimes I can neither send nor receive e-mails.

As I am not sure if the e-mail is sent appropriately, I will send it again by setting the confirmation of opening the e-mail.
I apologize that I have sent the same e-mail repeatedly.

元の翻訳
As A would like to talk with your company, would you give us an opportunity to talk with us?

Onoue can talk with you in the following time.

March 2nd (Monday) 11:00 to 12:00
March 3rd (Tuesday) 15:15 to 16:00

Please let us know which day we are going to adjust, and who is going to
participate in the meeting from your company.

May we ask you to tell us the members of our group that you are approaching?

修正後
As A would like to talk with your company, would you give us an opportunity to talk with us?

Onoue can talk with you in the following time.

March 2nd (Monday) 11:00 to 12:00
March 3rd (Tuesday) 15:15 to 16:00

Please let us know which day we should adjust, and who is going to
participate in the meeting from your company.

May we ask you to tell us the members of our group that you are approaching?

元の翻訳
We understand.
We apologize that we were not of your help.

We will refund you as soon as possible.

We are checking the condition of the items that we had sent before by using EMS.
We found that the items are in your country now and they are going to be delivered again.
We heard that they were damaged or lost. We will refund you after we check them.

If they are delivered while we are checking , it causes a problem
So could you please wait until we receive the result?

修正後
We understand.
We apologize that we were not of your help.

We will refund you as soon as possible.

We are checking the status of the items that we had sent before by using EMS.
We found that the items are in your country now and they are going to be delivered again.
We heard that they were damaged or lost though. We will refund you after we check them.

If they are delivered while we are checking , it causes a problem.
So could you please wait until we receive the result?

元の翻訳
Thank you for inquiring us.
For free pattern, you put it into the cart after pushing the button of Add to cart.
After the Proceed to Checkout button, you can download it after completing the order.
Could you select Paypal for the payment?
As it is 0 Yen, no money is charged and the order is completed.

As for downloading the file, please refer to FAQ in the following link.

修正後
Thank you for inquiring us.
For free patterns, you put it into the cart after pushing the button of Add to cart.
After the Proceed to Checkout button, you can download it by completing the order.
Could you select Paypal for the payment?
As it is 0 Yen, no money is charged and the order is completed.

As for downloading the file, please refer to FAQ in the following link.

元の翻訳
米国では関税について何方へ連絡すればよろしいですか。

修正後
米国での関税（に関する）情報については何方へ連絡すればよろしいですか。

元の翻訳
This is my advice for the following article listed below. I apologize if it is not helpful for you.

If you handle in this way, I am sure that someone will try to purchase the inexpensive items by using the same means on purpose.
It is not fair for those who purchased the expensive items. ABC might also give a warning to you.
In any event, it is better to communicate with the users by e-mail.

I do not need your reply.

修正後
This is my advice for the following article listed below. I apologize if it is not helpful for you.

If you handle in this way, I am sure that someone will try to purchase the inexpensive items by using the same means on purpose.
It is not fair for those who purchased the expensive items. ABC might also give a warning to you.
In any event, it is better to communicate with the users by e-mail directly.

I do not need your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for supporting my daughter all the time. From February, she goes to your preschool twice a week. I am looking forward to how she is going to change. I hope that she can find a friend there. I tell her to speak in a big voice, but how is she speaking in the preschool?
I appreciate your continuous support from now.

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Thank you for supporting my daughter all the time. From February, she goes to your preschool twice a week. I look forward to watching her grow up. I hope she makes a lot of friends. I tell her to speak up, but how is she in the preschool?
I appreciate your continuous support.

元の翻訳
海外の注文
弊社では、海外へ全送付においてインターナショナルエクスプレスサービスを利用し、
送料は負担します。受注後２，３日以内に発送します。発送に５から１０日かかります。
９月から３月まで遅れが発生することもあります。これは、郵便サービス及び
税関での需要及び作業が多いからです。
総発送時間
処理、梱包及び出荷に要する時間の合計

処理時間（６時間）
受注から梱包開始まで受注の確認に２勤労日（２週末の祝日を除く）

修正後
海外の注文
弊社では、海外へ全送付においてインターナショナルエクスプレスサービスを利用し、
送料は負担します。受注後２，３日以内に発送します。発送に５-１０営業日かかります。
９月から３月まで遅れが発生することもあります。これは、郵便サービス及び
税関での需要及び作業が多いからです。
総発送時間
処理、梱包及び出荷に要する時間の合計

処理時間（６時間）
受注から梱包開始まで受注の確認に２営業日（２日の週休日を除く）

元の翻訳
１．返金を受けるための返送先は、カスタマーサービスからお求めください。パッケージの外側に注文番号を明記してください。本番号が明記されない場合、本商品は、紛失または貴方へ返送されます。

２．返送伝票に返品する商品に○をつけ、返品理由をご記入ください。

３．商品を厳密に梱包してください。元の梱包の伝票がない場合、商品と共に
以下の情報を同封してください。
請求書ー氏名、住所及び電話番号
発送ー氏名、住所、電話番号、注文番号及び返品の理由

修正後
１．返金を受けるための返送先は、カスタマーサービスへお問い合わせください。パッケージの外側に注文番号を明記してください。本番号が明記されない場合、本商品は、紛失しつぃまうか、または貴方へ返送されます。

２．返送伝票に返品する商品に○をつけ、返品理由をご記入ください。

３．商品を厳密に梱包してください。元の梱包の伝票がない場合、商品と共に
以下の情報を同封してください。
請求書ー氏名、住所及び電話番号
発送ー氏名、住所、電話番号、注文番号及び返品の理由