翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

余計なお世話かもしれませんがChange Logは購入者以外も閲覧できるようにした方がより売れると思います。

あとデモサイトのAdsenseが表示されません。サイトだけBanされたのかアカウント自体がBanされたのか教えてもらえませんか？

英語

It might be too much to say , but you can sell it better if you set the change log in the way that those other than the purchasers can see.

The Adsense at the demonstration website is not shown.
Could you tell me if only the website was banned or the account was banned?

レビュー ( 2 )

ctplers99はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/08 16:42:44

良いと思います。

[sujiko]

お褒め頂きありがとうございます。

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/08 18:46:09

元の翻訳
It might be too much to say , but you can sell it better if you set the change log in the way that those other than the purchasers can see.↵

The Adsense at the demonstration website is not shown.
Could you tell me if only the website was banned or the account was banned?

修正後
It might be too much to say , but you can sell it better if you set the change log to be viewable to non-purchasers as well as purchasers.
The Adsense at the demonstration website is not shown.
Could you tell me if only the website was banned or the account was banned?

those other than the purchasersの表現が気になりました。