スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
イーベイのシステムはフィードバックのスコアによる信頼システムです。事象の証拠がない場合、自分のフィードバックを変えません。他の購入者たちは貴方の情報及びセールスのキャンセルについて私に依存しています。私は正当でなければなりません。その理由は、今後、これらにおいてこの購入者たちに依存しないといけないので。

遺憾にも、イーベイでは、予約に依らない商品は低価格により販売され、商品が注文において問題となり、↵
その商品の販売はキャンセルされます。１９９９年よりイーベイに携わっており、この事実を数回目撃しました。
この事象が本件において起こったようです。これは偶然でしょうか、それとも真実でしょうか。何を信じて↵
良いか分からないので、ビデオのような証拠を信じましょう。

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イーベイのシステムはフィードバックのスコアによって表示される信頼システムに基づいています。事象の証拠がない場合、自分のフィードバックを変えるつもりはありません。他の購入者たちは貴方及び販売のキャンセル理由について私の情報を頼りにしています。私は誠実に行わなければなりません。今後、私も同じように他の購入者たちの情報を頼りにしなければありませんから。

残念ながら、イーベイでは、NO　RESERVE（最低落札価格無し）の商品が低価格により販売された場合、その商品が注文において問題となり、その商品の販売はキャンセルされることがよくあります。１９９９年よりイーベイを利用していますが、この事実を数回目撃したことがあります。
この事象が本件において起こったようです。これは偶然でしょうか、それとも事実でしょうか。本当に何を信じてよいか分からないので、ビデオのような証拠をに頼らざるを得ません。

元の翻訳
ズームの機能は、ズームのリングを回し、レンズの前面を引いたり押したりした時のみ作動し、写真には適用しません。
説明によると、レンズは機能の順番で作動するので、この場合、適用しません。

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ズームの機能は、ズームのリングを回し、レンズの前面を引いたり押したりした時のみ作動し、写真には適用できません。
説明によると、レンズは自動的に作動するので、これは事実ではありません。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。配達時にレンズに不具合が見つかったのですって。良好な状態だと伺っておりましたのに。

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こんにちは。届いたレンズに不具合があったのですが。良好な状態だと伺っておりましたのに。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。配達時にレンズに不具合が見つかったのですって。良好な状態だと伺っておりましたのに。

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こんにちは。配達時にレンズに不具合が生じたのですか？良好な状態だと伺っておりましたのに。

元の翻訳
Thank you for shopping with us this time.
I ask you a big favor.
If you find a problem at the item that you receive, would you contact us by e-mail first?
We ask you not to open the case and the case for returning the item first.
Please contact us by e-mail first, and let us know the details of why you are not satisfied with it.
We will do our best to satisfy you.

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Thank you very much for shopping from us this time.
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We have an important request for our customers!
If you find any problem with your received products, please contact us with a direct message first.
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Please do not open a case all of a sudden.↵
And please do not open a return request all of a sudden.
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Please contact us first by email, and let us know why you are not satisfied.
We will do our best so that you can be satisfied with our products and service.

元の翻訳
ウオッチのカテゴリにおける販売にご興味いただきありがとうございます。

貴方が提供したイメージを検証した旨をお知らせします。
アマゾンのイメージの条件を満たされたので、貴方へ本カテゴリにおける↵
販売用の口座を許可しました。本カテゴリへようこそ。

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ウオッチのカテゴリにおける販売にご興味を示していただきありがとうございます。

貴方が提供したイメージを検証した旨をお知らせします。
アマゾンのイメージの条件を満たされたので、貴方の↵
販売用の口座に対し本カテゴリにおいて販売する許可を出しました。本カテゴリへようこそ。

元の翻訳
ウオッチのカテゴリにおける販売にご興味いただきありがとうございます。

貴方が提供したイメージを検証した旨をお知らせします。
アマゾンのイメージの条件を満たされたので、貴方へ本カテゴリにおける
販売用の口座を許可しました。本カテゴリへようこそ。

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ウオッチのカテゴリにおける販売にご興味いただきありがとうございます。

貴方が提供したイメージを検証した旨をお知らせします。
アマゾンのイメージの条件を満たされたので、貴方へ本カテゴリにおける
販売用の口座を許可しました。個人的に、本カテゴリへようこそ。

元の翻訳
Good day!
Thank you for contacting us.
We understand that it takes time to conduct the research.
We are looking forward to hearing from the result of the research.
We appreciate your cooperation.

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Good day!
Thank you for contacting us.
We understand that it takes time to conduct the research.
We are looking forward to hearing about the result of the research.
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Good day. We heard that the item was damaged when you received it.
We will handle it not by returning the ｉｔｅｍ but by insurance in this case.

At first, please carry out the followings.
1. Could you send its picture?
2. Could you report it to the delivery company?

After we draw up the documents and claim an insurance, we will send the item again.
We were worrying as the item arrives so late.
We are sure that we will handle it until it is solved.
Please stop worrying.

S.M A person in charge

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Good day. We heard that the item was damaged when you received it.
We will handle it not by returning the item but by insurance in this case.

At first, please carry out the followings.
1. Could you send its picture?
2. Could you report it to the delivery company?

After we draw up the documents and claim an insurance, we will send the item again.
We were worrying as the item arrives so late.
We are sure that we will handle it until it is solved.
Please stop worrying.

S.M A person in charge

元の翻訳
You are saying that the reason why the item was delayed in returning belongs to me, but it is wrong.
You can check my address at eBay any time, and it is also listed at the label attached at the item.
Usually buyers return the item based on this information.
As you were so late in returning the item, the eBay allowed to issue "Return impossible" officially.
If I am wrong, the eBay does not make that kind of decision (eBay is at buyer's side by 99 percent).

We can accept the item being returned from you, but cannot issue you a refund in full amount.
The reason is that the price of the item at the eBay fell to as low as 250 dollars in the past 2.5 months.
If you are not satisfied with it, you do not have to return it.

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You are saying that the reason why the item was delayed in returning belongs to me, but it is wrong.
You can check my address at eBay any time, and it is also listed at the label attached at the item.
Usually buyers return the item based on this information.
As you were so late in returning the item, eBay allowed to issue "Return impossible" officially.
If I am wrong, eBay does not make that kind of decision (eBay is at buyer's side by 99 percent).

We can accept the item being returned from you, but cannot issue you a refund in full amount.
The reason is that the price of the item at eBay fell to as low as 250 dollars in the past 2.5 months.
If you are not satisfied with it, you do not have to return it.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
Regarding your inquiry, we copied and pasted the shipping address from the website of eBay, and have not made a mistake.
We checked the website of Japan Post listed below, and found that it was listed "Absence. Attempted delivery" as of today.
Would you inquire your nearest post office by using the tracking number below?
We appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
Thank you for contacting us.
Regarding your inquiry, we copied and pasted the shipping address from the eBay website, and have not made a mistake.
We checked the Japan Post website listed below, and found that it said "Absence. Attempted delivery" as of today.
Would you inquire with your nearest post office with the tracking number below?
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Would you send a picture by which we can understand that it is a book I sent?

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Would you send a picture that shows that it is the book that I sent?

元の翻訳
Cool sheet cushion: 1,300 Yen including tax
Cool pair of slippers: 1,000 Yen including tax
Cool poncho: 2,000 Yen including tax
Cool slow: 2,500 Yen including tax

Please check the website below.
http://www.itoyokado.co.jp/special/coolstyle_aaa/index.html?top4banner

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Cool sheet cushion: 1,300 Yen including tax
Pair of cool slippers: 1,000 Yen including tax
Cool poncho: 2,000 Yen including tax
Cool slow: 2,500 Yen including tax

Please check the website below.
http://www.itoyokado.co.jp/special/coolstyle_aaa/index.html?top4banner

元の翻訳
The items for sleeping called "COOL STYLE" produced by collaboration of Ito Yokado ｘ AAA are going to be sold.

The sleeping items SS called "COOL STYLE" that were produced by 7 AAA are
going to be sold at each store of the Ito Yokado across the nation from March 28th (Saturday).
*They are sold on the different day in each store.

(Item)
Cool blanket made of toweling for sleeping comfortably: 5,000 Yen including tax
Pad on which to sleep for cool and comfortable sleeping: 3,000 Yen including tax
Cool blanket for belly for comfortable sleeping: 3,500 Yen including tax
Cool cushion for holding: 1,600 Yen including tax

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The items for sleeping called "COOL STYLE" produced by collaboration of Ito Yokado ｘ AAA will be on sale!

The sleeping items SS called "COOL STYLE" that were produced by 7 AAA are
going to be on sale at each store of the Ito Yokado across the nation from March 28th (Saturday).
*They will be on sale on different days in each store.

(Item)
Cool blanket made of toweling for sleeping comfortably: 5,000 Yen including tax
Pad for cool and comfortable sleep: 3,000 Yen including tax
Cool blanket for belly for comfortable sleep: 3,500 Yen including tax
Cool cushion for holding: 1,600 Yen including tax

元の翻訳
お世話になっております。レンズが速く到着、本日、嬉々として使い始めたのですが、コーナーが１８から３０ミリでないことが分かりました。このレンズとスタンダードな１８ミリ型のレンズの双方の写真を添付しました。この類のレンズはこれまで見たことがなかったので、原因について熟考しました。たぶん、内部のレンズの１つが軸からわずかに外れているのだと思います。（拡大したところ）、３０ミリを超え、コーナーがきれいになっています。
３番目の写真もご覧ください。修理のため持ち込む場合、交通費を支払っていただけますか。それとも、返品してもよろしいですか。

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お世話になっております。レンズが早速到着、本日、嬉々として使い始めたのですが、コーナーが１８から３０ミリで良くないことが分かりました。このレンズと標準の１８ミリレンズ双方の写真を添付しました。この類のレンズはこれまで見たことがなかったので、原因について熟考しました。たぶん、内部のレンズの１つが軸からわずかに外れているのだと思います。３０ミリを超え（ズームインしていくと）、コーナーがきれいになっていきます。
３番目の写真もご覧ください。修理のため持ち込む場合、費用を支払っていただけますか。それとも、返品してもよろしいですか。

元の翻訳
1. We are going to hold an emergency meeting about the trading with your company on Monday (Japan time).
We will answer the plan for the trading with you until 10 o'clock in the morning
on Monday (California time). is it all right for you?

2. Then we will answer on Monday.

3. Then we will answer you by the decision of myself as president of the company and my wife.

4. We have a question. If we order A by 2,208 units/92 cartons, how many could you send?
As for its shortage, we will order B and C, and make the total 1,500 dollars.

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1. We are going to hold an urgent meeting about the trading with your company on Monday (Japan time).
We will answer the plan for the trading with you until 10 o'clock in the morning
on Monday (California time). is it all right for you?

2. Then we will answer on Monday.

3. Then we will answer you by the decision of myself as the president of the company and my wife.

4. We have a question. If we order A by 2,208 units/92 cartons, how many could you send?
As for its shortage, we will order B and C, and make the total 1,500 dollars.

元の翻訳
ZIP-FM「SUNDAY NIGHT SPECIAL KUMI KODA ～ON THE RADIO～」


20:00〜21:00 April 5th (Sunday)
ZIP-FM「SUNDAY NIGHT SPECIAL KUMI KODA ～ON THE RADIO～」

※The details of the program is subject to change due to some reason. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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ZIP-FM「SUNDAY NIGHT SPECIAL KUMI KODA ～ON THE RADIO～」


April 5th (Sunday) 20:00〜21:00
ZIP-FM「SUNDAY NIGHT SPECIAL KUMI KODA ～ON THE RADIO～」

※The details of the program is subject to change due to certain reasons. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
Your problem is that you cannot set a converter.
We apologize to have caused an inconvenience to you.
We will check with the manufacturer. Would you tell us the lens that you are using?
We appreciate your cooperation.

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Thank you for contacting us.
Your problem is that you cannot set the converter.
We apologize to have caused any inconvenience to you.
We will check with the manufacturer. Would you tell us the lens that you are using?
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Today I received the bag.
Thank you.
As for the CT, it is good as new brown color skin makes us feel high quality.
The damage was not a problem.

As for SQ, it is a remarkable design. The skin color is the best selection. I like it.
Regarding the 2 bags you sent to me this time, they are completed very beautifully compared to the ones we have had so far. (Please see the attached photo.)
Will it also be completed in the same style this time? I love it.

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Today I received the bag.
Thank you.
As for the CT, it is good as new brown color skin makes us feel high quality.
There was no problem with the damage.

As for SQ, it is a remarkable design. The skin color is the best selection. I like it.
Regarding the 2 bags you sent to me this time, they are completed very beautifully compared to the ones we have had so far. (Please see the attached photo.)
Will it also be completed in the same style this time? I love it.