Shinya Yasuda (shinya-yasuda) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello.
We are a Japanese treading company that dealt with you once before.
I would like to deal with you more frequently.

I would like to order the items below, then could you tell us the wholesale price?
I would like to pay by PayPal like before.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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Hello.
We are a Japanese trading company that had a business with you once before.
We now would like to do more trading with you more frequently.

We would like to order the items below, so, could you tell us the wholesale price?
We would like to pay by PayPal like before.

Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
*Each "event ticket with serial number" cannot be used for another time.
*Shooting, audio recording and video recording are not allowed during the artists appearing.
*No payback may be given for purchased goods. Defective goods are exchanged for non-defective goods.
*Keeping place by putting baggage or sitting in at the venue are not allowed. Then a staff may request to move.

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*Please be aware in advance that each "event ticket with serial number" cannot be changed or used for another time.
*Shooting, audio recording and video recording are never allowed during the artists' appearing.
*Please be aware that no payback is given for purchased goods. Defective goods are exchanged for non-defective goods.
*Keeping place by putting baggages or sitting in at the facility/venue is not allowed. Please be aware in advance that staff may request to move.

元の翻訳
もしSony BCTRVトラベルチャージャー黒をそのままご使用いただきたければ，各商品代金の15パーセント返金致します。この返金を行うためには，お知らせして頂ければクレジットカードに返金致します。

もしこの案にご不満でしたら商品を返品頂いて全額返金することもできます。

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もしSony BCTRVトラベルチャージャー黒をそのままご使用いただきたければ，各商品代金の15パーセント返金致します。お知らせ頂ければクレジットカードに返金致します。

もしこの案にご不満でしたら商品を返品頂いて全額返金することもできます。

元の翻訳
I have received the package.
As I opened it, I found that some pages came off and there are also scribbles.
These things were not mentioned in the description.
I am really disappointed. I would look over, if it was minor. However, the condition is really bad, so I would like to change it.
Otherwise, I would like to have a refund including delivery cost.
If needed, I can send pictures.
Please contact me as soon as possible.

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I have received the package.
As I opened it, I found that some pages came off and there are also scribbles.
These things were not mentioned in the description.
I am really disappointed. I would overlook the issue if it was minor. However, the condition is really bad, so I would like to change it.
Otherwise, I would like to have a refund including delivery cost.
If needed, I can send pictures.
Please contact me as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
According to the caution of the maker, its color may transfer to another at first when it is wet.
Just in case, it is better to wash it separately at this moment.
I wash it and run iron on it as usual, but it does not fade.
There is no problem for gold lame as well.

If you need it, please purchase as usual.
Although it makes you pay an extra charge, I will payback surely.

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According to the warnings from the maker, its color may transfer to another when it is wet at first use.
Just in case, it is better to wash it separately at this moment.
I wash it and run an iron on it as usual, but it does not fade.
There is no problem for the gold lame as well.

If you need it, please purchase as usual.
Although you will have to temporarily pay for postage on your end, I will surely refund you that fee.

元の翻訳
I have hear that "Touch & Get" will be conducted as well.
It seems that you can order with a specialized terminal via web and receive goods that cannot be shelved on shops.
It can mean that in the future AEON services will be dealt in a cross-sectoral manner, not just in AEON.
I am wondering that I will be able to buy AEON products at Ministop.

I think the last part of the article is impressive.

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I have hear that "Touch & Get" will be conducted as well.
It seems that you can order with a specialized terminal via web and receive goods that cannot be ordinarily shelved in shops either in your home or at stores.
It can mean that in the future AEON services will be dealt in a cross-sectoral manner, not just in AEON.
I am wondering if I will be able to buy AEON products at Ministop.

I think the last part of the article is impressive.

元の翻訳
I am really sorry but I am not available on Friday, 30th of June.
I am arranging it to be on 6th or 7th of July.
I am wondering if you can arrange an interpreter.
Please make sure it.

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I'm afraid but I am not available on Friday, 30th of June.
I would like to arrange it to be on 6th or 7th of July.
I also wonder if you could arrange an interpreter.
Looking forward to your reply.