sakura_1984 (sakura_1984) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for your polite reply.
I'm glad to know a lot about products.
If I have other chance, hope to business with you again.

修正後
Hello.
Thank you for your polite reply.
I'm glad to know the details of the product.
I hope to have another chance to work with you again.

元の翻訳
If you separate a words by comma, it's not indication search results.
And I think it's not good ways for user that you input address separated by comma.

Japanese address is devided like below.
Prefecture, city, ward, town, block number.

Is it difficult problem for you to deal with it?

Incidentally, I check ABC.

修正後
Even if I separate words by commas, it's not indication search results [?].
And I think it's not a good way for users to type addresses separated by commas.

[article] Japanese address is devided as below:
Prefecture, city, ward, town, and block number.

Is it difficult for you to deal with it?

Incidentally, I check ABC.

元の翻訳
This is Yoshida who meeting with Ms. Susie. Thank you very much for taking your time about this time. Yesterday, I arrived in Japan. We have many problems to proceed with the new business, but our team won't give in that and try hard. I'm looking forword to seeing you next time. From now on, we will proceed everything consult with Ms. Susie. I've said it once, I really appreciate to meet you. I'm afraid I hasten to appreciate you about it.

修正後
This is Yoshida who meeting [tense confusion] with Susie. Thank you very much for taking your time this time. Yesterday I arrived in Japan. We have many problems to proceed with the new business, but our team won't give in that [unclear] and try hard [subject-verb agreement]. I'm looking forword to seeing you next time. From now on, we will proceed everything consult [part of speech confusion] with Susie. As I've said it before, I really appreciate having met you. I'm afraid I hasten to appreciate you about it [what does this mean?].