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It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you treat now and which is sold well for Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward your reply.

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It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you handle now which sell well with Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your confirmation.
If time is about 2-3 days I will be waiting so please including it in the package and ship it
Thank you and best regards

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Thank you for your confirmation.
If it's about 2-3 days I will wait so please include it in the package and ship it
Thank you and best regards

元の翻訳
Thank you for your confirmation.
I will be able to wait for 2 to 3 days, so please wrap it and deliver it.

Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for your confirmation.
I will be able to wait for 2 to 3 days, so please package it together and deliver it.

Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I'm very interested in this item, but could I get this a little cheaper?
Best regards.

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Hello.
I'm very interested in this item, but could you make it a little cheaper?
Best regards.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I am very interested in this product but could you sell me at lower price
Thank you and best regards

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Hello,
I am very interested in this product but could you sell it to me at a lower price?
Thank you and best regards

元の翻訳
I received a different colored bag, the same as last time I ordered.
Please check the attached for the picture of the bag I received.

The bag I want is a red and black SLR-3B.
I got an orange and black bag.
Why do I always receive a different colored bag from what is posted on the website?
Please contact the vendor immediately to see if they have a red and black SLR-3B in stock.

Last time I ordered a DCO-2R and received a DVO-2R.

Is the red and black bag not for sale anymore?
I do not need an orange and black bag.
Please inform me of accurate information.

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I received a different colored bag, the same as last time I ordered.
Please check the attachments for a picture of the bag I received.

The bag I want is a red and black SLR-3B.
I got an orange and black bag.
Why do I always receive a different colored bag from what is posted on the website?
Please contact the vendor immediately to see if they have a red and black SLR-3B in stock.

Last time I ordered a DCO-2R but received a DVO-2R.

Is the red and black bag not for sale anymore?
I do not need an orange and black bag.
Please give me accurate information.

元の翻訳
I have paid the fee to have my product displayed, but I cannot display it.

Please let me know why and how I can fix it.

It is a pain having to pay every time I want to display a product.

Can you lift the limitations relating to the deals?

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I have paid the fee to have my product displayed, but I cannot display it.

Please let me know why this is the case and how I can fix it.

It is a pain having to pay every time I want to display a product.

Can you lift the limitations relating to the transactions?

元の翻訳
Hi,

I entered the coupon code you sent to me, but it says "Oh dear. That coupon is invalid." leaving me unable to use it.

How can I settle this problem?
It would be very appreciated if you let me know.

Thank you.

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Hi,

I entered the coupon code you sent to me, but it says "Oh dear. That coupon is invalid." and so I am unable to use it.

How can I deal with this problem?
It would be much appreciated if you let me know.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello.

I entered the coupon code from you and I see the following sign.
"Oh dear. That coupon is invalid."
And I can't use the coupon code.

What should I do?
Please give me advice.

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Hello.

I entered the coupon code from you but I got the following message.
"Oh dear. That coupon is invalid."
As a result I can't use the coupon code.

What should I do?
Please give me advice.

元の翻訳
There is a ◯ special edition postcard attached to the comic and magazine.

Are you looking for the appendix postcard only? As I do not read the magazines, I would like to sell them to you for $11 per comic and $8 per magazine, without other charges.

Base on what I've found and known, the clear folder is not a special edition item of ◯ but a limited item that is only offered by a shop called ◇. Unfortunately, the shop is not nearby and thus I could hardly get the item.

The ◇ that you have previously ordered arrived today.
Please find attached the bill for a total of $11 including the payment for the item and postage.

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There is a ◯ special edition postcard attached to the comic and magazine.

Are you looking for the appendix postcard only? As I do not read the magazines, I would like to sell them to you for $11 per comic and $8 per magazine, without other charges.

Based on what I've read, the clear folder is not a special edition item of ◯ but a limited item that is only offered by a shop called ◇. Unfortunately, the shop is not nearby which makes it difficult to get the item.

The ◇ that you previously ordered arrived today.
Please find the $11 in total including the payment for the item and postage added to the invoice.

元の翻訳
REQUEST FOR QUOTATION
We are now considering to purchase from your company the product XXX during this month.
Thus, we kindly request for a quotation considering the following conditions to be sent to us by tomorrow end of the day.
Please send us separated sheets of quotations for PANTONE1 and PANTONE2.
We are discussing if we will take the PANTONE1 or PANTONE2 color.
We are preparing the design of the package, the letter to be attached and the contents of the manual.
As soon as it is concluded, we will send the data.

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REQUEST FOR QUOTATION
We are now considering to order XXX from your company during this month.
Thus, we kindly request a quotation considering the following conditions to be sent to us by the end of the day tomorrow.
Please make separate quotations for PANTONE1 and PANTONE2.
We are discussing whether we will take the PANTONE1 or PANTONE2 color.
We are preparing the design of the package, the letter to be attached and the contents of the manual.
As soon as it is concluded, we will send the data.

元の翻訳
The payment has been completed but seems like you have not received it.
Please check the settings immediately.

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The payment has been completed but it seems that you have not received it.
Please check your settings immediately.

元の翻訳
I've sent the money, but the payment is not accepted by your side.
Please check your settings urgently.

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I've sent the money, but the payment was not accepted on your side.
Please check your settings as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
The payment has been made and it seem that you have not receive it from your end.
Please confirm the settings urgently.

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The payment has been made but it seems that you haven't accepted it on your end.
Please confirm your settings as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
A is manufactured based on JB62 model. They reduced its body size and scale to 85%, and weight is about 4Kg.

We recommend for kids "bZ"!
30"/ 3.4Kg very light compact body which easy to handle for kids.

Its well made and detailed quality product is made by Japanese top brand Atelier Z.
Well selected alder sound with original preamplifier EQ/J will create dynamic sounds and wide range of sound variations.

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A is manufactured based on the JB62 model. They have reduced its body size and scale to 85%, and it weights about 4kg.

We recommend this 'bZ' for kids!
It has a 30"/ 3.4kg very light compact body which is easy to handle for kids.

It is a well made and detailed quality product made by Japanese top brand Atelier Z.
Made from carefully selected alder wood, it gives forth a high-intensity, wide range of sound variations with its original preamplifier EQ/J.

元の翻訳
Hello. Ifound that DHL will take time.
Do you know any faster transport?

I would like t order 1 piece.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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Hello. I seems that using DHL will take time.
Do you know any faster shipping methods?

I would like to order 1pc.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Hi. It seems that DHL might take time for delivery.
Is there any other possible courier?

I am planning to place an order for one unit.

I am looking forward to your reply.

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Hi. It seems that using DHL might take time for the delivery.
Are there any other possible couriers?

I am planning to place an order for one unit.

I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Hello.

Thank you for contact.

It is the package of xxx

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Hello.

Thank you for contacting me.

It is the package for xxx

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for contacting me.
That's the package.

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Hello.
Thank you for contacting me.
That's the package.

元の翻訳
Hello,

We have just fished arranging the item return.
We will inform you the tracking number later.

Here is an email for my US (international forwarding company).

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Hello,

We have just finished arranging the return of the item.
We will inform you of the tracking number once we have it.

Attached is an email from myUS (international shipping company).

元の翻訳
こんにちは。↵
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I have requested the shipping arrangement for the item a while ago.
I will inform you the tracking number once I received it.

And, the attached is the email from the MyUS (international courier service).

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I made the shipping arrangements for the item just earlier.
I will inform you of the tracking number once I receive it.

Attached is the email from MyUS (international courier service).

元の翻訳
Today, the package is arrived without trouble.
Thank you very much for your cooperation at this time.
I greatly appreciate you.

The PENTAX that should be sent to you by right is under forwarding from France.↵
But, it has not arrived yet.
As soon as we receive it, we will ship it to you with all haste.
It may take more time.
Is it possible to wait it for a while?

We wait to hear from you. Please respond for this e-mail.
We are very sorry that you have to wait for it due to our mistake.

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Today, the package arrived without trouble.
Thank you very much for your cooperation this time.
We greatly appreciate it.

The PENTAX that we need to send to you is currently being forwarded from France, so it has not arrived in Japan yet.
As soon as we receive it, we will ship it to you with all haste.
It may take more time.
Is it possible for you to wait for it a bit longer?

We look forward to hearing from you. Please respond to this e-mail.
We are very sorry that we have kept you waiting due to our mistake.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Sorry for contacting you late.
I was on business trip since last night and could not check email.
Regarding the payment, I have one favor. Since I would like to pay via my new card after the registration in Paypal, could you wait until November 1st? I will return on 1st and will immediately register and make a payment.
Thank you in advance.

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Hello.
Sorry for contacting you late.
I was on a business trip since last night and could not check my email.
Regarding the payment, I have one favor to ask. Since I would like to pay via my new card after it is registered with Paypal, could you wait until November 1st? I will return on the 1st and will immediately register and make the payment.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I'm sorry for my late response.
I've been on my business trip since last night and I haven't had a chance to check my email.
I would like to ask you a favor with the payment. I would like to register my newly made card to PayPal and make the payment with it. Could you wait until November 1st? I will go home on the 1st, register the card right away and make the payment.
Thank you in advance.

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Hello.
I'm sorry for the late response.
I've been on a business trip since last night and I haven't had a chance to check my email.
I would like to ask you a favor with the payment. I would like to register my newly made card to PayPal and make the payment with it. Could you wait until November 1st? I will get home on the 1st, register the card right away and make the payment.
Thank you in advance.