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you mean you are going to give invoice and receipt separately? If it's about tariff,then invoice is enough.↵
And there is no space for writing delivery fee. So I will write payment for goods as $150.
And I can not send except the address that registered on Paypal. If you really wants to send other address, then please change the address before you make up accounts.

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Do you mean you are going to attach the receipt separate from the invoice? If it's a problem with customs, I think the invoice will be enough. And there is no space for writing the delivery fee, so I will write the payment for the goods as $150.
Also, I can not send to any address other than the one registered on PayPal. If you really want it sent to another address, please change the address registered on PayPal before you make the payment.

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If Japanese letters are used in the file name, the image does not upload and shows a blank page.

I believe there are some sections that limit the file name to alphabet letters.
Can you tell me the file name and row?
If I know where the sections are, I will edit my self.

Also, there is one change I would like to request. Since the tag and category page has same titles, it would be great if you can edit them.

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If Japanese letters are used in the file name, the image does not upload and shows a blank page.

I believe there are some sections that limit the file name to alphabet letters.
Can you tell me the file name and row?
If I know where the sections are, I think I can edit them myself.

Also, there is one change I would like to request. Since the tag and category pages have the same title, it would be great if you can edit them.

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We have a lot of experiences to export some items to the United State, and there is no problem at the moment except for tariff which sometimes need to be paid.
But there is the risk that it's hard to return knives once you purchaise and recieve them because it's limited by the law, and we’d like you to understand that we won't take any responsibility after you recieved items.

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We have a lot of experience exporting items to the U.S., and there are no problems except for tariffs which sometimes need to be paid.
But there is the risk that it's hard to return knives once you have purchased them because they are restricted by the law, ↵
We would also like you to understand that we won't take any responsibility after you have received items.

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I really want to return all 11 items.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to build a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I have to file a claim to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as of a seller.
Thank you.

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I really want to return all 11 items.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to build a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I will have to file a complaint to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as a seller.
Thank you.

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①I received the heater yesterday.
I tried to use it in my car right now. Then it didn't work suddenly in about one minute. I guess that the cigarette lighter socket in my car was broken because of excess voltage.
I will try to repair the cigarette lighter socket in my car by exchanging the fuse, and so on. However I would like you to ask how you cope with this item. I hope your repayment.

②Could you send the parcels not for Tanaka Kenta who paid for them, but for Yoshida Yuriko?
③I don't care about the any way you send them, so send them to Japan in a cheaper and faster way.

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①I received the heater yesterday.
I tried to use it in my car right away. Then it suddenly stopped working after about one minute. Maybe it was due to excess voltage but the cigarette lighter socket in my car is now broken.
I will try to repair the cigarette lighter socket in my car by exchanging the fuse. However I would like you to ask how you plan to respond regarding this item. I hope for a refund.

②Could you send the parcels not to Tanaka Kenta who paid for them, but to Yoshida Yuriko?
③I don't mind how you send them, so please send them to Japan in a cheaper and faster way.

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The elderly couple who have lived in the neighbor for sixty years moved into a nursing home, and their house and land were sold to a housing manufacturer/marketer company. The house was taken apart right after the couple left, and the land became an empty place. I record here from the house demolition to the completion of the new buildings.

Although it was only five days after the elderly couple left their land, the place where the couple has spent their lives for over sixty years quickly turned into a vacant land. By the arm of the industrial machine, the house was easily crushed, as it was made out of a paper. The fence was placed in the middle of the land. Two residential buildings would be built on the land.

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The elderly couple who had lived in the neighbor for sixty years moved into a nursing home, and their house and land were sold to a housing manufacturer/marketer company. The house was taken apart right after the couple left, and the land became an empty place. I document here the events from the house demolition to the completion of the new buildings.

Although not even a whole week had passed since the elderly couple left their land, the place where the couple had spent their lives for over sixty years quickly was turned into vacant land in a mere 5 days. By the arm of a construction machine, the house was easily crushed, as if it was made out of paper. A fence was placed in the middle of the land. It seems two residential buildings will be built on the land.

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ph49411
Also, Kalafina and ClariS create unique but very harmonious sound. Their music is like "a mixture of multinational musical genres," which is one of the features of contemporary Japanese music, with some essence of anime. These groups play excellent tunes for you to get to know Japanese anime songs. If you find any tunes that you like, dig deeper!

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ph49411
Also, Kalafina and ClariS create unique but very harmonious sound. Their music is like "a mixture of multinational musical genres," which is one of the features of contemporary Japanese music, with some essence of anime. These groups make excellent music for you to get to know Japanese anime songs. If you find any songs that you like, go ahead and try dig deeper!

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If I tell you the password and ID, I can't use the soft. And my acount would freeze.

I use XX to provide you inmormations.

Please tell me what kind of information you need.

ex: Want to know Janapnese celler sales a lot with keyword"japan"

ex: Want to know Janapnese celler sales a lot with keyword"SONY"

etc... These are only a few examples though, I can provide you when you inform me like this.

Then you can research much easier.

How do you think about it?

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If I tell you the password and ID, I won't be able to use the software and my account will be suspended.

I will use XX to provide you with information.

Please tell me what kind of information you need.

e.g. If you want to know high-selling Japanese sellers with the the keyword "japan"

e.g. If you want to know high-selling Japanese sellers with the the keyword "SONY"

These are only examples, but I can provide you with this kind of information if you request it.

Then you can research much easier.

So what do you think?

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al101002

Their maid costume is designed by the world renowned designer Keita Maruyama.

The most famous maid cafe in Akihabara that you might have seen on TV.

About 180 maids are registered. Please pay admission fee 600 yen plus your order on menu.

There is a seasonal menu.

There might be new idles from there.

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al101002

Their maid costumes are designed by the world-renowned designer Keita Maruyama!

The most famous maid cafe in Akihabara, you may have even seen it on TV!

About 180 maids are registered. The price is anything you order from the menu plus the 600 yen admission fee.

There is also a seasonal menu.

This cafe may bring forth Japan's next big idols.

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They have a lot of concerts! It's worth trying!

The Visual style band MEJIBRAY "メジブレイ”'s official web site. The members of 4, Tsuzuku "綴", MiA, Koichi "恋一", Meto "メト".

You may see their information about the profile, news, discography, media, concert schedule, selling goods on the web site.

As foreign music has impacted them, they won't disappoint you even if you dislike Visual style bands.

Their strong sound and vigorous stage performance capture your heart.

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al100503↵
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They have a lot of concerts! It's worth experiencing!

The official website of Visual Kei band MEJIBRAY "メジブレイ”. made up of four members Tsuzuku "綴", MiA, Koichi "恋一" and Meto "メト".

You can see official information such as their profile, news, discography, media, concert schedule and merchandise.

As foreign music has strongly influenced them, they won't disappoint you even if you aren't a fan of Visual Kei bands.

Their strong sound and vigorous stage performance capture your heart.

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Hello I am 〇〇. I bought the Coleman lantern from you last year.

I noticed something when I took a look at it a while ago.
I could not find the Coleman funnel, which was supposed to be included.

Did you ship it with the lantern?
Please let me know.

Regards,
〇〇

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Hello this is 〇〇. I bought the Coleman lantern from you last year.

I noticed something when I took a look at it a while ago.
I could not find the Coleman funnel, which was supposed to be included.

Did you ship it with the lantern?
Please let me know.

Regards,
〇〇

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In the e-mail, I let you know that the goods you purchased is still stopped in customs. Did you receive it?

In case of re-shipping , it have to be deconstructed.
We are waiting for your answer either re-shipping after deconstruction or refunding.

We have just refunded. Please confirm it.

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In the e-mail I sent you before, I mentioned that the goods you purchased were still stopped at customs and were to be returned. Did you not receive it?

If we were to re-ship it , it will have to be taken apart.
We are waiting for your answer to either re-ship it after taking it apart, or provide a refund.

We have just processed the refund so please check.

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I apologize for contacting you while you are on a business trip.
If you order shoes within this week, they will be sent in April.
But ordering after this week, the shipping date will be delayed.
We recommend that you order within this weak if you make much account of the delivery date.
If you are having difficulty in ordering within this week due to your trip, when would you be able to do it?

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I apologize for contacting you while you are on a business trip.
If you order shoes within this week, they will be sent in April.
By ordering after this week, the shipping date will be delayed.
We recommend that you order within this week if an early delivery date is your priority.
If you are having difficulty in ordering within this week due to your trip, when would you be able to do it?

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I've found (商品名), (ブランド名) at your online shop last month.
It was listed as JPY 40,400 at that time, but it is JPY 50,000 today.
Could you tell me what's the reason for its price rise?
I feel really sad about it.
It also seems too expensive when I check duties or handling cost putting it in shopping-bag.
Is this rise happen only for (ブランド名)?
Or all the commercial goods that wil be shipped to Japan gained in price?
It would be very helpful to reply at your earliest convenience.

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I found (ブランド名) (商品名) on your online shop last month.
It was listed as JPY 40,400 at that time, but it is JPY 50,000 today.
Could you tell me what the reason is for this price increase?
I am really disappointed.
It also seems too expensive when I check duties or handling costs on the shopping bag.
Is this price increase only for (ブランド名) items?
Or is the increase for all goods being shipped to Japan?
It would be very helpful if you could reply at your earliest convenience.

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We are very sorry that the payment is delayed.
Could I trouble you to add the following goods and charge again?

Yours.

Please send us by DHL the goods we ordered today and tell us the tracking
number.

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We are very sorry that the payment is delayed.
Could I trouble you to add the following goods and make up a new invoice?

Yours.

Please send us the goods we ordered today by DHL. Also sorry to trouble you but could you tell us the tracking
number.

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I apologize for being late for the payment of this order.
It would be appreciatd if you could add following orders to this invoice and send me back again.
Regards.

Products I ordered today should be delivered through DHL.
Also please remember to send me a trucking number with the delivery.

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I apologize for being late with the payment of this order.
Sorry for the trouble, but could you please add the following to the order and resend the invoice.
Regards.

Please deliver the products I ordered today by DHL.
Sorry again but could you please remember to send me a tracking number with the delivery.

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Thank you for your continued support. This is Yamada from Japan.
I carefully searched for (the item No. *) but unfortunately could not find.
It would be grateful if you send it again by the next mail.
In these past months I have found insufficient quantity of item and wrong item numbers several times.
I always have a feeling that our business relationship is "up to your kindness."
I hope our good relationship will last as long as possible.

Please let me know the order status regarding the order No. *. I am sorry for the trouble.
When will the shipment be done?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Thank you for your continued support. This is Yamada from Japan.
I thoroughly searched for it but unfortunately could not find it (item no. 〇〇) .
Therefore I would be grateful if you could send it with the next delivery.
In these past months I have found insufficient item quantities and wrong item numbers several times.
I hold our business relationship in very high regard.
I would like to go on building on our good relationship for a long time into the future.

In regards to item no. 〇〇↵
Please let me know about the order status. I am sorry for the trouble.
When will the shipment be done?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Camera & Imaging Products Association (CIPA) is holding "CP+ 2014" at Pacifico Yokohama from Feburary 13th to 16th.

CP+ is an exhibition that is related to Japanese biggest camera, field of photography image's technology, culture, and industry.

This year, 115 companies and groups are displaying along with the theme of "More Fun, More Beautiful. Evolving Photo Image Technology". There will be 956 small rooms and aimed to have 70,000 people who is registered to attend. Also, this expo is a place to introduce new prodcts, and it is expected to have world premiere that has more than last year's 35 types of machines.

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Camera & Imaging Products Association (CIPA) is holding "CP+ 2014" at Pacifico Yokohama over 4 days from February 13th to 16th.

CP+ is Japan's biggest exhibition in relation to technology, culture, and industry in the field of cameras and photography.

This year, 115 companies and groups are putting up exhibitions with the theme of "More Fun, More Beautiful. Evolving Photo Image Technology". There will be 956 booths with the goal to have 70,000 people registered to attend. Also, this expo provides a place to introduce new products, and is expected to have world premieres exceeding last year's 35 types of machines.

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We accept the return goods as described in the returning policy of e-mall.
However, if you have an additional order, the best price of J60V is $A with delivery.

We accept installment payment by PayPal for $A of J60V if you like.
For instance, it is possible for you to pay installment into twice as $B for February and $C for March.

Please indicate how you would like.

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We accept the return of goods as outlined in the return policy e-mall.
However, for an additional order, the best price for J60V is $A including delivery.

We can accept payment in installments by PayPal for the $A for J60V if you like.
For instance, it is possible for you to pay two installment first with $B for February and $C for March.

Please tell us how you would like to proceed.

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The product of Rose you have ordered is to be sent on 13th, Feb. and to be delivered on 15th.
Under the influence of severe weather, roses are not well grown up. We are sorry for taking a time to deliver and hope your understanding.

We will let you know when shipping has done.
We look forward to your continued acquaintance.

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The rose product you have ordered is to be sent on Feb 13th, and to be delivered on the 15th.
Due to the influence of severe weather, the roses are not yet properly developed, and therefore can not be sent immediately and will take time until delivery. We are terribly sorry about this and hope for your understanding.

We will let you know when they have been shipped.
We look forward to your continued patronage.

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Thank you for getting in touch so quickly.

The shaft of attached picture is definitely TP-7x, not TP7HD.
Am I correct that you have one stock left?
Would you tell me its hardness, weight, and price (including the shipping fee).

Also, I am thinking about purchasing another "Tour Issue F7M2 LTD XX Gold shaft" if there is a stock. If it is possible, I would like to know how much it will cost including the shipping fee.

Kind regards,

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Thank you for getting back in touch so quickly.

The shaft of attached picture is definitely TP-7x, not TP7HD.
Am I correct that you have one left in stock?
Would you tell me its hardness, weight, and price (including the shipping fee).

Also, I am thinking about purchasing another "Tour Issue F7M2 LTD XX Gold shaft" if there is any in stock. If it is possible to order in, I would like to know how much it will cost including the shipping fee.

Kind regards,

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We received only 1 piece out of the pack which we have ordered is supposed to be a pack of 12 pieces. Why did it happen?

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We received only 1 item out of what was supposed to be a set of 12 that we ordered. Why did this happen?

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I am afraid that the base guitars listed up in the origina pictures are all sold out.
I am working with our dealer to put together the pictures of the base guitars that are currently availble. So please give us a moment. I will let you know as soon as I finish doing so.

Please let us know your review once you play the guitar by sending us the email to our customer service. Here is the example....
I will try my best to find the guitar you want. As soon as I find out, I will send you an email.

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I am afraid that the bass guitars listed up in the original pictures are all sold out.
I am working with the maker and dealer to put together the pictures of the bass guitars that are currently available. Please give us some time, I will let you know as soon as I hear from them.

Please let us know your review once you play the guitar by sending us an email about our customer service. Here is an example....
I will try my best to find the guitar you want. As soon as I find a recommended one, I will send you an email.