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日本語

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英語

I apologize for contacting you while you are on a business trip.
If you order shoes within this week, they will be sent in April.
But ordering after this week, the shipping date will be delayed.
We recommend that you order within this weak if you make much account of the delivery date.
If you are having difficulty in ordering within this week due to your trip, when would you be able to do it?

レビュー ( 1 )

russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/13 23:28:32

元の翻訳
I apologize for contacting you while you are on a business trip.
If you order shoes within this week, they will be sent in April.
But ordering after this week, the shipping date will be delayed.
We recommend that you order within this weak if you make much account of the delivery date.
If you are having difficulty in ordering within this week due to your trip, when would you be able to do it?

修正後
I apologize for contacting you while you are on a business trip.
If you order shoes within this week, they will be sent in April.
By ordering after this week, the shipping date will be delayed.
We recommend that you order within this week if an early delivery date is your priority.
If you are having difficulty in ordering within this week due to your trip, when would you be able to do it?

Nicely done, just some small touch-ups

[kengo_a]

Thank you for reviewing :)