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評価: 52 / 2 Reviews / 2014/02/16 12:17:29

keikol75
keikol75 52 IT関連会社に10数年勤務。ソフトウェアのマニュアルや、UNIXサーバ運用...
日本語

al101002

メイド服は世界的デザイナー丸山敬太がデザイン！

ニュースなどでも話題になる秋葉原でも１番有名なメイドカフェ！

約180名のメイドが在籍
ご利用料金はメニュー料金＋ご入場料600円です

季節ごとに限定メニューもある。

アイドルが生まれるかも

英語

al101002

Their maid costume is designed by the world renowned designer Keita Maruyama.

The most famous maid cafe in Akihabara that you might have seen on TV.

About 180 maids are registered. Please pay admission fee 600 yen plus your order on menu.

There is a seasonal menu.

There might be new idles from there.

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fuyunoriviera 63 Hello :) I'm a native English spea...
fuyunorivieraはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/16 19:29:41

元の翻訳
al101002

Their maid costume is designed by the world renowned designer Keita Maruyama.

The most famous maid cafe in Akihabara that you might have seen on TV.

About 180 maids are registered. Please pay admission fee 600 yen plus your order on menu.

There is a seasonal menu.

There might be new idles from there. ↵
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修正後
al101002

Their maid costume is designed by the world renowned designer Keita Maruyama!

The most famous maid cafe in Akihabara that you might have seen on TV!

About 180 maids work there. You pay an admission fee of 600 yen plus anything you order from the menu.

There is a seasonal menu.

A new idol might come from there.

Really good translation!

このレビューを100％の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。

keikol75 keikol75 2014/02/16 19:42:59

Thank you for the corrections.

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russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/19 11:04:32

元の翻訳
al101002

Their maid costume is designed by the world renowned designer Keita Maruyama.

The most famous maid cafe in Akihabara that you might have seen on TV.

About 180 maids are registered. Please pay admission fee 600 yen plus your order on menu.

There is a seasonal menu.

There might be new idles from there.

修正後
al101002

Their maid costumes are designed by the world-renowned designer Keita Maruyama!

The most famous maid cafe in Akihabara, you may have even seen it on TV!

About 180 maids are registered. The price is anything you order from the menu plus the 600 yen admission fee.

There is also a seasonal menu.

This cafe may bring forth Japan's next big idols.

Overall pretty good, just needs a bit more flow

このレビューを100％の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。

keikol75 keikol75 2014/02/19 15:23:23

Thank you for the corrections. I like the last sentence.

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