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元の翻訳
Then we will be waiting in our company's building at 2:30 on May 10th.

And for the start-up in the UK, we are available on these days below.

5/19 (Thu) at 4-6pm
5/20 (Fri) at 3-6pm

Please choose one of them.
We have other appointments in our schedule, so it will help if you can reply by tomorrow.

修正後
Well then, we will be waiting in our company's building at 2:30 on May 10th.

And for the start-up in the UK, we are available on these dates below.

5/19 (Thu) at 4-6pm
5/20 (Fri) at 3-6pm

Please choose one of them.
We have other appointments in our schedule, so it will help if you can reply by tomorrow.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
Thank you for your interest in our product.
Would you like to purchase these items now?
Here is the total price below, you may consider.

About the guarantee for damage during transport :
Thank you for your kind support.
We will contact to you when your request of investigation reaches Post Office in Japan.

Thank you for your purchase and quick payment.
The items are in stock and we will ship as it is ready.
We will let you know the tracking number when we ship.

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry.
Thank you for your interest in our product.
Would you like to purchase these items now?
Here is the total price below you may consider.

About the guarantee for damages during transport :
Thank you for your kind support.
We will contact to you when your request of investigation reaches the post office in Japan.

Thank you for your purchase and quick payment.
The items are in stock and we will ship as it is ready.
We will let you know the tracking number when we ship.