Radha (radha) — 付けたレビュー

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2 kinds of money you indicated are used for the followings.

1. It is a sample that we purchase for researching and developing item planning team of item made hit by another company on Christmas.

2. It is a book where effect and influence of color and design that are given to children are listed when designing the item.

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Two budgets you indicated are used for the followings.

1. It is for a sample Christmas hit-item by another company that we purchase for the researching and developing team.

2. It is for designing an item which becomes a book that lists the effects and influences of color and design to children.

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Thank you for the good information about the situation with the powdered milk. I ordered it immediately at the weekend.
It was good information for my wife too as it seems she is bothered about the removed and left-over powder.
By the way, which company's baby bottle are you using? Whose is a good one?
Our family is using one manufactured by Doctor Brown.
How does the water dissolve the powdered milk? Do you use a water filter?
Or else do you buy water that is sold to be use for dissolving powdered milk?

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Thank you for the good information about the situation with the powdered milk. I ordered it immediately at the weekend.
It was good information for my wife too as it seems she is bothered about the undissolved powder.
By the way, which company's baby bottle are you using? Whose is a good one?
Our family is using one manufactured by Doctor Brown.
What are you doing with the water for dissolving the powdered milk? Do you use a water filter?
Or else do you buy water that is sold to be use for dissolving powdered milk?

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I think you usually need to prepare the commercial invoice when you make shipment by DHL.

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I think usually you need to prepare a commercial invoice when you ship by DHL.

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I am looking forward to seeing you on February 15th.
I would like to fix the time before long.
I can adjust my time, please let me know when you can.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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I am looking forward to seeing you on February 15th.
I would like to set up the time soon.
I can adjust my time, so please let me know your convenient time.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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I will look forward to that I can meet you on February 15 next month.
I want to decide time soon.
Because it is attached, as for me, please tell the circumstances of the time the convenient time again.
I look forward to hearing from you.

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I will look forward to meeting you on February 15th, next month.
I'd like to set up the time soon.
As for me, I am flexible, so please tell me your convenient time again.
I look forward to hearing back from you.

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Please let me ask you about a few points. I appreciate you would reply me.
I would like you to tell me about the amount of the time you did the business before.

1. Please tell me the business hour.
2. Please tell me the location of the store.
3. Please tell me the average customers coming to the store per day.
4. Please tell me the amount of the sales in a month.
6. How much amount of the total purchasing amount would it be in a month?
6. How many tables are there in the store? Also, how many is the capacity of the store?

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Please let me ask you a few points. I appreciate if you would reply me.
Regarding the profit and the cost, please provide the numbers from your last business operations.

1. Please tell me the business hour.
2. Please tell me the location of the store.
3. Please tell me the number of average customers coming to the store per day.
4. Please tell me the amount of the sales in a month.
6. How much total purchasing amount would it be in a month?
6. How many tables are there in the store? Also, how much capacity does the store have?

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I got notification from customer same as previous time as authentication error.
Customer is now considering for purchase license key of software.
If customer purchase license key of software, is it possible to delete message of "trial version" ?

I have never seen the screen after start this software because I have never use that.
If I use enclosed software for trial, is message of "trial version" displayed on screen?

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I got a notification from the same customer as who has previously contacted me (or us) about the authentication error.
The customer is now considering to purchase a license key of the software.
If this customer purchases a license key of the software, is it possible to delete the message saying "trial version" ?

I have never seen the screen after starting this software because I have never used it.
By using the enclosed trial software, is the message of "trial version" continue to be displayed on screen?

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I sent parts which fit your car in ○○.
Please see this page.

Since shipment is done by EMS, it can be usually delivered within one week.
In addition, we can prepare parts which you want even if we are not currently selling on ebay.
Please contact me if you need anything.↵

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I created a list on ○○ for the parts which fit your car.
Please check this site.

Since shipment is done by EMS, it can be usually delivered within one week.
In addition, we can prepare parts which you want even if we are not currently selling on ebay.
Please contact us, if you need anything.