翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

前回と同じお客様からソフトウェアの認証エラーについての連絡がありました。
お客様はソフトウェアのライセンスキーを購入しようか検討しているそうです。
ソフトウェアのライセンスキーを購入すれば「試用バージョン」の表示を消すことができますか？

私はソフトウェアを使ったことがないので、起動したときの画面を見たことがありません。
同梱されている試用のソフトウェアを使うと「試用バージョン」の表示が画面に出続けるのでしょうか？

英語

I got notification from customer same as previous time as authentication error.
Customer is now considering for purchase license key of software.
If customer purchase license key of software, is it possible to delete message of "trial version" ?

I have never seen the screen after start this software because I have never use that.
If I use enclosed software for trial, is message of "trial version" displayed on screen?

レビュー ( 1 )

radhaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2017/01/11 10:06:20

元の翻訳
I got notification from customer same as previous time as authentication error.
Customer is now considering for purchase license key of software.
If customer purchase license key of software, is it possible to delete message of "trial version" ?

I have never seen the screen after start this software because I have never use that.
If I use enclosed software for trial, is message of "trial version" displayed on screen?

修正後
I got a notification from the same customer as who has previously contacted me (or us) about the authentication error.
The customer is now considering to purchase a license key of the software.
If this customer purchases a license key of the software, is it possible to delete the message saying "trial version" ?

I have never seen the screen after starting this software because I have never used it.
By using the enclosed trial software, is the message of "trial version" continue to be displayed on screen?

*It is not wrong, but will be more official to use "I received" instead of "I got".
*a license key of a software -> you could also say "a software license key" to be short
*again, it is not grammatically wrong, but it might be more natural to say "I have not seen the starting screen..."