na (natsukio) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I've lived in Moscow and I wish to sell quality products to the Russians.
I'm truly sorry that you're not satisfied with the item.
I accept your return as a token of my apology.
I bare the return shipping fee so please send it back via airmail.
However, I know that shipping with Russian Post can be troublesome. If you wish to keep the item, I can also refund you $70 instead.
Please let me know whether you wish to keep or return the item.

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I used to live in Moscow and so I wish to sell quality products to the Russians.
I'm truly sorry that you're not satisfied with the item.
I accept your return as a token of my apology.
I will bear the return shipping fee so please send it back via airmail.
However, I know that shipping with Russian Post can be troublesome. If you wish to keep the item, I can also refund you $70 instead.
Please let me know whether you wish to keep or return the item.

元の翻訳
I've lived in Moscow and I wish to sell quality products to the Russians.
I'm truly sorry that you're not satisfied with the item.
I accept your return as a token of my apology.
I bare the return shipping fee so please send it back via airmail.
However, I know that shipping with Russian Post can be troublesome. If you wish to keep the item, I can also refund you $70 instead.
Please let me know whether you wish to keep or return the item.

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I used to live in Moscow and I wish to sell quality products to the Russians.
I'm truly sorry that you're not satisfied with the item.
I accept your return as a token of my apology.
I will reimburse the return shipping fee so please send it back via airmail.
However, I know that shipping with Russian Post can be troublesome. If you wish to keep the item, I can refund you $70 instead.
Please let me know whether you wish to keep or return the item.

元の翻訳
I received a reply from him today.

I have several things to report and questions.
Firstly, in regards to his credibility.
I called the number you've given me but he had no knowledge whatsoever.
He didn't know Takeuchi Ryosuke or the name of your company.
I thought the number might be wrong but their corporate name is Glorious Japan. The number seems correct.
According to him, he doesn't provide telephone supports.
That's impossible in the Japanese business practice.

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I received a reply from him today.

I have several things to report and to ask.
Firstly, it is about his credibility.
I called the number you've given to me but he had no knowledge whatsoever.
He didn't know Takeuchi Ryosuke or the name of your company.
I thought the number might be wrong but their corporate name is Glorious Japan, which means the number seems correct.
According to him, they don't provide telephone supports.
As you may know, it is nonsense in the Japanese business practice.

元の翻訳
In normal circumstances, I would call him and ask for explanation, but it seems impossible.

We're ready to provide you all the necessary information with regard to this matter.
If needed, we can send you translated emails from him.
You should be rid of business persons with no credibility to maintain your corporate and products' liability.
We hope to have business directly with you.

Please let us know your opinion.

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In normal circumstances, I would call him and ask for an explanation, but that seems impossible.

We're ready to provide you with all the necessary information with regard to this matter.
If needed, we can send you translated emails from him.
You should not use business persons with no credibility to maintain your corporate and products' good name.
We hope to do business directly with you.

Please let us know your opinion.

元の翻訳
I'm glad I've won the auction of the nice C/S. I'd like to ask you to ship it by Express mail international. Do you think that's possible? If so, please send me an invoice. I'll make a payment as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration.

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I'm glad I've won the auction of the nice C/S. I'd like to ask you to ship it by Express Mail International. Do you think that's possible? If so, please send me an invoice. I'll make a payment as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration.

元の翻訳
I checked the status.
It looks like the item has been shipped after custom inspection.
I think it'll arrive today or tomorrow.
I hope you'll receive it smoothly.

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I checked the status.
It looks like the item has been shipped after custom inspection.
I think it'll arrive today or tomorrow.
I hope it reaches you without any problems.

元の翻訳
It's been a long time.
Did you change your company's name?
Whatever happened to the Singapore IPO?

Our business is going well.
Let me know if you've got any good business offers for us.

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It's been a long time.
Did you change your company's name?
How did it go with the Singapore IPO?

Our business is going well.
Let me know if you have any good business offers for us.

元の翻訳
「あなた達に制限をかけていた気がしたので」－パラモアが有料ファンクラブを停止。

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「多くの皆様に制限をかけていた気がしたので」－パラモアが有料ファンクラブを停止。

元の翻訳
Thank you! I always appreciate your sincere supports!
I'm glad that I can use the high-quality pictures.

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Thank you! I always appreciate your sincere support!
I'm glad that I can use the high-quality pictures.