Marsili Marco (marco84) — もらったレビュー

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Grazie mille.

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Si prega di una richiesta di nuova consegna.

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Grazie mille.

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誤って2品を購入してしまいました。1品だけが欲しいですけど、どうすればいいのでしょうか

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誤って2点を購入してしまいました。1点だけ必要なのですがどうすればよろしいでしょうか？

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Hello,

I checked the shipment's status as soon as I received your mail.
I have to apologize to you.
I just checked and the item has not been shipped yet.
I made an unbelievable mistake.
I made up a mess because at the end of last year I stocked a large number of Beats, the same that you bought.
Since I have the item here with me, please don't worry.
I will ship it ASAP this evening.

After the shipment I will mail you again.
I made an unbelievable mistake.
I am sorry from the bottom of my heart.
There's really no excuse.

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Hello,

I checked the shipment's status as soon as I received your mail.
I have to apologize to you.
I just checked it and the item has not been shipped yet.
I made an unbelievable mistake.
I mixed up because at the end of last year I stocked a large number of Beats, the same that you bought.
Since I have the item here with me, please don't worry.
I will ship it ASAP this evening.

After the shipment I will mail you again.
I made an unbelievable mistake.
I am sorry from the bottom of my heart.
There's really no excuse.

元の翻訳
Hello,
thank you for your inquire.
I checked the delivery status.

The item arrived at the guest house on 3rd March at 19:45 local time.

But since the consignee was unclear it was sent back to me.

For details, please contact your local post office.

Since you didn't receive the item this time I have decided to refund you.
Later we'll send you a refund.

Thank you for your understanding.

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Hello,
thank you for your inquire.
I checked the delivery status.

The item arrived at the guest house on March 3rd at 19:45 local time.

But since the consignee was unclear it was sent back to me.

For details, please contact your local post office.

Since you didn't receive the item this time, I have decided to refund you.
Later we'll send you a refund.

Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
FM PORT "Hiru Doki!"

Sun 15th March 12:00 - 13:00
FM PORT "Hiru Doki!"

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FM PORT "Hiru Doki!"

Sun 15th March 12:00 - 13:00
FM PORT "Hiru Doki!"

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Thank you for your inquire about the wholesale.
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Yes, the wholesale is possible.
Regarding the A inquire, for every 30 pieces I will refund 10 dollars.
In example, should you buy 90 pieces there would be 30 dollars discount.
I just checked the US warehouse's inventory and there are only 20 pieces remaining.
In about 7-10 days I am planning to refill the American warehouse with around 200 pieces, could it be possible for you to wait until then?
In addition, if you tell me your address I can send you a direct mail with terms and conditions in case you wish to keep making further transactions and receive more discounts.

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Thank you for your inquire [parts of speech confusion] about wholesale.
Yes, wholesale is possible.
Regarding the A, for every 30 pieces I will refund 10 dollars.
For example, should you buy 90 pieces there would be a 30-dollar discount.
I just checked the US warehouse's inventory and there are only 20 pieces remaining.
In about 7-10 days I am planning to refill the American warehouse with around 200 pieces. Could you possibly wait until then?
In addition, if you tell me your address I can send you a direct mail with terms and conditions in case you wish to keep making further transactions and receive more discounts.

元の翻訳
Since the packing in the #2565 ROTARY CYLINDER is subject to wear I am thinking to buy a new packing.

Could you please send me a quote for the #2565 part (packing)?

I am looking to hearing from you soon.

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Since the packing in the #2565 ROTARY CYLINDER is subject to wear I am thinking to buy a new packing.

Could you please send me a quote for the #2565 part (packing)?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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I want to thank you for your last time quick shipment. This time I was thinking to buy from 7 to 10 items.

Please reply to this mail and tell me which one you have. My order of preference is A, B, C, D. (I am looking for items in good conditions).

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


Thank you for your prompt reply. I checked the list and I would like to buy the items listed below. In addition to the purchase I am considering to buy again from you in the future so I would like to ask if you could you set me a price of ●● per item?

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I want to thank you for your last time quick shipment. This time I was thinking to buy from 7 to 10 items.

Please reply to this mail and tell me which one you have. My order of preference is A, B, C, D. (I am looking for items in good conditions).

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


Thank you for your prompt reply. I checked the list and I would like to buy the items listed below. In addition to this purchase I am considering to buy again from you in the future so I would like to ask if you could you set me a price of ●● per item?