hippo (kabasan) — もらったレビュー

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二十人の芸能人、例えばStephan Bodzin, Audiojack, John Tejada, Jimpster and Rodriguez Jrが10周年の集合アルバムのために独自の声を録音しましたー彼らの大半がTRAKTOR Remix Setで楽曲を提供してくれました。

今使えるのもこのTRAKTOR Remix Setです。

私はAudenです。

明日の朝までにこれらの仕事を片付けてくれますか？確かに結構の量がーもしできなければ、できそうな時間を教えてください！

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Stephan Bodzin, Audiojack, John Tejada, Jimpster and Rodriguez Jrといった20名のアーティストが10周年の集合アルバムのために独自の声を録音しましたー彼らの大半がTRAKTOR Remix Setで楽曲を提供してくれました。

TRAKTOR Remix Setとしてご利用できます。

Audenです。

明日の朝までにこれらの仕事を片付けてくれますか？確かに結構の量がーもしできなければ、できそうな時間を教えてください！

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#myus
もちろん、水運で届けることが可能です。Record Headから届いた荷物がバッテリーを取り付けられたと言われた理由はここに来る前にそれがすでに取り付けられたからです。他の荷物が運送中と表示されているのもこの理由によるのです。もしお客様がバッテリーを外して運送させるなら、 $10.50の危険物料金が請求されないと思います。

もし何かご不明な点があれば、お気軽にお聞きください。

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#myus
もちろん、水運で届けることが可能です。Record Headから届いた荷物がバッテリーを取り付けられたと言われた理由はここに来る前にそれがすでに取り付けられたからです。他の荷物が運送中と表示されているのもこの理由によるのです。もしお客様がバッテリーを外して運送させるなら、 $10.50の危険物料金が請求されないと思います。

もし何かご不明な点があれば、お気軽にお聞きください。↵
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もう少しこなれた感じで訳されるとよいのではないでしょか。↵
もちろん、この商品は出荷可能です。Record Headから届いた荷物にはインストール済みと書かれていますが、これはすでにバッテリーの取り付けが終わっているということです。。。↵

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OK,everybody!Sorry to have kept you waiting.Let's move to acoustic live corner.Let's welcome A./A,thank you for your performance.It's really a valuable live that we have few chance to see.So is everybody satisfied?I'm very excited though.There's only 2 months left this year so what's the plan when new year's coming?Finally,please give our spectators some information.-I'm sorry have taken you so long and I think it's a great performance to live up to your expectations.

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OK,everybody! Sorry to have kept you waiting. Let's move to acoustic live corner. Let's welcome A ./A,thank you for your performance. It's really a valuable live that we have few chance to see. "Everybody, how did you like it?" I'm very excited too. There are only 2 months left this year. What will be your plans of activities for the end of the year and the beginning of the new year? Finally,please give our spectators your message.-I'm sorry it took so long but I think it's a great performance to live up to your expectations.

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For example,money paid without receiving the product,product received but was broken,etc.

In fact,when problem occurs,it's paypal that refund you ,not ebay.
Papal has a system named buyer protection will protects buyer.
I've pasted the URL here for you to read.

The system up here is system that when your product didn't arrive or been broken,paypal will refund all the money.

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For example, money paid without receiving the product, product received but was broken,etc.

In fact, when a problem occurs, it's paypal that refunds you, not eBay.
Papal [spelling] has a system named buyer protection will protects buyer [ungrammatical].
I've pasted the URL here for you to read.

The system above is [article] system that when your product didn't arrive or been [tense] broken, PayPal will refund all the money.

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Hello.
I'm very grateful that you're interested in the goods we are selling.
I sold **on ebay and my name is OO.
Full name is OO.
I'm operating some stores in Japan selling major products of brand goods including clothes,shoes,expensive metals and toys.
I'm very happy that I could sell my goods to you for this time.
Thank you very much.
I have an idea for you.

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Hello.
I'm very grateful that you're interested in the goods we are selling.
I sold **on ebay and my name is OO.
My real name is OO.
I'm operating some stores in Japan selling mainly brand goods including clothes, shoes, jewelry, and toys.
I'm very happy that I could sell my goods to you this time.
Thank you very much.
I have a suggestion for you.

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Lisa,I'm very happy that you got my mail.
I'm always happy to hear that you are growing up in Olivia.I'm really grateful to be your family.Say hi to your family.we'll meet again.I'll E-mail you latter.

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Lisa,I'm very happy that you got my mail and you are safe.
[I'm always happy to hear that you are growing up in Olivia]. [I'm really grateful to be your family]. Say hi to your family. Let's get together again. I'll E-mail you again.
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Olivia is her daughter's name......↵
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I am always happy watching Olivia growing while I'm in Japan....↵
I think you and your family are wonerful..........

元の翻訳
この化粧品についての説明は完全にあっているわけではないが、商品そのものは100パーセント働くので、ご安心ください。

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この化粧品についての説明は正確ではありません。商品そのものは100パーセント使えるので問題はないのですが。