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元の翻訳
How about this pan? I am interested in it, but I have just purchased a pan. However, I don't
have a smaller size, it would be better if I add that pan too.

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How about this pan? I am interested in it, but I have just purchased a pan. However, I don't
have a smaller sized one, so it might be better to have that pan too.

元の翻訳
FR
Please log in to your account and refer to your purchase history for the returned goods procedure.
According to the B Policy rules, we will repay you the returned goods cost when the goods have sent to you.
Thanks in advance.

UK
Thank you for your contact.
If it gets past through the customs it will be delivered to you in 7 to 14 days!
But the customs always check randomly so I couldn't tell you beforehand.
Thank you in advance.

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FR
Please log in to your account and refer to your purchase history for the returned goods procedure.
According to the B Policy rules, we will refund you the returned goods cost when the goods have sent back to us.
Thanks in advance.

UK
Thank you for your contact.
If it gets through the customs without any problems, it will be delivered to you in 7 to 14 days!
But the customs always check items randomly so I can't tell you beforehand.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
And I already evaluated because it was took time reply to come. I am sorry.
I'm planning to cancel the evaluation.
Cash back of $ 50 Is it possible?
I was going to sell this product in Japan, but it can not be done.
I am waiting for a good answer.
Then, raise the request of "Feedback Revision".

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Thank you for your reply.
And I already evaluated you because it took long to hear from you. I am sorry.
I'm planning to cancel the evaluation.
Can I please have $50 cash back?
I was going to sell this product in Japan, but it can not be done in this condition.
I am waiting for a good answer.
In the meantime, submit the request of "Feedback Revision".

元の翻訳
I was making a bill addressed to you, and came across a few things that needed confirmation.
The A4 ☆that I purchased at ◯ included 8 sheets. I have purchased 2 sets of this, making it a total of 16 sheets. Do you think it would be enough? If not, I can purchase more.
I have used $18.4 so far to purchase these items, and with the delivery fee to ◎ and the commission added, the final amount will be $◆.
I also have the cards you have mentioned previously, wuold you like to purchase that together?
There will be no added delivery fee.

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I was making a bill addressed to you, and came across a few things that needed confirmation.
The A4 ☆that I purchased at ◯ included 8 sheets. I have purchased 2 sets of this, making it a total of 16 sheets. Do you think it would be enough? If not, I can purchase more.
I have used $18.4 so far to purchase these items, and with the delivery fee to ◎ and the commission added, the final amount will be $◆.
I also have the cards you have mentioned previously, would you like to purchase that together?
There will be no added delivery fee.

元の翻訳
Hello, my name is **.

I'm afraid I've purchased an item by mistake,
and would like to cancel the order.

I'm so sorry for the inconvenience.
Kind regards.

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Hello, my name is **.

I'm afraid I've purchased an item by mistake,
and would like to cancel the order.

I'm so sorry for the inconvenience.
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Kind regards.

元の翻訳
私たちは二つウェブサイトがあります。大阪のウェブサイトの在庫品は少ししかないのにはあまり売れません。

私たちコンタクトをした日本の販売員はあなただけだった。他のブランドも売るけど、始めのころこのブランドだけ供給することができます。↵
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できる税金は好個、それから順序をした後、二つ「クゥオーと」が出せる。
例証するため、フロリダに送る２０ポウンドの包みは２５ドルぐらいかかる。日本に送るのは１５０ドルのです。

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私たちは二つウェブサイトがあります。Osakatradingのウェブサイトでは在庫をあまり抱えていないので売り上げはあまり多くありません。

Gショックを販売しているお店で連絡をしたのはあなた方だけでした。他のブランドも売っていますが、まずはこれらから始めてみませんか？↵
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私たちの為替レートはいいですよ。ご注文の後、2つ見積もりをお送りできます。
参考までに、フロリダに20ポンドの荷物を送ると25ドルぐらいかかります。日本に送るのは大体150ドルくらいです。

元の翻訳
Sorry for late reply to you because of my business trip.I wanted to accomplish the present project with you till the last, but support your decision. Working with you till now is very happy to me. After self-regard, I wish it will play an active part in your life and pray your family to have a good health and happiness . When you come to Japan, please contact me.

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Sorry for the late reply to you. I was out for the business trip. I wanted to accomplish this project with you until the end, but I respect your decision. I had a great time working with you. After self-regard, I wish it will play an active part in your life and pray for your family to have a good health and happiness . When you come to Japan, please contact me.