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I am thankful for your calling a short while ago.
I told to My friend, Mr. Kaneko about paying for the vehicle fare 38,000 yen and the transportation fee.
And late I want you know that it will take the 12640 yen for recycle down payment.
The transportation fee will call Mr.Kaneko next Tuesday.
If you give me the E-mail address, I am able to contact you by E-mail, too.

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I am thankful for your calling a short while ago.
I told my friend, Mr. Kaneko, about paying 38,000 yen for the vehicle fare plus the transportation fee.
Also, please be noted that it will take 12640 yen for recycle down payment.
I will call Mr.Kaneko next Tuesday regarding the transportation fee.
If you could give me his email address, I can send him an email too.

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The photo of flag which was bought is delivered.
The customer wants to know what kind of the design and which athlete has it.↵
If you can teach me what you know until now, there will be a very good help for me.
Thanking you for your cooperation very much.↵

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I'm sending the picture of the flag I bought.
The client want's to know which athlete's autograph it is.↵
It will be of great help if you would tell me how much you know (the extent of your knowledge about the product)
Thanks again, best wishes

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It is one kind of company's value which you can create.↵
Through the Chunghwa POST, you can order the stamp designed by yourself.
And it can be good media of your new products for advertisement to present the image of your brand.
Besides,it could be the gift for your customers.
It is a good new choice for you to have a unique and high taste of quality goods.↵
Also it is a good choice for excellent image.
Order the stamp in your style by the Chunghwa POST

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By ordering Chunghwa Post customized stamp, you can create a whole new business value.
And it can be a good media of advertising your new products to present the image of your brand.
Besides, it could be used as a gift for your customers.
It is a good new choice of uniqueness and classic taste to present an excellent image.
Chunghwa Post Customized Stamp.

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中国の農村に住んでいる合法的な住民

本のまとめ
合法的な住民の観念を紹介し、そして、中国の農村でこの観念はどのように実行されるのかを説明します。特に弱権力が政治システムを運営することにおいて焦点を与えます。この本のハイライトは、どのような証拠が中国から出てくることと、社会運動はどのようにお互いにコミュニヶーションすることです。

どのように貧乏者と弱者が彼らの利益のために政治システムを動かすのか。中国の農村で主にインタビューと世論調査を通し完成します。Kevin O'Brienと Lianjiang Liは群衆運動の継ぎ目が常に国の中に位置づけと分けられた状態を開拓することにあります。

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中国の農村に住んでいる合法的な住民

本のまとめ
合法的な住民の観念を紹介し、そして、中国の農村でこの観念はどのように実行されるのかを説明します。特に弱権力が政治システムを運営することにおいて焦点を与えます。この本のハイライトは、中国の現状と社会運動の理論はどのようにお互いにコミュニヶーションするかということです。

どのように貧困層および弱者層が彼らの利益になるように政治システムに働きかけることができるか。おもにインタビューと世論調査を中国の農村で行うことにより、Kevin O'Brienと Lianjiang Liは民衆運動は国内の地域の位置づけとどのように扱われるか次第であることを示しています。

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It is not to hiring people only, but it is to create the most advantage business,and our company receives it , than give it to the young who really want to work by heart.

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It is not to hiring people only, but it is to create the most advantage business,and our company receives it　→　takes it , than give it to the young who really want to work by heart. → young people who are motivated.

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Besides, the senior also active.<a href="http://www.spool.co.jp/service/komon.html" target="_blank"><strong>service of consultant dispatch</strong>（the senior human resource who has the high professional skill support the small and medium enterprise and venture companies）</a>the household also easy to get a work<a href="http://www.spool.co.jp/service/merchandising.html" target="_blank"><strong>merchandising service </strong>（Throught the promoting events in the supermarket and drug store etc.,there will increase the profits of products and market share.</a>などもあります。

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In addition, there are services utilizes the expertise of senior citizens.<a href="http://www.spool.co.jp/service/komon.html" target="_blank"><strong>Advisor dispatch service</strong>（where senior citizens with high professional skills to provide support for SMEs and venture companies）</a><a href="http://www.spool.co.jp/service/merchandising.html" target="_blank"><strong>merchandising service </strong>which can be more readily available for homemakers to work （Provide supports for improvement of the sales or market share of merchandise through sales promotion activities at supermarkets and drug stores etc.</a>

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According to this, the business model of our serving will be strengthened very much, and the value of the business will increase much more.

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Thanks to this, the business model of our service will be strengthened very much, and the value of the business will increase much more.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br><strong>the service for delivering the internet shopping</strong><br></br>It is to use the know-how of storehouses developing by our company. And we receive the business of the internet shopping companies. Before, it is a burden for companies to have a amount of work and fee relating the logistics(such as wage, delivery fee, rent, system fee etc.). But now the fee and workload can be cost down.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br><strong>a service for online shopping website shipping</strong><br></br>With our solid experience and know-how of warehouse operation, we can offer services for multiple shopping websites; therefore we can reduce the amount of workload associated with logistics and distribution costs for your services. (such as wage, delivery fee, rent, system fee etc.).

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<strong>service for logistics center operation </strong><br></br>About logistics center operating, there are many way to improve the work. Our company can guide the company from the consulting to achieve by one step. As a result, it could not systematize and could become the operation which need workers.

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<strong>service for logistics center operation </strong><br></br>About operations in logistics center, there are many ways to improve their business. Although our company offers a one-stop service from consulting to achieving improvement, some business can not be systematized and it needs manpower.

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According to the business environment of Q3-2：Q3-1, what kind of strategy do you take, today?

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According to the business environment of Q3-2：Q3-1, what kind of strategy are you taking, today?

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Q3-3：the necessary to have a base of 「assemble of human」is meaning it got more difficult to protect the human resource.↵

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Q3-3: By saying you need a base for "gathering people," do you mean that securing human resources is becoming harder?

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>Servicing industry that the main kind shopping service are strong in this trend.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>Service industries centering particularly on selling are strong in that trend.

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According to Q3-4：Q3-3, what kind of human dispatch should we take care of from now on?

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Q3-4：based on Q3-3, what kind of dispatch will you focus on from now on?

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Now, the problem of the mental disabled working is the topic of any countries. Hiring the mental disabled became the obligation because the change to the labor law of disabled hiring. Therefore, our company supports not only people who are development disorder but also the mental disabled.

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Currently, employment of persons with mental disabilities is a national issue, and with this year's revision of the Disabled Persons Employment Promotion Act, employing persons with mental disabilities has become mandatory. Therefore, our company supports not only physically but also mentally challenged.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>We group is to create the hiring for the people who are not mercy for having a chance of hiring. And to be a business partner who solve the problem of customer company. Therefore, our goal is to achieve this 2 mission and get better day by day.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>Our S-Pool group is applying ourselves everyday to realize 2 missions: to create employment for the people who does not have enough employment opportunity, and to be a business partner to solve the problem of our customer companies.

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the main human dispatch, outsourcing, moreover such as supporting the disabled hire, senior consultant dispatch etc. It is to create the opportunity of job for people who want to work.<a href="https://www.spool.co.jp/" target="_blank">Spool Inc.</a>。

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In addition to dispatching temporary core staff, <a href="https://www.spool.co.jp/" target="_blank">S-Pool, Inc.</a> creates job opportunities for all job seekers, including support for employments of disabled people and dispatching of senior citizens as corporate advisers.

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<i class="icon-picture"></i> the achievement of service about delivering the internet sales for you.

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<i class="icon-picture"></i> an example of the achievement of service about delivering the internet sales.