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The bakery of Tama kitei
This is a famous bakery. Also, it is top of the all country rank in the gourmet blog.
They have the simple bread, the especial bread is also popular.
Please check the information of bakery of Tama kitei in gourmet blog!
It is full of information about evaluation, public praise, photo and so on from users!
It also full of the details about map and food menu etc.

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The bakery of Tama kitei
This is a famous bakery. Also, it ranks high in Tabelog blog (gourmet blog) out of all bakeries across the country.
Although they have simple breads, their specialty breads are also popular.
Please check the information of bakery of Tamakitei in gourmet blog!
It is full of information about evaluation, public praise, photo and so on from users!
It also full of the details about map and food menu etc.

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Hatsu miku Live Stage Legend
It is a combining good of Hatsu miku and Family Mart.
The content is the same, but there will be about 10 type of sticker.
However, there are not for sale now.
The picture of package.
sticker

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Hatsu miku Live Stage Legend
It is a combining good of Hatsune miku and Family Mart.
The content is the same, but there will be about 10 types of stickers.
However, they are not for sale now.
The picture of package.
sticker

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I had a inquiring from the important customer.
This customer is driving a red Japan car made in 1962.
It is said that the car is very old, so the baking finish is fading.
Renewing the baking finish would make the car's value going down.↵
Therefore, I was told that if any possible to recovery the car by your company's product?
In this occasion, do you have any advise better for me?
Would you please tell me about more details of construction way and products for using?
Recently, my customers are grown up, I felt even myself have to get more knowledge.
Please tell me with your best answer.

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I had an inquiry from an important customer.
This customer is driving a red Japanese car made in 1962.
It is said that the car is very old, so the coat is fading.
Renewing the coat would make the car's value decrease so I was told by my customer that he wants to recover the car any possible way with your company's product.
For this occasion, do you have any better advice for me?
Would you please tell me more details on how it's made and products that use it?
Recently, my customer base has grown and I even feel like I have to become more knowledgeable.
Please tell me with your best answer.

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What is Mobile Police PATLABOR? [Mobile Police PATLABOR] is the media-mixed product such as comic, anime, novel and so on. Its background is based on 1988 and during many years to near future. And its story is happened in Tokyo area as center.
This product is a pioneer one which not see often at that time.

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What is Mobile Police PATLABOR? ”Mobile Police PATLABOR” is the media-mixed product such as comic, anime, novel and so on. Its background is based on 1988 and during many years to near future. And its story is happened in Tokyo area as center.
This product is a pioneer one which not sees often at that time.

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老鼠訓練師

用咬合的運動，可以訓練表情的肌肉。<br>如果您覺得faceline合適的話，是可以使因為咬合而老化的表情肌肉，而被充分的訓練。因為是非常有彈性的老鼠訓練師，放在下面的牙齒上，只是咬合而已，就可以充分的訓練口輪肌肉。

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嘴部肌肉訓練器

用咀嚼的方式來運動並訓練臉部表情及臉部肌肉。跟臉部皺紋說掰掰↵
<br>如果您介意臉部皺紋，多練習嘴部咀嚼運動，訓練日漸鬆弛的臉部肌肉。↵
因為這是有彈性的嘴部訓練器，將之放在牙齒後部，只需要做咀嚼的動作，就可以充分的訓練口部周圍的肌肉。

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裏面蘇格蘭男用短裙的編織襯衫

編織密度較低，穿起來較鬆鬆大大的，推薦給想穿出男人隨興感覺的人。使用混羊毛的編織衣料，穿在身上有附蘇格蘭男用短裙，相當溫暖的感覺。可以看見編織模樣的縱線和高領。

品質＝［表面材質］壓克力７０％・毛３０％（編織衣料　柄編　３gauge）［裏面棉花］人造纖維１００％ ［裏面材質]有（總裏　裏面蘇格蘭男用短裙） 裏面口袋（無） 花樣的表現方式多少會有不同。↵

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男版蘇格蘭式鋪棉內裏針織外套

以粗針編織而成，穿起來較寬鬆，可以讓喜歡休閒隨性風格的人穿出男人味。混羊毛的衣料加上內裏鋪棉，穿起來有型又保暖。條紋式的編法和高領的設計讓人看起來清爽有型。

品質＝［表面材質］壓克力７０％・毛３０％（編織衣料　柄編　３尺寸規格）［內裏鋪棉］人造纖維１００％ ［內裏材質]有（總裏 蘇格蘭式鋪棉　） 裏面口袋（無） 花樣的表現方式多少會有不同。

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主題重新流行的項練
擁有溫暖的顏色，除了好穿戴之外，更添加些許華麗。強調重新流行的氣氛與存在感的大小。與細緻毛絨上衣搭配，可以相當提升整體的感覺。

材質＝鋼・環氧樹脂・銅黃 全長:約72cm（含調節器約５cm） 最大幅:約6cm

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復古典雅式項練
以暖色係來平衡典雅感，除了好穿戴之外，更添加些許華麗。其特點是其復古華麗的質感讓人無法忽視它的存在。與素色毛絨上衣搭配，可以相當提升整體的感覺。

材質＝鋼・環氧樹脂・銅黃 全長:約72cm（含調節器約５cm） 最大幅:約6cm

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要像這樣來拍攝。傳達東京美髮潮流的TOKYO COSME TREND其MC是模特兒的沙良小姐。
也正在拍攝專業美粧師給的美粧建議! 不論何時要美粧的時候，都能有來自專業美粧師的建議，這真是太好了。

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像這樣子的拍攝感覺。傳達東京美髮潮流的TOKYO COSME TREND是其廣告模特兒的沙良小姐。
也正在拍攝專業美粧師給的美粧建議! 不論何時要美粧的時候，都能有來自專業美粧師的建議，這真是太好了。

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その一つの商品に問題があって、そして返信が遅くなったことを、お詫びを申し訳ございませんでした。
返品については、もちろん問題はないです。USに送ってくる場合は、日本からの送料が含みません。海外への送料を知っていたら驚くと思います。別の方法で海外へ送ったでしょうか。

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購入した商品のうちの一つに問題があったことと返信が遅くなったことを深くお詫びいたします。
商品を返品していただいても結構ですが、元々発送先が米国内の住所でしたので、日本からの返送料の負担は難しいです。海外への送料の高さをよくご存知で、ご自身で別の方法で海外へ送ったのではないでしょうか。

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Good afternoon
I saw your profile and seem you had a lot of experiences to translate, so would you please do a job for me?
The job is very simple.
I would give you 20-30 links. And the links are to show the results of each one translator's translations between English-Russian language. Please see the translation results and evaluate those with 1-6 stages. You do not have to adjust those.
Due to the translators, there are many translations, therefore it would be OK to just confirm the translations of 2,3.
if you would like to take this job, please contact me.

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Good afternoon
I saw your profile and it seems you had a lot of experiences of translating, I would like to have you work with me.
The job I want to assign to you is very simple.
I would give you 20-30 links which show the results of each translator's translations from English to Russian. Please look through the translation results and evaluate their translations with 1-6 stages. You do not have to correct those.
Though there are lots of translators, and each of them might have lots of translations to be checked, you do not have to look through all of them; just 2 or 3 translations would be fine.
if you would like to take this job, please contact me.

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Good afternoon
I saw your profile and seem you had a lot of experiences to translate, so would you please do a job for me?↵
The job is very simple.
I would give you 20-30 links. And the links are to show the results of each one translator's translations between English-Russian language. Please see the translation results and evaluate those with 1-6 stages. You do not have to adjust those.
Due to the translators, there are many translations, therefore it would be OK to just confirm the translations of 2,3.↵
if you would like to take this job, please contact me.

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Hello,
I saw your profile and you seem to have a lot of experiences in translation. So I would like to offer you a job? It is very simple.
I would give you 20-30 links. And each link shows the work of a translator in English-Russian language. Please take a look at the translations and evaluate them in scale of 1-6. You do not have to make any corrections.
Some translators work on more than one so it would be OK to just confirm a couple of them. If you would like to take this job, please contact me.

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RADIO CLOCK can receive the time of Japan and match it, so that RADIO CLOCK can be used even overseas, but it is possible not to display the local time precislly.
To use RADIO CLOCK overseas, please turn off automatically receiving radio wave by[receiving off function]which stops automatically receiving radio wave. And then, radio clock would start to work by the precision of quartz.（analog type：1 month ave.±20 secs 　digital type：1 month ave.±30 secs）

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RADIO CLOCK receives the Japan Standard Time and adjusts to it, so RADIO CLOCK can be used overseas, but it may not display the local time correctly.
To use RADIO CLOCK overseas, please stop the clock from receiving radio waves automatically, using the [receiving off function] which stops receiving radio waves automatically. The RADIO CLOCK will operate with Quartz accuracy. (analog type: ave. ±20 secs loss or gain per month digital type: ave. ±30 secs loss or gain per month)

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an introduction to friends.
It is setting...
Automatically change to WiFi
when getting the information of position, it would raise the accuracy by turning on the WiFi.
when getting the information of position, the situation of the WiFi can not change automatically.
It could not download the photos.
Please try it again in the environment of good reception.
By the each button below, you can send your friends the download URL of 「Kiss」app.
To send by LINE
To send by short-mail
To send by other message apps
To select the sending-mail app
the download URL of 「Kiss」app

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an introduction to friends.
It is setting...
Automatically change to WiFi
when getting the information of position, it would raise the accuracy by turning on the WiFi.
when getting the information of position, the situation of the WiFi can not change automatically.
It could not download the photos.
Please try it again in the environment of good reception.
By the each button below, you can send your friends the download URL of 「Kiss」app.
To send by LINE
To send by short-mail
To send by other message apps
To select the sending-mail app
the download URL of "Kiss" app

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My question is that show detail 00-442-6423 is two kind of products, or two are the same product?
The photo send to me is able to be confirmed by camera service.
The products of Tracking number ｘｘｘ are the same goods in the photo?
What I purchased is BOSE MUSIC SYSTEM, so it is different good from I purchased .
Would you please tell me the goods of Tracking number ｘｘｘ is what?

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My question is that show detail 00-442-6423 has two kinds of products, are the two the same product?
The photo sent to me is able to be identified by camera service.
Is Tracking number ｘｘｘ the same as the product in the photo?
What I purchased is BOSE MUSIC SYSTEM, so it is a different product.
Would you please tell me the product which matches Tracking number ｘｘｘ?

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I had understood. I will trust you about your things.
Then, please make three of the mold in S,M,L.
Besides, each ring in S,M,L. have to make 35 pieces, total 105 pieces. Is it OK for you if a ring cost USD80?Please contact me about quotation including freight fare from you to Japan, the way how to pay, the delivery time. MOQ will be no problem to 100 pieces after next time.

The ring is in order to the making of website and opening the market of retail stores from now on. Therefore, it would take some months at least to start to sell. I will continually give you the order, so would you please protect the mold made this time?

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I understand. I trust you..
Then, please make three of the mold in S,M,L.
Besides, each ring in S,M,L. have to make 35 pieces, total 105 pieces. Is it OK for you if a ring cost USD80?Please contact me about quotation including freight fare from you to Japan, the way how to pay, and the delivery time. MOQ will be no problem to 100 pieces after next time.

The ring is in order to the making of website and opening the market of retail stores from now on. Therefore, it would take some months at least to start to sell. I will continually give you the order, so would you please protect the mold made this time?

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I thank for your cooperation. But I have a question. Today the goods had arrived already, but why the package is so large even surplus? For the original boxes, it should be entered boxes of the same size just like the attached pictures. Are the boxes outside your company's boxes?And I thank you for severe package, but don't you think the boxes outside were too larger?
The size is so larger that the freight free would cost double, Is it your package from now on?Is anything I can do for you?I am waiting for your contacting.

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I thank for your cooperation. But I have a question. Today the goods have arrived, but why the package is so larger than it actually needs to be? You have put the item into the larger box than the original one, like the attached pictures. Is the box outside your company's? I thank you for a careful package, but don't you think the box outside is too large?
The size is so large that the freight fee has costed me double, are you going to use this kind of packaging from now on? Is there anything I can do for you? I am waiting for your contact.

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I had tried many times in different way.
After making the version of PHP to 5.4, the display would become slowly if I install the ImageMagick.
Especially, the page showing the thumbnail is slowly.
Because the other users also had the same problem, it would be good for us to discuss any way and solution of shifting to other picture library from ImageMagick.
Because the display is very slowly, I do not understand the way to shift even I want to use the GD library.
Using the server costs me USD40 one month, so it would disturb me if the display is too slowly.

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I had tried many times in different ways.
After making the version of PHP to 5.4, the display became slow when I installed the ImageMagick.
Especially, the page showing the thumbnail is slow.
Because the other users also had the same problem, it would be good for us to discuss any way and solution of shifting to other picture library from ImageMagick.
Because the display is very slow, I do not understand the way to shift even I want to use the GD library.
Using the server costs me USD40 one month, so it would disturb me if the display is too slow.

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In fact, There are some case about your products sold with very cheap price and do not know where those goods from.(Of course, they can not offer any certificate)

To avoid the situation like this, I think about canceling the affairs of increasing the distributor which do not have any knowledge at all.

Our company are deciding to try our best to sell your products at most in Japan from now on.

We are taking seriously over any companies to think about that.

I am looking forward to be the general agent in Japan.
Our company would like to manage and arrange the selling.

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In fact, there are some cases that your products are sold at very cheap price and it's not sure where they are from.(Of course, they are not with guarantee or document equivalent of it)

To avoid the situation like this, I propose that you stop making many agency contracts with those who do not have any knowledge at all.

Our company is determined to try our best to sell your products the most in Japan from now on.

We are seriously thinking about that more than any company.

I hope you appoint our company be the general agent in Japan.
Our company would like to control the sales of your product.

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I do not suggest to supply this company.

Nowadays, according to the popular of internet in Japan, the companies just only selling products online are much increasing.

The quality and trustworthy of your company built by a long time would be damaged by dumping products to this kind of companies and selling in the price against the moral.

Our company is doing the business of online shopping,too. But we also sell products to the retail store.

I am thinking that if you can shift to this direction from now on, the stores which understand the quality of your company and power of your brand will increase gradually.

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I do not suggest you support this company.

Nowadays, according to the internet in Japan, companies that only sell products online are increasing.

The quality and trustworthiness of your company built over such a long time would be damaged by dumping products to this kind of company and selling at prices that go against your morals.

Our company is also doing online shopping. But we also sell products in retail stores.

I am thinking that if you can shift to this direction from now on, stores that understand the quality of your company and power of your brand will gradually increase.

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リリースによりますと、DSP は一つ接触面ということであり、それを通して、デジタル広告の広告主が、キャンペーン、多数のアドエクスチェンジ、及び Supply Side Platforms (SSPs) も管理できるのである。例えば、ダブルクリック アドエクスチェンジと、 リアルタイム入札のテクノロジーを使っているOpenX である。
このプラットホームは、さまざまな視聴者の特性を広告対象の目標として提供するのである。そして、look-a-likeターゲティング、 キーワードターゲティングを含んでいるのだ。その上に、 Data Management Platform (DMP)で累計購買回数、最新購買日、 購買日等とドメインターゲティングも含んでいるのだ。

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リリースによると、DSP は一つのインターフェイスということであり、それを通して、デジタル広告の広告主が、リアルタイム入札のテクノロジーを使ってダブルクリック アドエクスチェンジやOpenXのような多数のアドエクスチェンジ、及び Supply Side Platforms (SSPs) をもつキャンペーンも管理できるのである。
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このプラットホームは、Data Management Platform (DMP)による累計購買回数、最新購買日、 購買日等の入ったlook-a-likeターゲティング、 キーワードターゲティング、ドメインターゲティングも含む、さまざまな視聴者の特性を広告対象の目標として提供する予定だ。