Glen Wirawan Podiono (glenwp) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Sorry to inform you that I am unable to continue with the trading of the product.
The reason is that I have discovered a potential problem in customs clearance at the time of import to Japan.
I am very sorry that it has come to this despite the long awaited product has finally become available.

修正後
I am really sorry to inform you that I am unable to continue with the transaction.
The reason is because I have discovered that a possible problem might occur during customs clearance at the time of import into Japan.
Once again, I am truly very sorry that despite your help to secure the stock, it had to turn out this way.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the wonderful proposal.
I am sorry despite you have carefully chosen the products but there are lacking items in three of the product types.
First, I can only prepare 1 out of the 6 of type 1, 3 out of the 10 of type 2 and 4 out of the 10 of type 3.
The quantities of type 1 are not prepared in the stock of store 〇.
I have already mentioned this initially right?

I am sorry but what should be done now after the selection?
If the contents are okay with you then I will send you an email with the order contents and shipping costs details.

I will wait for your response.

修正後
Thank you for the wonderful proposal.
I am sorry that despite the fact that you have carefully chosen the products but there are lacking items in three of the product types.
First, I can only prepare 1 out of the 6 of type 1, 3 out of the 10 of type 2 and 4 out of the 10 of type 3.
The quantities of type 1 are not prepared in the stock of store 〇.
I should have mentioned this to you from the start.

I am sorry but what should be done now after the selection?
If the contents are okay with you then I will send you an email with the order contents and shipping costs details.

I will wait for your response.

元の翻訳
I have received the items I purchased on November 11th, but those items were not what I ordered.
1)
The items that I purchased were as follows.

Black:3
Pink:3
Red:5
White:2
Rose Pink:2


2)
The items that I received today were as follows:

Black:2
Pink:2
Red:3
White:2
Rose Pink:2
Blue:1



3)
I have additionally ordered items on November 19th as follows..

Light Pink:2
Blue:2

修正後
I have received the items I purchased on November 11th, but those items were different from what I had ordered.
1)
The items that I purchased are as follows.

Black:3
Pink:3
Red:5
White:2
Rose Pink:2


2)
The items that I received today are as follows:

Black:2
Pink:2
Red:3
White:2
Rose Pink:2
Blue:1



3)
I have additionally ordered items on November 19th as follows..

Light Pink:2
Blue:2

元の翻訳
I have seen your work. I have finally found the person I have been looking for after recruiting for more than 1 year on oDesk.
I will need you to make some simple modification and it will be the exhibition page I am looking for.
The shipping fee for Economy is the same for the US and Europe. Please have a look at the file I have attached with the parcel.
Please replace the "タイトル(title)" in the title section with the item title.
I do not understand the meaning of "price bar". Could you explain?
Please search for the meaning using Google or eBay search.

修正後
I have seen your work. I have finally found the person I have been looking for after recruiting for more than 1 year on oDesk.
Afterwards, I will need you to make some simple modification and it will be the exhibition page that I am looking for.
The shipping fee for Economy is the same for the US and Europe. Please have a look at the file I have placed in the box.
Please replace the "タイトル(title)" in the title section with the item title.
I do not understand the meaning of "price bar." Could you explain?
Please first search for the meaning using Google or eBay search.

元の翻訳
#habit
はい。　これらが私が所有しているヘッド部分です。残念ながら2個しか所有していないのです。
すべてのヘッド部分は工場からきており、中国で製造され、アメリカで組み立て、検品が行われます。

#International Sports
すべての特徴がわかっておりません。細部まで写された写真を送ってくだされば、わかると思います。

修正後
#habit
はい。　これらが私が所有しているヘッド部分です。残念ながら2個しか所有していないのです。
すべてのヘッド部分は工場からきており、中国で製造され、アメリカで組み立て、検品が行われます。

#International Sports　(インターナショナルスポーツ)
すべての特徴がわかっておりません。細部まで写された写真を送ってくだされば、わかると思います。