Michelle Gelito (gelito_111379) — もらったレビュー

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How do you do?
I am very sorry that the product did not arrive as scheduled.
I want to issue you a refund as you wanted.
I will contact support so we can proceed with the procedures.
However, I was not able to contact them since it's the weekend right now.
I will issue you the refund immediately at the start of next week so please kindly wait for a little while.
It would be of great help if you can contact me once the product arrives during that period.
Nevertheless, I will be supporting you all the way until the resolution of this issue.
Please contact me anytime for any concerns.
I will be on standby to support you anytime.

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How do you do?
I am very sorry that the product did not arrive as scheduled.
I want to issue you a refund as you requested.
I will contact the support center so we can proceed with the procedures.
However, I was not able to contact them since it's the weekend right now.
I will issue you the refund immediately at the start of next week so please wait for a little while.
It would be of great help if you could contact me once the product arrives during that period.
Nevertheless, I will be assisting you all the way until this issue is resolved.
Please contact me if you have any concerns.
I will be on standby to support you anytime.

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A. This sharp pen is equipped with lead. Moreover, you can use leads that are generally available in the market.
B. The vintage items of OO were uploaded in a lot of stores today. Although there are cuts on the boxes, there are a lot of items which contain contents in extremely good conditions so I am recommending it. The price is also very cheap.

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A. This mechanical pencil is equipped with lead. Moreover, you can use leads that are generally available in the market.
B. The vintage items of OO were uploaded in a lot of stores today. Although there are cuts on the boxes, there are a lot of items which contain contents in extremely good conditions so I am recommending it. The price is also very cheap.

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This product is genuine as shown in the photo.
It is also a popular product in Japan.
If possible, please kindly consider it.

Thank you very much for your response.
With that, i will issue the refund immediately.
I will contact eBay and prepare the next steps so please kindly wait for a little longer.

This is an informative matter.
As it has passed a number days since the transaction, I am currently reporting the situation to eBay and proceeding with the refund process. I think this issue can be resolved within a few days.
Apologies but I will have to ask you to wait for a little longer.

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This product is genuine as shown in the photo.
It is also a popular product in Japan.
If possible, please kindly consider it.

Thank you very much for your response.
With that, I will issue the refund immediately.
I will contact eBay and prepare the next steps so please kindly wait for a little longer.

This is an informative matter.
As it has passed a number days since the transaction, I am currently reporting the situation to eBay and proceeding with the refund process. I think this issue can be resolved within a few days.
Apologies but I will have to ask you to wait for a little longer.

元の翻訳
We are currently discussing the purchase and we have some questions.
Does this plugin support the theme of ABC? Upon making the purchase, can you customize it to be used with the theme of ABC?
The posting section is unique so the plugin might not work if it is not customized.

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We are currently considering the purchase and we have some questions.
Does this plugin support the theme of ABC? Upon making the purchase, can you customize it to be used with the theme of ABC?
The posting section is unique, so the plugin might not work if it is not customized.

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We have caused a whole lot of inconvenience for the client and Amazon. (We have caused you and Amazon a whole lot of inconvenience.)
We will confirm the product that the client ordered (you ordered) from Amazon.com with the product that has a similar ASIN code in the Amazon.co.jp sales page in our sales order management process.
The issue that occurred this time was due to a product, which is being sold in sets of 12 within Amazon.com, being sold in single quantities within Amazon.co.jp.
We will take extreme caution in confirming the products in Amazon.com sales page when we are registering our products moving forward.
In addition, we will be taking down the products that are being displayed in Amazon.com.

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We have caused a whole lot of inconvenience for the client and Amazon. (We have caused you and Amazon a whole lot of inconvenience.)
We will confirm the product that the client ordered (you ordered) from Amazon.com with the product with the same ASIN code on the Amazon.co.jp sales page in our sales order management process.
The issue that occurred this time was due to a product, which is sold in a set of 12 on Amazon.com, being sold individually on Amazon.co.jp.
We will take extreme caution in confirming the products on Amazon.com sales pages when we are registering our products moving forward.
In addition, we will be taking down this product from Amazon.com.

元の翻訳
For a limited time period only! Receive a $5 (Canadian dollar) gift card!

Were you satisfied with the support and product provided by our company for the transaction this time?
If you are satisfied, then we request for your evaluation in Amazon.

If we received a favorable evaluation within 24 hours from now, then we will give you a $5 cash voucher via email, which you can use in Amazon, after we have confirmed the evaluation.

We are grateful for this opportunity to be of service to everyone of you who are living far away from Japan.

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For a limited time period only! Receive a $5 (Canadian dollar) gift card!

Were you satisfied with the support and product provided by our company for the transaction this time?
If you were, we would like you to rate us on Amazon.

If we receive a good rating within 24 hours from now, we will give you a $5 cash voucher via email, which you can use on Amazon after we have confirmed the rating.

We are grateful for this opportunity to be of service to every one of you who is living far away from Japan.

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Thank you for the good news.

By the way, since the "street price" you've mentioned is ambiguous, then I want to request for a specific estimate. Please also include the shipping charge for the following cases:

10 sets of Item A
20 sets of item A
30 sets of item A

Thank you.

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Thank you for the good news.

By the way, since the "street price" you've mentioned is unclear, I would like to request for a specific estimate. Please also include the shipping charge for the following cases:

10 sets of Item A
20 sets of item A
30 sets of item A

Thank you.

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I had a look at the prices.
I am very sorry for causing you any inconvenience.

I want to be able to provide a favorable solution.
So first of all, can you kindly let me know the details?

It is possible for me to let you return the product or issue you a refund.

I am making a living by selling via eBay and I am doing business in good faith.
I am strictly abiding with the policies of eBay.

I will provide you with a favorable solution.

I will look forward to your response.

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I had a look at the review.
I am very sorry for causing you any inconvenience.

I want to be able to provide a favorable solution.
So first of all, can you kindly let me know the details?

It is possible for me to let you return the product and issue you a refund.

I am making a living by selling via eBay and I am doing business in good faith.
I am strictly abiding with the policies of eBay.

I will provide you with a favorable solution.

I will look forward to your response.

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Dear friend,

Thank you as always.
With regards to your requested fishing rod this time, it has exceeded the shipping size of EMS so please kindly wait for a little longer while I am checking out the cheapest quotations for other delivery companies.

I think I can provide you with an answer within next week.

As for the previous requests, I will ship the following items today.

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Dear friend,

Thank you as always.
With regards to your requested fishing rod this time, it has exceeded the shipping size of EMS so please kindly wait for a little longer while I am checking out the cheapest quotations from several delivery companies.

I think I can provide you with an answer within next week.

As for the previous requests, I will ship the following items today.

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A is not being sold in Japan.
Because of that, we have decided to continue stocking up on it after the trial sale.
B is being sold in Japan as of the moment.
We are thinking of selling both A and B in Japan.
We intend to buy adapters with the PSE mark from another company.
Is the price of B without the PSE mark at 14 dollars?

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A is not being sold in Japan.
Because of that, we will decide to continue purchasing it after the trial sale.
B is being sold in Japan as of the moment.
We are thinking of selling both A and B in Japan.
We intend to buy adapters with the PSE mark from another company.
Is the price of B without the PSE mark at 14 dollars?

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To the person in charge,

How do you do? My name is xx.
I want to close the store account that I am currently using so I am sending you this email.

The required information are as follows:

The reason why I want to close the account is because I don't think I need it anymore when I was thinking about the future direction of my business.

Sorry to trouble you, but I request for your support.

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To the person in charge,

How do you do? My name is xx.
I want to close the store account that I am currently using so I am sending you this email.

The required information are as follows:

The reason why I want to close the account is because I don't think I need it anymore when I thought about the future direction of my business.

Sorry to trouble you, but I request for your support.

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This email address is a personal address.
I was able to do a good job thanks to the new staff following on my business.
As a thank you, I am planning to give her domestic travel accommodation vouchers for two people (for her and her husband).
And if possible, can you kindly let me know the reason for the lower profit margin of the merchandise?
I want to use it as reference for the conditions on selling the products next time.

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This email address is a private address.
I was able to do a good job thanks to the new staff's support on my business.
As appreciation, I am planning to give her domestic travel accommodation vouchers for two people (for her and her husband).
And if possible, can you kindly let me know the reason for the lower profit margin of the merchandise?
I want to use it as a reference for the conditions on selling the products next time.

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Thank you for purchasing from us. We are very sorry, but it was already sold in our main store. We are sorry for the inconvenience and request for your kind understanding. Since you have already made the payment, we will immediately issue you a refund. We will be displaying the same kind of product moving forward so you can try to purchase from us again.

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Thank you for purchasing from us. We are very sorry, but it was already sold in our main store. We are sorry for the inconvenience and hope to have your kind understanding. Since you have already made the payment, we will immediately issue you a refund. We will be listing similar products in the future, so please come back again.

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Thank you very much for sending the medela to me before the long holiday during the end of last year.

I want to make a new order of medela, but is it alright if I increase the order to 300 more from here onwards?

In addition to this, the shipping cost of air postage increased since September of last year. But with the prices of crude oil seen to go down considerably starting January of this year, will the shipping cost go down as well?

Recently, the depreciation of the yen is extremely severe and the price revision of the medela can't keep up with this so it would be helpful if you can kindly reconsider this point.

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Thank you very much for sending the medela to me before the long holiday during the end of last year.

I want to make a new order of medela, but is it alright if I increase the order to 300 more from here onwards?

In addition to this, the shipping cost of air postage increased since September of last year. But with the prices of crude oil seem to go down considerably starting January of this year, will the shipping cost go down as well?

Recently, the depreciation of the yen is extremely severe and the price revision of the medela can't keep up with this so it would be helpful if you could kindly reconsider this point.