翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

このメールアドレスは、個人アドレスです。
新しいスタッフが、僕の営業をフォローして頂いたおかげで、いい仕事ができました。そのお礼として、旦那さんと一緒に参加できる国内旅行の宿泊券を彼女に今月中 渡そうと思います。また、できれば 今後 利益率が下がった商材の理由を教えて頂けませんでしょうか。次回 商品を販売する際の条件として参考にしたいと思います。

英語

This email address is a personal address.
I was able to do a good job thanks to the new staff following on my business.
As a thank you, I am planning to give her domestic travel accommodation vouchers for two people (for her and her husband).
And if possible, can you kindly let me know the reason for the lower profit margin of the merchandise?
I want to use it as reference for the conditions on selling the products next time.

レビュー ( 1 )

yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/01/11 00:36:23

元の翻訳
This email address is a personal address.
I was able to do a good job thanks to the new staff following on my business.
As a thank you, I am planning to give her domestic travel accommodation vouchers for two people (for her and her husband).
And if possible, can you kindly let me know the reason for the lower profit margin of the merchandise?
I want to use it as reference for the conditions on selling the products next time.

修正後
This email address is a private address.
I was able to do a good job thanks to the new staff's support on my business.
As appreciation, I am planning to give her domestic travel accommodation vouchers for two people (for her and her husband).
And if possible, can you kindly let me know the reason for the lower profit margin of the merchandise?
I want to use it as a reference for the conditions on selling the products next time.